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Reviews for Fateful Encounters

By : Lina03
  • From Fourshotchild on June 22, 2009
    I just finished reading chapters 1-3 and they are
    quite marvelous. I love the dialouge and characters.
    I only wish the chapters were longer. I kept wanting
    to read more.... -pouts- Oh, well. Please continue
    writing on "Fateful Encounters" and I'll definately
    continue reading.
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  • From takusnow on June 21, 2009
    I do believe that this story will turn out to be wonderful. Hope that u update more often and keep up the great work.
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  • From beliefinkakashi on May 15, 2009
    Over all I liked what you've got.

    It went a bit fast. Some advice: Would a rape victim talk constantly without sobing or whiping away tears. A way to show this is to break up the speach. "....." Kagome's shaking hands rubbed her wet face. "....." Try to put yourself in her position and how you'd react to the situation.

    Its an interesting story, I hope you update again soon.
    Good luck
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