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Reviews for A Fine Mess

By : Vyper
  • From nchsmi on July 11, 2009
    This story is so deep! Every chapter has a new twist 2 plot, and these damn cliffhangers r KILLING ME!!!!!! It's a damn shame that Sesshomaru isn't powerful enough to resist the collar, and bite that nasty cat whore! I feel so sorry 4 him right now. 'Cause I know that InuYasha will give him all kinds of hell, until he calms down enough 2 listen. It will b very fun 2 watch the united force of the Inu royals! Togaou, Luna, Sesshomaru, and InuYasha plus Kouga too! All ganging up on the cats! Shit's about 2 b MAJOR!!!

    U're doing a great job, keep it up!

    B reading U!
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  • From ladykaa28 on July 11, 2009
    Well Inu got raped by the cats so he should understand what it feels like to do something agaisnt your will. But he is pg and with hormones running like crazy through his body he may just say that Sess wanted it. But first he has to get past seeing his dad and stepmom seemingly trying to make another Sess. It will take all three inus to make him understand and him to keep all three from killing Kouga. Next chapter should be funny.
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  • From ladykaa28 on July 10, 2009
    Ok so now that Luna and Touga have forgiven eachother it's time to work on Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru and do something with the crazy cat.
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  • From nchsmi on July 09, 2009
    Thanks 4 the upd8! This story is da shit! Great job, B reading U!
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  • From nchsmi on July 07, 2009
    Great chapter, I can't wait 4 the next one! Peace out and
    B reading U!
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  • From dianek37 on July 07, 2009
    more please
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  • From nchsmi on June 02, 2009
    Damn! U've been gone for a minute. But this chapter was fire!!!! I can't believe that bastard cat actually raped Sesshomaru's mother!!!! It's just too bad that Togaou escaped too late to save her from that! But, I know the revenge that he and Sesshomaru, when he finally reaches them, will be something to behold! I just hope the countryside will b able to withstand the violence! Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one! Till then...B reading U!
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  • From nchsmi on May 23, 2009
    I think, out of all your Sess/Inu stories, this one is the SHIT!!!!! Kagome and Miroku killed, the capture of the Inu brothers and Shippo, InuYasha's rape, poor Shippo's tail being ripped off, the 3 of them being branded. And, that was all in the first 3-4 chapters?!?! OMG...I can't even being to tell u how much I love this story! Oh hell U got to upd8, and upd8 fast!!! I can hardly wait 2 find out what happens, when Sesshomaru finds out his mom has been captured by those fithy goddamn cats!!!! Sesshomaru should have eaten them all!!!

    Till next chapter~
    B reading U!
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on May 21, 2009
    hey... likin the story. really curious as to how inu is goin to bring out seshou's sealed feelings of love. i love plot n u definitely know how to provide. may i ask a favor? i'm lookin for a fanfic that begins with the inu gang and sesshou playin truth or dare. inu targets sesshou who picks truth n inu asks him if he likes bein uke. sess says yes but that he prefers bein dominant. later sess gets inu back by givin him a taste of what it's like bein uke with his fingers... then inu sess pairing ensues. if u've heard of it i would greatly appreciate it if u told me where i can find it or even the name of it. i've been searchin frantically and can't find it. again lovin the story. my plot demon is chompin at the bit for more.
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  • From ladykaa28 on May 03, 2009
    I know the cats will have to prove that they are better than the Inus, but in the end we all know the outcome. Now what I would like to know is will we meet any of Sess's children and why have they not been heard from so far. With everything that has happened to their father and uncle( not like they would like their uncle, but just by the pure fact that he is family) they haven't been there to help out with the fight. I would think that because they are hanyou that they would be more understanding of Inuyasha.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2009
    woo! :D I must say I think your writing gets better as it goes along. You've seemed to have got more into the story, you go into further depth with the small details that make all the difference. The looks the emotions, they've all become very pronounced and I really adore your story so far! I Hope you update soon.
    Shigure-san
    x chuu x
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  • From aleabeth on April 27, 2009
    I know that Sesshomaru ruts with Inuyasha out of a sense of duty... but it's nice that he takes Inuyasha's comfort into consideration and is gentle with him. Mayhap in the future the lust will be fueled by love?

    :)


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  • From ladykaa28 on April 26, 2009
    This is the way it should be and could always be if Sesshoumaru would just Inuyasha a little bit of kindness. He wanted to train Inuyasha before he took him back to his home and the elders. With the way he has just made love to him as Inuyasha asked him to there was no fighting, insulting or even hatred between them. All he has to do is take that and apply it to how he treats Inuyasha the rest of the time. He needs to be trained on why his demon side is being more cooperative with him. Teach him all of the things that Inuyasha should have known had he "taken on all his father responsilities".
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  • From ANON - dyami on April 26, 2009
    I just started reading this and it was only 7 chapters looked today and it was more I was so happy. This is the best original story I have read in a while.

    Thank you, waiting for more
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on April 26, 2009
    there goes my life but i must say it. sesshou can be such an idiot. he says inu is ungrateful but does he ever try to look at inu's pov. heck no! idiot, self-absorbed prick is just gonna make things worse b/c he can't realize that his contrary ways r part of the problem. take a clue. i'm not saying that inu doesn't have his faults but jeez sesshou can be quite childish himself. i'm gonna stop my rant now since i've hit a few sore points and my life is probably in danger. oh! by the way nice writing vyperbites can't wait for more. n if sesshou is lookin for me tell him i live in alaska. don't know y but i do. k thanks. ttyl! *if i'm alive*
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