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Reviews for Sesshomaru's Story

By : Judie

From EnteralDarkness on January 20, 2009
I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! Please and thank you!!
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From MourningRaven on January 20, 2009
Hey just so you know that I do LOVE your story and would like an update, I am reviewing again. So.... Update soon!!!

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From Danyealle on January 20, 2009
Holding a story hostage for reviews is not the way to go about things. I also believe it is against site rules to do so. There is a term for things like this, it's called review whoring and is not right. Yes, reviews are wonderful but getting them when you earn them is much nicer than demanding them by holding a story hostage.

On another note, look at your first paragraph... Look how many sentances start with the word he. Though there is potential for this to be a great story, but the chapters need to be longer and more detailed, it needs work and polish. It is my suggestion that you look for a beta. They can help you with such issues and give you hints on how to improve your writing skills.

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From Diamond on January 19, 2009
I like it alot, I can tell it has potential. I have read other works and I know you are a very good writer. Please continue!
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From MourningRaven on January 19, 2009
OHHHH! I like it already! Please update more!!!! With longer chapters! I will be looking for an update soon!!!!!
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From Starlight2004 on January 19, 2009
Great start to your story. I think it is sad at the life sesshomaru has had, I hope Kagome will make his life better. Hoping for more.

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