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Reviews for The Importance of Being Kept

By : WhisperingMoon
  • From BlueDragon on July 13, 2010
    LOVED the new chp 17 update! Way to go Miroku! I'm interested to see how Sango, being his mate now, will be affected by his life-sucking ability. Oooo, and Inuyasha is such a shithead, lol! I hope she gets him good! lol. Great lemony-limes, btw. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - inugirl018 on July 13, 2010
    I SUPER love this story and it keeps getting better very time I read a new chapter. But sometimes how u just leave the chapter like that it makes me set at the end of my chair till the next chapter comes out and I really hope its soon because I need my fix lol. Ur doing a good job don't stop
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on July 13, 2010
    AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!! I actually squealed OUT LOUD when I read this chapter!!! SOOO GOOD!!! OH MY GOD!!!! GO MIROKU!!! SESSHOMARU YOU GET IT ON!!!! InuYasha... GET A MOVE ON!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From BlueDragon on July 13, 2010
    Okay, so I just started reading this tonight and OMG lol. It's freakin' HIL-arious! I have to start out by listing my fav parts, lol. I nearly died when Miroku told Inu that there were moments in which his brain stopped working for him, and he was like "huh?? wha??" Yeah, I was dying, I kid you not. Dying. I thought it was hilarious when Kag first met Shippo as the big balloon and started unconsciously squeezing his cute cheeks and freaking out when he transformed like "surprise, te-he!" I was also laughing my ass off when Sesh saw Rin ON the bar and nearly died when you had her saying "I used to be a modelllll!"
    There are quite a few grammatical errors that make me re-read some lines, but it's easy to catch back up. And I quite honestly don't really care as a reader; just thought IN CASE you didn't know, that they were indeed there. Oh and your transitions suck. Sorry lol. Even just a couple of spaces to separate would help. It's sometimes hard to follow when you're reading, for instance, about Miroku and Inu being dorks and taking a breather from their run and then the next line is Inu taking a shower. I hope you take that positively. I'm not trying to be rude, just honest.
    It's still pretty well written and easy to follow with an awesomely hilarious plot! YOU are a genius, lol! I loved it when the girls were like "screw you and the horse you rode in on!" and went shopping to spend all their money. That made me laugh when they maxed out the cards and were like "oh darn, would ya look at that" lol, it was awesome. ANYways, enough with my rambling. I hope this helps your writers ego and lights a fire under your butt to write faster and get an update out ASAP! Take care!!
    *~*Evility*~*
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  • From ANON - vixen on July 13, 2010
    damn this is getting really good oh god please update soon i so cant wait fro the next chapter
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  • From ANON - vixen on July 11, 2010
    ooohhhh very nicely done i cant wait till next chapter please update very soon
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on July 11, 2010
    FINALLY ONE GUY STEPS UP TO THE PLATE!!! Go Miroku, you sexy incubus you!!! WhooHoo!!!! Sesshomaru oh my god.... And nothing with InuYasha and Kagome!!! C'mon ur KILLIN' me here!!!! You writing rocks I can't get enough!!!! Love this story, praying to Kami that you'll add the next chapter soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - QtNico on July 11, 2010
    Thanks for updating once a day. I loved this chapter. The scene between Inu/Kag was hot. I can't wait to see what happens between Miro/San and the continuation of Sess/Rin. Can't wait for tomorrow :)
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  • From ANON - vixen on July 11, 2010
    ooooohhhhhh to good come on you have to give us more but nice way for kagome to get even with inu please please update soon
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on July 11, 2010
    Sesshomaru: CHILL THE HELL OUT!!!!
    Rin: Nice try!!!
    InuYasha: STOP TRYING TO SCREW KAGOME!!! unless ur ready to be Bf and Gf, STOP!!!
    Kagome: I understand completely. InuYasha is a sex beast and u can't control urself. ;-)

    Love this story it gets better and better!!! But I'm waiting for the Miroku/Sango after party fight!!! THATS gonna be either nasty, steamy, or both!!! ;-]
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  • From malayah1490 on July 10, 2010
    LOVE UR STORY JUST ONE THING U SHOULD MAKE UR CHAPTERS A LITTLE LONGER BUT OVERALL GREAT STORY LINE PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - QtNico on July 10, 2010
    Uh Oh. the girls are sooo in trouble. This was a great chapter to see each character cutting loose. Thanks for updating today I kept checking the website for the next chapter :) Can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Dimepieceleo on July 10, 2010
    this story is so good I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, I check everyday for an update.
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on July 09, 2010
    OH SNAP!! The girls are in TROU-BLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Still, they maxed out the cards... Hehe... But still... I feel bad for the guys who were with Sango and Kagome...
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  • From ANON - vixen on July 09, 2010
    very nice i cant wait to see what happens to each girl oh i bet it will be good
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