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Reviews for A Fine Mess

By : Vyper
  • From ladykaa28 on April 26, 2009
    I guess Sess doesn't realize the full impact of his own actions either. He has made Inu a beta to him and now that Inu is acting like he should, because he is more of a demon now, Sess is acting like a child. He wants what he wants, but when it's giving to him or taken in Inu's case he doesn't know what to do with it.
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  • From aleabeth on April 26, 2009
    Sesshoumaru by the time Inuyasha was done was apparently lower than dirt except dirt had more of a personality.
    I doubt though that your brain will catch up to this fact before you freeze to death.”

    I love those two lines!

    Is Sessh like bi-polar? LOL
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  • From Nekoluver666 on April 23, 2009
    *glomps and noms your head* That made so much more sense and was a lot easier to follow. ^-^ I can't help but wonder just how Sesshoumaru will free Inu Yasha. I can't wait! I'm sure it's going to be good. *wiggles excitedly*
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  • From ANON - Lady D on April 23, 2009
    Think beta
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  • From Nekoluver666 on April 22, 2009
    I love this story to pieces, but it gets a tad confusing at times. It would be nice if you would put lines between breaks. Like, when it goes from a hallucination to reality put a dotted line in between those paragraphs if your transition permits it. *scratches head* I hope that makes sense. If not, I'm sorry. I fail at describing things. ^^;
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  • From knightkat on April 21, 2009
    What I really like about this one, is the way Sess and Inu keep having delusions of escaping. Makes it intresting to read, but realistic at the same time.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on April 21, 2009
    i knew u were headed that direction. poor inuyasha... i hope he kills them all, no delays. people like them deserve no mercy. neways great plot. til next time.
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  • From Dumplin139 on April 21, 2009
    I'm so excited. Can't wait to find out what happens next. will Inuyasha reconize Sesshomaru and Shippo? Or will Sesshomaru's plan be his end? So many questions. Please don't keep me waiting too long.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on April 21, 2009
    yes go get'em inuyasha......you have one delicously wicked mind and i just love it....please keep up the good work...thanxz
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on April 20, 2009
    hmmm... not ur usual plot line. is this one gonna be angsty. gotta luv how sess won't help inu (sarcasm). curious to what will happen next. ttyl!
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