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Reviews for Strangled

By : Asphy
  • From angel23 on July 14, 2014
    Please write more
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  • From ANON - LadyNorth76 on December 20, 2009
    I hope you plan to update this. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2009
    ^^ You did a great job there !!
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  • From ANON - safs on May 04, 2009
    I think this one-shot was decent, but there were some things that you should consider editing. One is the lack of description of Kagome's feelings. Sure, she was upset, and depressed, but I think you could have gone a little deeper. Also, as an earlier reviewer pointed out, where was her miko powers? The lack of it was bothersome because her character would have been more In Character if she attempted to fight back some more.
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  • From ANON - anon on April 18, 2009
    And where was Kagome's miko power? At least she could have burned him a little. You have a good writing style but this was depressing. And OC.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on April 18, 2009
    it was really good and i wished it wasnt a oneshot....it had my interest peaked.
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  • From ANON - LC Rose on April 18, 2009
    That was really good! You are right about the not too sweet (ha! ha!), but it was a good read. I enjoyed Sesshoumaru's thoughts on his feelings towards Kagome.
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  • From ANON - yamiyo tenshi on April 18, 2009
    That was depressing. Good but depressing, and a good start for another chapter story if you get bored and wanna write more.
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