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Reviews for Surprise! Kagome's a What?

By : AirFox17
  • From kougasbitch on May 12, 2009
    i would love it if you have lots of chaps. short or long..tho i think i would prefer long...but the story is coming out well...maybe you so have a lemon dealing with sesshomaru and kagome in their true forms!!!! That would be awesome!!!!!
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  • From SnowWolf on May 12, 2009
    Good job. in all honesty i prefer longer chapters, but each writer to their own devices i say. i wish i could see what kags looks like as her demon self. pls if u have a pic let me know where to find it.keep up the good job.

    Ja Ne,
    Wolf
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  • From kikyoslovergirl on May 12, 2009
    ooo i like this story lots so far, i would rather shorter chapters that get here sooner but thats just me
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2009
    Nice story! The whole thing with Kagome turning demon may be old but also amusing!

    One thing you should think about though; Don't change the POV so much, it's rather confusing and it breaks the readers concentration.

    Update soon!
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  • From butabara on April 30, 2009
    wow...i...actually like this...hope to see an update soon!
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  • From redrubycutie on April 14, 2009
    I love this story cant wait till next update
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  • From blueeyedinufan on April 13, 2009
    This is a new twist. I am eager to see what kind of trouble the 'beasts' get these two into. Great job writing, hope to see more soon
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  • From MourningRaven on April 13, 2009
    I like it keep it up!
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  • From Fourshotchild on April 12, 2009
    Well, I'll continue to support! It always sucks
    when you start a story and don't receive much input.
    Going through the chapter once, I didn't see any
    grammatical errors. I thought it was lovely. You did
    put 'irritate' instead of 'irritable'. Other than that
    I think the story is coming along nicely. You should
    add a little more description just because the plot
    seems to be going a little too fast, but that's just
    my personal opinion! I can't wait to see how Inuyasha
    is going to react to all of this. Poor little guy. Well,
    good luck and keep on truckin'!
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  • From Fourshotchild on April 11, 2009
    I just finished chapter three and I loved the
    comedy. I think Kagome's beast is cute, and I
    have to admit that I've never read a story where
    Kagome has her own beast. Still some grammatical
    errors, but like I said before, I'm sure you'll
    catch 'em. I'm also curious to see what Inuyasha
    is going to do with this new (kinda) courtship. I
    assume their going to get together because this is
    a Sesshomaru/Kagome section. Meh. Well, continue on
    with your story and good luck!
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  • From Fourshotchild on April 11, 2009
    I just finished Chapter Two "The Change" and I
    thought it was great! There are a few typing errors
    but once you read through it again, you'll see 'em.
    (Ex. "He as he found he") I love where this plot is
    going also. I adore Kagome demoness stories (and I
    think already mentioned that)! I can't wait to read
    chapter three!
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  • From Suniko on April 10, 2009
    This story is starting out really good. I would like to see more so please update soon! Keep up the good work.

    Suniko
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 10, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From rakanasama on April 10, 2009
    YAY!! i love the fics where Kagome becomes an inu demon ^_^ and now there is someone finally writing it well!! woot!! keep going update often for me?
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  • From Fourshotchild on April 10, 2009
    I too like Kagome turns into a demoness stories. I
    find them entertaining and fun. I think you have good
    potential but here are a few suggestions. One, you should
    lengthen your chapters. I know once you write something
    you get excited and want the world to see, but people like
    length and description. Second, correct grammar mistakes.
    You have 'stair' instead of 'stare'. Third, use spaces between
    paragraphs so your story is more esthetically pleasing. Just type
    < p > together and you'll have it! I hope you continue your
    story and good luck!
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