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Reviews for Challenges and Oneshots: Lemons by r0o

By : sugar0o

From Iorieth on February 05, 2017
Number 10 was epic

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From ANON - Killercandycane on April 13, 2013
i thought the ending was the best part :3 it didn't bother me, just found it funny.
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From lara5170 on June 21, 2011
I love all of your stories on all the sites I have read them. I enjoyed many of these 'Challenges & Oneshots', as well. Well,I have to admit I wasn't crazy about the one where he kills Kagome in the hot spring. I absolutely LOVE this one the most & I wish it was longer with more details. It's one of my all time favorites, the 4 part story with Kag/Sessh where she turns into an Inu I have questions that I don't think I'll ever know the answer to but I've got to ask= When they asked Sessh to help calm Kagome down,in the very beginning, when she woke up red eyed with her inner beast wanting to kill Inuyasha & he'd been fighting her for 3 days. Sessh tricked Inu,by getting Inu to tell him he could take anything but Tetsuiga(his father's fang) & Sessh said 'are you sure anything?' & Inu agreed not knowing that Sessh wanted Kags. When Sessh fought her to make her submit & she transformed into a huge black Inu. When she returns to her humanoid form it says she has a fluffy onyx MokoMoko,in the cave he explains that only Tai's (or Dai's like him)have them but,it was never mentioned if Kagome was an Tai. So I wanted to know if she had a Mokomoko & if she's an Inu Taiyoukai????
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From Vyper on June 08, 2011
I liked this first oneshot with the two lovers fucking each other like crazy at the football game. That was hot. I will have to read more later.
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From lara5170 on April 10, 2011
I've read this before & I loved it this time as well as the 1st.I don't know if I mentioned this the 1st time I reviewed or not,but when Sessh came the 1st time to 'help' make Kagome submit & ended up taking her as his own Mate there were 2 things that were mentioned at the time of the 1st fight but never again.The 1st time she was fighting Sessh after her transformation & her 1st time changing into her(Kagome) beast form 'the large black shiny Inu with pointed ears'.Both things were mentioned only during that 1st battle between Sessh & Kagome,either by the writer or Myoga,the flea.The 1st thing mentioned that it was a battle between the Dai & the Tai-now I know it was said that Sessh was the Dai,as he'd surpassed his father when his body produced the Bakusaiga,but it was never mentioned if She was an inu Tai youkai(I don't know if I'm right,but it seems a Tai youkai is more powerful than a youkai).The 2nd thing was mentioned after Sessh made her 'submit' & she transformed back into her humanoid form, it was said that she had a black mokomoko.Once he'd taken her to the cave to 'Mate' & pup her it wasn't mentioned again. I also want to mention that neither of these things change the fact that this is a great story & that I only mentioned them out of my own curiosity.
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From lara5170 on January 31, 2011
I have no idea how you eating yogurt turned into this unless you didn't have a spoon & actually ended up eating it the way she did.You should eat it more often
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From lara5170 on January 31, 2011
alright....having a cheating husband watching your kids while you're out,only to come home & find that he left them alone,vulnerable & allowed them to be killed-too horrible to think about,leaving same cheating husband alone & unprotected when he's vulnerable-too good for him,taking same husband on his night of vulnerability,using something medicinal & strong to knock him out for 2 days,stripping him naked & taking any weapons away from him,covering his body in freshly killed very bloody small animals & using miko powered cuff,straps & chains to tie him to a tree in a Youkai infested forest with a sign on him saying 'hanyou who allowed his own pups to die, free meal'-much,much better,being accidentally pissed on by Sessh-bad, having Sessh take you even though your covered in his urine-better,becoming his Mate for life-even better,having Sessh strip you,take,mate you & pup you-life changing.................all in all- might've been worth being peed on by Sessh accidentally.
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From lara5170 on January 31, 2011
does that mean after her nap & he gave her his oral presentation that she finally told him that she was from the future & he was the one who she had given her first oral thing to & that he in turn told her that it explained why when she returned that time he could smell himself on her & in her????
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From lara5170 on January 31, 2011
So far I enjoyed all of the stories except the one where Sessh raped & killed Kagome. This last one was nice but I wish it had been a full story of her being pupped & him sniffing to see if he could tell how many there would be & if he planned to keep her in the cave once he pupped her I was wondering where she would birth them & if he would be the one to care for her & see them birth .I'd like to have seen him change & come to love Kagome & to see his pups born with awe & be proud & happy with his heir.I'm dying to know since he was the only pup born from his parents & Inuyasha was also a single birth I wonder if all 4 pups were from one litter when he knocked her up the 1st time or if she had pups more than 1 time.I also would have liked to know if they ever figured out how Kagome became Inu all of a sudden & what her markings & powers were. I was also wondering if they were ever able to find out what her lineage was. Sessh's true form is a silver inu with kinda long floppy ears & Kagome's true form was all black with pointed ears & when she became human when Sessh got her to submit originally she had a black mokomoko & I can't help wonder what happened to it after because when he took her to the cave with the spring it was never mentioned again & when they were fighting before she submitted it was mentioned that 'while the Tai & the Dai fought for dominance...' If Sessh is powerful enough to be a Dai Inu youkai & Kagome being so powerful that Sessh was shocked at her strength & power when they fought & she'd been fighting for 3 days already & then the fact that only extremely strong youkai can transform into their true forms...did that make her a Tai Inu Youkai??? where was Shippo?? & I would've liked to read about him showing up at his castle with his new Mate,Lady of the lands & his intro of his Mate & then his intro of his pup or pups & heir...I don't know if they were born seperately or together.
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From ANON - evilpinatag on June 07, 2009
hahahahha no it wasn't freaky! It was really good. You should make a continued portion on this because it's super original! Great job!
i really wana know what happens on the cloud now lol
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From laylathehellady on February 18, 2009
i luved the domination chappie! You seem to like kaga... Something for kags and sesshs pup. Me likey your fic! O.~
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From Shawndra on February 16, 2009
I can't begin to express my joy in all of these stories. All were exceptionally good, but some better than others. I hope you add more shorts or perhaps a full story. The last one was my favorite.

With much respect,

The Prince of Madness
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From tannicmonkey on February 10, 2009
Oh my.
I think you should have left VooDoo its own story.
Just reading the one chapter... It would be a great piece to read!

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From tnew78 on February 02, 2009
God I love this first one! You always rock my socks, rOo. And Kagome's mouth in this, just splendid. Perfectly splendid. Of course, I'd probably be screaming the same thing if I were being f*cked by Sesshoumaru, too!

LC
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From Reymond on February 02, 2009
I like oneshots with a true little story and a lemon as you did. Your lemons are good enough, maybe too short ? Yet I�ll read the following chapters with pleasure !

Being french, I would like to give you the correct sentences without mistakes that you wrote in the VooDoo story: �Je veux vous baiser. Voulez-vous coucher avec moi ?�. And the translation Kagome gave isn�t exactly the same : she said, translated in french : �Je veux vous baiser. Venez au lit avec moi !� Hope it helps�
If you could read your stories again, I think I saw some mistakes here and there, and it�s not so nice to read when mistakes catch the eye�

Well, if voodoo marionnettes could exist to make love with, mmmmmmm !!!!!! Great idea ! Thank you !

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France

Merely Truth

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