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Reviews for Angelus

By : TwilightAlien
  • From Reymond on June 06, 2009
    Wonderful ! I can't wait to read how you'll put all the fantastic possibilities the link they share is oppening in the story !!! Sure, he's far from realising that's love he is feeling... Will you put more lime in next chapters ?? It was so special, I'd to read it again !!
    Thank you for your story !
    Au fait, pourquoi Naraku veut-il Kitana ??

    Your french reader,
    Salut !

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - Amalthia on June 06, 2009
    Your story is fantastic. :3 I love it, and can't wait until the next chapter comes out. It just makes me so happy to know that there are still good fan-fiction writers out there. :3 They seem to be disappearing. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - lunajen on June 01, 2009
    I just had to tell you that i absolutely LOVE this story!! And i can't believe that you only have 9 reviews! Come on people!! This is an amazing story, and totally original.. I have been reading stories on this site for quite a few years now, and this is one of my favorites. I'm checking every day for an update. I would love to sit here and cry "update update update", but i know that you can't rush perfection ;)

    Just keep up the amazing work!
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  • From Reymond on May 29, 2009
    Mmm a delicious return to health for Kitana, and a strange feeling for Sesshoumaru ! I saw it coming, and I like the story ! He is so hard to let himself feeling more, to understand what it is he is actually feeling toward Kitana... I hope things are going to evolve pretty well between the two brothers, and I hope the two lovebirds will soon jump in relationship !

    Thank you for the fun,

    Merely Truth
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  • From Reymond on May 29, 2009
    Wow ! The battle has been beautifully described, and her search through the nest to find the children and save them was well written !
    Quel suspense ! Merci !
    And thank you, we didn't have to cry too long believing she was lost...

    Merely Truth
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  • From Reymond on May 21, 2009
    Arghhhh ! you're mean ! what's going to happen ??? I hope Sessh will sense her soon enough and help...
    Please, HURRY !!!
    Thanks

    Dur, dur d'attendre !!!

    Merely Truth
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  • From Reymond on May 18, 2009
    Hello ! I find your story very good, with a Sessh in character and Kitana very charming... (and strong !) I wanted to try the story because of the summary, but the yuri aspect wasn't very appealing for me. Now I understand it's only a passing time in the plot. Being french, I say that your english is well enough good, and I saw only three wrong written words ; I assure you that you can be proud with your work ! (In chapter 6, "Here your words, Sessh..." is surely "Hear...").
    I like stories with OC ; do you know "I am the moon" on AFF ; read it !
    Thank you for your story !

    A french mother and reader,
    Bonjour de la France !

    Merely Truth
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  • From Pumpkinpi on May 02, 2009
    Kitana intended meal looks like it wants her for a midnight snack instead. I wondering if she will have her buffet or will the lake youkai have a bite to eat until a larger meal comes along? Can't wait to find out!!!
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  • From butabara on April 20, 2009
    Hey!! Its me, your faithful beta!! Welcome welcome, good luck, and again, awesome work.
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  • From Pumpkinpi on April 17, 2009
    So when Kitana tortures and kills her prey to feed, she's torturing herself by subjecting her self to their memories and experiencing the horrible joy they have when they commit those henious acts. That's seriously disturbing to say the least! When she showed Sesshoumaru these images the way she sees them he learned that though he is a cold blooded bastard most of the time, he was a saint compared to those she killed. He actually experienced raping a little girl that remind him of Rin. The worst part was he experienced the joy the rapist felt when he violated the little girl. That's going to hunt him for the rest of his days just like Kitana is hunted by terrible memories. Really interesting chapters I look foward to the update!!!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on April 11, 2009
    Great battle scenes, they were extremely detailed! And I can't believe Sesshoumaru shot of his volcano in his pants just from spying on the two in the hotspring, LOL! I guess he is still a growing teenager. I thought he was going to join in on the fun, I bet a part of him wished he had! Again loved the battle scenes (I'm a major action movie fan). Look foward to an update!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on April 02, 2009
    This story is very interesting and is a creative crossover! The movie aliens gave me nightmares when I was younger, now it is one of my favorite sci fi movies. With Inuyasha being one of my favorite animes,I am vastly enjoying this story. I hope you decide to continue writhing it:-)
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