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Reviews for Demon C.S.I

By : aquarakaiba
  • From nchsmi on January 12, 2009
    I kindof had a feeling that Kagura was the other body found! Thanks for the peek into Sesshomaru and InuYasha's private life! It was very insightful. Such an awesome story, with a really hot lemon. This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    B reading U!
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  • From dela1 on January 12, 2009
    sex over now back to work I like that
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  • From drcomalfy on January 12, 2009
    Ahhh, I wouldn't have expected the SesshouxInu relationship in this (even though it was in this section) until this last chapter. Woot! That was nice ^^ I love "law enforcement" fics (I have two that I really need to update methinks XD) so I'm anxious to see how yours goes!

    I think you could use a little betaing/editing, cause every now and then there's misspelled words and little silly grammatical errors that only the anal and picky would see (like me *cough* X3) but yeah, the story seems pretty good, I'd like to see more interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru though since this, while having originally been InuxKago, was converted to SesshouxInu. I understand that they boys have to be discrete and that the fic is focused on the crime at hand but I think... well what I mean by more "interaction" between them is like, they talk more, give each other looks of "understanding something others don't" (not necessarily sexual), as well as a little more in depth description of the murders themselves, etc.

    Uh, also *cough* Shower sex... is very hard to have cause of the water washing away natural lubrication (at least in the female body) and... the lack of it for a male would probably hurt Inuyasha and, if Sesshou continued regardless if it caused Inu pain, Sessh wouldn't last long at all...*cough*... uh... yeah. Ya know, not that I would know *blush* XXD but WOO! That was hot regardless XD

    I look forward to see what got the guys outta bed so fast in the next chapter! Great job!



    -DM
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  • From nchsmi on January 11, 2009
    Holy shit! I LOVE all the C.S.I show and the Law and Orders! You did an AWESOME JOB wrapping them into a tight InuYasha fan fic plot! A crazed serial rapist/killer on the loose, in a big city! I was on the edge of my damn seat! My heart is still racing! I bet the other victim is Kana's sister Kagura. Question...are InuYasha and Sesshomaru still related in this fic? Or r they just Inuyoukai and Inuhanyou from different families? And, are they mated, or just fooling around with each other?

    I can hardly wait 2 read the next chapter! I hope u update soon! B reading U!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 11, 2009
    hey i love this Csi and inuyasha together both oh are my favz wow what a treat.....please update soon

    and sesshomaru can investigate me anytime.;D
    hahaahahhahahahaha

    with much respect

    Sexy Sesshy
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on January 10, 2009
    ewww a little girl man, Inu is right that is one sick fuck!!!
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