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Reviews for Encounter by Sensei and Talon

By : salomewilde
  • From SoulMore on June 05, 2014
    FAN!~
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  • From nurdgurl714 on July 10, 2011
    Miroku is such a whore. ;)
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  • From LouisAlaska on October 10, 2009
    You know, I thought that it'd irritate me reading a story that toggled back and forth between two point of views but I can't say that I did. It was actually really interesting though I was a tad put off by the word, "dogdick." I don't think I've ever even -heard- that word before. But yes, I hope that you continue this, it seems to be an interesting dynamic. Good job you guys.
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  • From ANON - peyaluna on July 01, 2009
    *purrs* you two always write the best smut - and i can hardly await sess making good on his promise. (yes i´m a perv who´s into knots. sue me)btw, i had no problem at all to follow the switching POV´s, and thats with english not even being my mother-tongue.
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  • From ANON - anon on March 04, 2009
    Please, please, please do a follow up of this! I want Sesshomaru to keep his promise. It was magnificent as you stories always are!
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  • From pseudohanyou on February 16, 2009
    Mmm, I can't get over how absolutely fucking delicious this fic is. Best Valentine gift ever.

    Now, to address the other "reviews": Firstly, Talon's response was not a counter-flame. It was a statement of facts and it's laughable that someone would take offense to that and get their panties into a bunch about it. Also, suggesting that you two perhaps need a beta was about the funniest goddamn thing I've seen in a while.

    It's clearly stated that the fic is written in alternating paragraphs. I don't see what's so hard to follow. =/ Take it back to grammar school: 1,2,3,4, etc.. To say that it was hard to find a pattern is ridiculous because the pattern is clearly STATED IN CLEAR WORDS BEFORE THE FIC EVEN BEGINS. :o

    READING COMPREHENSION: DO YOU HAZ IT? omgwat

    Maybz not. :[

    And no, it was not polite criticism. It was passive aggressive snarkiness. Again: reading comprehension. I'm also going to go out on a limb here and suggest that Danyealle perhaps should have checked the content of her review before hitting the submit button. It's kinda sad when you're trying to correct someone and you fail at spelling. That just makes your entire point worthless. If it's underlined in red, babe, you're doing it wrong.

    All that aside, I absolutely adore this fic and no, everyone isn't going to praise everything you do with gushing fap because everyone has different taste, but anyone with a sense of what an RP fic looks like would be able to recognize that this is a work of fucking art. Or...maybe anyone with the ability to read properly. :o

    IL you guys. :p
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  • From Pumpkinpi on February 16, 2009
    Great chapter! I hope you decide to do another one with the knot in use!
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  • From ANON - DM on February 16, 2009
    Though the story line is very good the problem is it's very hard to determine who is talking when because you give no break and indication when you switch POV. It's one thing to do talking that way but actions need some indication of who is doing what and when you change POV. I couldn't get through the whole story because of this, it was far to confusing and made it extremely hard to read-thus distractiing from the intent of the story it's self. Perhaps a bit of reworking it is in order and doing something to show you are changing POV then it would be much better. Or get a Beta to help you. That's what they do.
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