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Reviews for Joushou Yokubo (Rising Lust)

By : Luna4044
  • From ANON - evilpinatag on August 23, 2009
    Just saw the art, and it's pretty good. The contrast and balance is good, just like i your story.
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  • From MourningRaven on August 22, 2009
    I think it is great! I really think you should continue with this story! If you think that maybe it is decoming corney, then change it to something else. I hope you do continue with this story!
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  • From rakanasama on August 22, 2009
    AAAAWWWW thats no fair... you have to do more chapters! this was sooo good please!? You can't just end that good of a story at chapter 1!
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  • From Ruuka on March 09, 2009
    That was so cute and hot, and just everything!
    I loved the ending so much.
    Sess is such a softie sometimes ;)
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  • From ryotgurl19 on March 09, 2009
    Hi!
    I would just like to say that I enjoyed reading this story very much. It was fairly easy to follow the progression of events throughout, for which i'm super grateful. However, one suggestion. Maybe for future stories if someone beta'd it for you there wouldn't be as many spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. You're writing style is unique and I enjoy that, however, some of the spelling errors threw me for a loop a few times. Just a suggestion.

    Great Work!
    -YW
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  • From wudelfin on March 07, 2009
    interesting, but why make her an inu considering she has shippo
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  • From jadesanstar on March 07, 2009
    hi i was wondering where this story went ^_^ Hope your going to continue it cause it's a great fic.
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  • From JenLazar on March 07, 2009
    I think this was good. It stands well as a oneshot unless you have a storyline that you want to expand on with this. If you don't already know A Single Spark is now a read only archive. If you have any unfinished fics there you may want to repost here or on Dokuga.com who is a kind of shrine for A Single Spark fans and writers. I was so saddened to see ASS end but I've found many new writers on Dokuga who are extremely talented as well as alot of the writers AND fans who were on ASS. Keep on writing. JEN
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  • From Starlight2004 on March 07, 2009
    I think you did a great job on this story. Here is hoping for more great storys from you.
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