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Reviews for Pride (In the Name of Love)

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From Vyper on April 25, 2009
Lol.......ice cream...... That actually sounds pretty good. Thanks.
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From ladykaa28 on April 25, 2009
Ok I'm not opposed to Sess and Tai being together, but I just don't want Inu left out. A threesome would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
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From FluffyGreenDryad on April 25, 2009
Hi, I�ve been reading and enjoying this fic for a while now ^.^ Each day when I come home from work I check to see if you�ve had a chance to update. I must say, don�t put your health at risk, if you�re not up to it don�t feel pressured to update just to keep your fans happy. I also must confess that I am quite partial to Sairex ^.^ and I am glad to see him continuing in the story.

Your last chapter did make me squirm a bit though, I�m not comfortable with Ses/daddy. But, write the story as you see it going ^.^

I am a new Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha fan which is odd as I confess incest usually does squick me a great deal. I�ve come to like that pairing, no idea why, I�m even trying to write a little Ses/Inu fic or four (since I have 4 ideas to start with), if my brain will let me. I gave up writing ages ago. I truly liked your idea of Seshoumaru�s fake death, and Inuyasha being forced to take control of the Western Lands. I was wondering if I can use that idea in my first attempt? Just starting off that Sesshoumaru was �dead� and that Inuyasha would need to step up. The rest of the fic has no similarities to yours.

After this last chapter of yours I can see Inuyasha�s thoughts:

�Hmmm, Sesshoumaru is still fucked up, but he doesn�t want me to help him. He only wants Dad, probably because he still hates me and the only reason he hasn�t been trying at kill me is �cause he�s still scrambled. Wish I could�ve helped more, �cause I do love my brother, even when he was an ass�I miss the bastard. The old man will be taking over the Lording in a bit again since I�m not worthy and all that shit. No problem there, Feh. I�m not a fucking diplomat or ruler. All this political bullshit has been making me sick anyway. Wonder if he wants his sword back? It is his after all. Fuck, I lived without it for years before Kikyo nailed me to that tree. I�ll survive again. Kagome won�t be coming back, that�s fine, she�s better off where she is. An� Miroku�s all happy with the bird. Glad for it, someone needs to keep that lecher in line. But I�ve no desire to be hangin� around them. Geeze, I REALLY don�t want to be around when the Old Man finds out I sliced off Sesshoumaru�s arm either. Bet he�ll rip me a new one since he loves my brother best and all. Probably�ll go all yokai on me and not even care to know the reason. Not that it matters�always felt bad about that. The only good thing about that zombie-dragon bastard is that he gave Sesshoumaru his arm back. Maybe I should just leave the sword and go�not like I�m wanted or needed here anymore. Though if I do, some dumbass Demon Lord will want to kill me or make me their bitch to make a damn statement or something. Feh. Bring it on. I�ll take �em down!�

Well, keep up the writing and I hope stuff works out for you on a personal level. *hugs!*
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From ladykaa28 on April 24, 2009
I don't know about Sess and Tai seems too freaky to me, but for the brothers to do it is fine. Don't ask me why I just think they are cute together. Maybe I just feel that Inuyasha ie being left out again because he's only half. I know that Sesshoumaru is the one in need right now, but Inuyasha has been in all his life and for their father to prefer Sess over him just because he knows him better won't help him get to know the son he gave his life for. It's almost like Tai is blaming Inu for being born just as Sess did. Neither one is well enough to protect the kingdom except Inuyasha and if he had the backing of his family he could pull this off until they were ready to take over. I see can see all three ruling together with Inuyasha being more like captain of the guard. I still like a Sess and Inu pairing only because Sess is an alpha through and through so is his father. Inuyasha is an alpha, but not as strong as the other two. I could maybe see the three of them together with Inu being a beta to the both full demon and Sess the occassional one to his father just when he feels he's becoming overwhelmed again.

