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Reviews for Cherry Bomb

By : Asphy
  • From ToriYummemiya on July 05, 2010
    oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooossssssssshhhhhhhhhh......... ooo kohaku!! and rin!!! its just so perfect!!! and sess is gunna meet the parents lol woot!
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 01, 2010
    I Love this story, it is very intresting. I can't wait until what happens next, plus has kagome been using condoms or birth control? oooooooohh lol Keep up the good work! ~Kat~
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  • From BlueDragon on June 28, 2010
    love, Love, LOVE the new chappy! Rin and Kohaku are SO cute! I still love how the little Rin is a beer drinker, lol. Kudos and thumbs up! You're getting really good at making the different characters perfect for each other. When they meet, it's *hears angels singing in aww* amazing lol. Well done and I hope to see a fast update! TTFN! ((previously tHePeRfEcTcApRiCoRn))
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  • From ANON - SRPerson on June 24, 2010
    Great update! It was so cute! I love the way you wrote Rin out, and now Kohaku too! You're someone after my own heart!

    Update soon!
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  • From ToriYummemiya on April 30, 2010
    wahh u still havent written any more!! wahh i want to know what happens lol i cant talk much i supose i cant talk much, i havent written anything in a while either. but plz write more!!!

    yours psychopathicly-
    ADT
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  • From ANON - Tory on January 09, 2010
    *whimper*.. *sniff*.. why is there no more chapters yet??? i wanna know wut happens! plz hurry and write more!! omg sesshomaru is so fucking sexy. he's my fav char on inuyasha. that whole 'mine' thing was really good too. ur an awsome writer and u really need to write more!!!

    forever spaztic-
    Tory
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  • From flameofthenight on December 29, 2009
    Wow it drives me crazy when I come across stories like these. Excellent plot (considering I'm still on first chapter but had to review asap) but enough grammatical mistakes to drive me up the wall.
    You really need to decide what tense you're working with. I'm getting major whiplash trying to adjust. Fixing that in and of itself would clear up more than half of the mistakes.
    Also, I hope you explain this later and if you do then forget I mentioned it but, as youve got the plot in an au, modern day setting ...why did you keep Inuyasha and Sesshomaru as demons? Either its a world in which demons are a common thing (in which case you should have made it clear the first time you talked about it) or its a world that makes no sense. Please clarify.
    As it is I suggest you get a beta because one could really fix up some problems. If you already have one fire your old one and get a new one.
    And because so many people these days think that any critisism of their story is in fact a flame let me clarify:This is not a flame. This is a constructive review by someone who thinks your story has great potential...it just needs some work done on it.

    Happy Holidays.
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  • From ANON - sallysour on December 23, 2009
    Oh i just love this story! it makes me giggle! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - thatsjustit on December 19, 2009
    hickys! FOTCL!
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  • From tnew78 on August 30, 2009
    Okay, this fic has been staring at me for some time; begging for me to read it. And for some retarded reason, I just kept putting it off until the other day. I'm both glad I put it off (I had a lot more to read!) and upset with myself as it's a damn enticing story line. I'm loving Sango's character in this; her party-girl attitude and comments is just smile invoking. Sesshoumaru as well, but who couldn't want the yummy stud you've portrayed in this. I am eagerly awaiting an update as I want to read more about the progression of their relationship and all the juicy stuff it entails. Very nice job! You've got a fan.

    LC
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  • From ANON - Luna4044 on August 17, 2009
    It has been a long time since I have seen a good sess/kag work fic on here. Im hoping that since you have already captured my attention that you wont forget to update!!! Lol, I know your prob busy, but I just had to let you know that you have yet another reader following your work. I look forward to seeing your next twist to the story and reviewing again.
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  • From ANON - paulymoon on August 02, 2009
    GREAT!!!!! super AWESOME story. ;)
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  • From ANON - ash on August 02, 2009
    "Are you f@#$ing kiding me?" that was the best! an i love the way you revamped the characters esp Rin and kikyo
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  • From SilkenOrgasm on July 30, 2009
    *chuckles* Good one Kag's! lol. Reading and waiting...Excellent Chapter!
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  • From ANON - lanier on July 30, 2009
    Wow, that Kagura is really evil. I hope she learned her lesson and I hope that Sesshoumaru can get things straightened out. Cant wait for more.
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