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Reviews for Sesshomaru's Story

By : Judie
  • From YunaNeko on March 26, 2011
    Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE:D

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  • From sugar0o on January 25, 2009
    i cant help but feel this story is kinda off balanced. You have kags as a slave owner that still acts like one, and yet at the same time she supposedly hates it. If his collar keeps hurting him when he speaks, why has she not ordered the collar to allow him to speak or simply get him a new one and get rid of the other, why cant they just be cut or melted with her own powers. Beyond this, its kinda weird that you would have them all so wild yet tamed at the same time, i mean really, one enraged daiyoukai could take out a whole village full of people. and i cant think that sess would easily be able tot ake over land having been a slave all of his life but the first "10 human-like" years of them. i dunno it seems a bit far fetched, not unbelievable but the story seems to be lacking things to cement this as a viable possibility.
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  • From sysclp on January 25, 2009
    This almost looks to be heading in the direction of a Kagome/Silver pairing instead of Kagome/Sesshomaru. Is that your plan or is the story just taking a detour that way before Sess is back in the picture? Thanks!
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  • From MourningRaven on January 24, 2009
    Good chapters. It feels strange to have Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha and their relatives have English names. If you want japenese names try 20000-names.com you can find names and meanings from around the world. I hope this helps!
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  • From ANON - paulymoon on January 23, 2009
    Gran trabajo, me encanta tu historia.(Great job, I love your story)
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  • From Starlight2004 on January 23, 2009
    I'm so happy that Sesshomaru is going to give Kagome a chance. I hope that when Arrow go's to get Sesshomaru he wont hert Kagome. Love that story. Please keep up the great work
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  • From Starlight2004 on January 23, 2009
    That is so sad about InuYasha. But I happy that Sesshomaru got to free him. I hope Sesshomaru will still be happy with Kagome. Great story please keep up the great work.
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  • From MourningRaven on January 22, 2009
    As I am happy you updated. I do wosh you would continue woth the story. I feelf like Kagome is very OOC. She would never be that mean or cause pain on another even if they were a slave. I can't wait for the part where Kagome heals of treats Sesshoumaru to something and gains a little of his trust, or at least curiosity.
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  • From mareepoole on January 22, 2009
    update soon
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  • From NaomiNightshade on January 21, 2009
    I love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on January 21, 2009
    Wow. Now that there is a little more to the story, I think I am starting to get into it. Update soon. I want to know what Kagome is going to do with this very scared Sesshomaru. LOL Good story.
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  • From Starlight2004 on January 21, 2009
    I love your story. It is so sad at Sesshomaru had a bad life before Kagome came into his life. I hoping that Kagome with get him to open up to her soon. Hoping for more
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  • From ANON - paulymoon on January 21, 2009
    I like this story so far and I like your writing style. Keep going :)
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  • From sysclp on January 21, 2009
    Poor Sess, he just can't believe things will be different with Kagome. Interesting you chose "constrict" for his subjugation command. I have see that one used in at least two others fics before where he was a slave. Thanks and update soon!
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  • From MourningRaven on January 21, 2009
    I am happy you updated! And I must say I am happy to see your humility. You really are a good author. I do agree with Danyealle that you might want to get a beta. I hope you update soon! This is a GREAT story!!!
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