Am I the only one who writes a book as a review?
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From Vyper on April 24, 2009
I sincerely hope that Tashio pushes for Sess to be with Inuyasha. It would be odd to have a son as a mate since that just feels wrong, but it is your story. I think Sesshoumaru needs Inuyasha's 'opposite's attract' personality. Just my two cents. Love the story still and apparantly I need a beta for mine. I don't normally use one though since my story is kind of like a wing it scenerio. If you are winging it you are doing awsome.
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From ladykaa28 on April 23, 2009
You left Inuyasha out of this chapter, but he needed a break. Ok I knew you were going to try to kill off Sesshoumaru with everything that he has been going through. Now that he is whole again it would be nice to have all three of them in the same room for a few days just as a family to bond. Tai has missed so much of his sons lives that he needs to play catch-up, Sesshoumaru has been hurt to the point of him trying to die to make up for the things he thinks are his fault and Inuyasha has been lost in the shuffle and is now the acting lord of the west. If Sesshoumaru was much too young to take on that role then Inuyasha is way in over his head. If they continue to use Inuyasha as a frontman so to speak then no one will know that Tai is back and Sess getting back to normal.
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From Vyper on April 23, 2009
I hope Sesshoumaru will be ok. I also hope that the demons coming for him get what is coming to them the bastards. I am very glad Tashio is alive and well. He will take care of this nonsense with Inuaysha.
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From tearsofblood2u on April 23, 2009
I have been following your story and absolutely love it! The way you weave all the complex characters and their personalities together is wonderful. Nicely done thus far! :)
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From ladykaa28 on April 22, 2009
Ok just a little confused on who the new person is and why is he interested in Sesshoumaru. Taisho has a funny side. Should prove interesting.
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From satterb on April 22, 2009
I can't help but wonder if Sesshomaru would get better if they were somehow able to rid him of the claiming mark? Call me weird, but it has weighed on my mind heavily since he got it. I love this fic, this will be my first time reviewing. I just recently began reading it and I really love how you update so quickly. Thanks for all your hard work!
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From Vyper on April 22, 2009
I am gald that Inu No Tashio is understanding of the two brother's relationship. I do hope that they become mates. It would be good for Sesshoumaru to know pleasure and love in such a way from someone he trusts. I also hope that Miroku and Sairex can bring Tashio back to life. I like calling him Tougaou or Touga because the writers of the series for Inuyasha thought of using that name for him, but stuck with just Inu No Tashio or Inu Pappa. I figured since they thought of the name why not use it? Still Tashio works.
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From ladykaa28 on April 22, 2009
First - I know people always say sorry when they hear about something bad happening. So I won't say that not that I don't, but instead take all the time you need to get your world spinning in the right direction again. Though I am enjoying this fic it will never be more important than your real life. If writing will help you cope then do so, but not for us or to make us happy.

Second - It's aboput time Miroku didn't ask if someone would bear his child and he still "got some booty". It will take a lot of work for Sesshoumaru to get back to normal, but now that Inuyasha has some help running the kingdom and working on that brotherly bond won't be so hard. Sesshoumaru is still trying to impress his father I think by dressing the way he use to. I like the fact that you have added their father to the fic to help set things in motion. One question he doesn't plan on staying dead so how will this affect the west, the other kingdoms and who will head the family? Tai, for lack of better name, has already started doing things without thinking. Not saying it's bad, but a definate load off of his sons.
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From Vyper on April 21, 2009
Love the lemon! It was juicy and ripe. Can't wait to see what happens with Sesshoumaru and Inuaysha with their father back. Thanks for the update by the way. Been waiting all day dabbling in my own mess of a story for yours to update.
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From ladykaa28 on April 20, 2009
One down and two to go. They just need to start really talking and maybe un"scramble" Sesshoumaru's brain. I know I'm pushing to "start the healing process", but I feel so bad for him that I want him back to the old Sesshoumaru. I like Inuyasha, but he is not the leader type that has to be diplomatic and reserved. This has changed both of them and so far only making Sessohumaru angry is the best way to help him back. But is this change going to make a better Inuyasha or not?
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From Vyper on April 20, 2009
Sairex and Miroku are busy with the "Let's Get It On Song". Hope to see a lemon in the next chapter. I also am glad to see Inu No Tashio back. I love the interactions with Inuyasha and his Daddy. One issue though, Sesshoumaru is never going to get that board out of his ass at this rate as long as his Lord Father is about. I am sure however, that Inuyasha will be more than happy to examine that little problem later on to insure that Sesshoumaru's board is not completely stuck in there permanently. Great Chapter!
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