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Reviews for One Over the Other

By : SesshyBitch
  • From Haterofkikyou on April 18, 2021

    I think it’s safe to say that this story will never be finished. It’s been 12 years since it’s been last updated, and the author has forgotten about it.


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  • From angel23 on July 19, 2014
    Please update soon?
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  • From LadySesshomaru on May 02, 2010
    there's more right???? RIGHT???
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  • From angelnomiko on January 27, 2010
    wow that was awsome i love it .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From rox4787 on November 14, 2009
    uh man just when it was getting good please please please please please please please update soon cant wait to read more
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  • From darkswordjedi on September 19, 2009
    cliffhanger in a serious way!! finish the story, it is great so far!!! (and more smut; need to see more smut, and put koga in here somewhere!!)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 21, 2009
    Can you finish the the story "A Broken Soul" please finish this story?
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  • From Hollowichigo26 on February 15, 2009
    Omg please update. I have to know what happens next. Your story is awesome!!!!!!
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  • From nuntia on February 09, 2009
    God, you´re moving awfully fast and you jump from on drama to the next. It´s like a dreaded soap opera. I can´t stand your Kagome, such an immature girl. Everyone is behaving just unreasonably, I can´t take you as a serious author. Everything bad that could happen to someone you packed into five months of Kagomes live. And stop posting complete songs, you´re on AFF and no one wants to read the full length. A few lines are OK but not everything.
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  • From RadioActiveOrange on January 26, 2009
    You have a really good story! The only thing that bothers me though is the fact that your song lyrics take up soooooo much space. To be quite honest, I don't even read the song lyrics. I just scroll right over them to get to the talking. Maybe you could consider not putting so many lyrics into one chapter and/or not putting them in there at all?
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  • From sugar0o on January 21, 2009
    I really liked this story but i must tell you that i think that chapter 2 moved WAY to fast, its like you jumped from one bit to another, chapter 2, had what could have been 3 smaller chapters in it. Anyway, i think also that it wasnt well expanded why Kags was a bit upset, or why Sess was so mad at her, really she's preggy, they are crazy. so really he's at fault for being so mean to her. anyway! love this!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on January 21, 2009
    OMG she miscarried, oh god poor kagome. Update.
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