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By : Ladygraywolf
  • From Animedevildog on September 12, 2009
    I like the use of Cherokee in this story. One thing that I have noticed is that a lot of Cherokee sounds quite similar to Russian. When you consider that the Native Americans origionally came from the Siberian Steps and just crossed over to North America during the last Ice Age, I should not be suprising that there would be similarities. Especially since (I have heard) that Cherokee is not too far removed from the origional language they all spoke.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on September 11, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter complete!

    I like that you have introduced not one but the possibility of two other languages. Gaelic is a lyrical language, and a perfect choice for the healer of earth to be singing. Cherokee is an interesting laguage as well, and another good choice because of where the story is set, and because of whom it is that is using it, being part native and all.

    I do wonder why Shandara doesn't like to be called Holly? I'm sure that you will inform us, your devoted readers, when the time is right. I wonder also, about it being so easy for Shandara to have "destroyed" her enemy. Ah ... that was only a "scouting" party, to see how much damage was caused to the shifter because of the previous days attack/battle.

    As I have mentioned previously, your story is captivating. The moment I realize that you have added to Desperation, I forget whatever my original reason was for returning to AFF, and MUST read what you have added before I get on with whatever it was that I came here for, if I can remember what it was.

    Your gift continues to shine through, and I am eager to read more. If you are hurt or sick, as you mentioned pain medication, please take he time to get better. We will be here awaiting your return, for however long it may take.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on September 07, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter.

    You have a gift, and it is rare to see outside of a book store. I could feel Shandra's pain as she was experiencing her instinctive terror, and then her confusion and upset after she "snapped" out of her fear.

    You have been doing an excellent job on establishing Shandra's weaknesses, and how she has a high "breaking point" as you put it, as well as how stubborn she is in fighting the "destiny" that has been handed to her by attemping to not allow Inu Yasha's pack to fight in her battle, worrying about more possible innocent casualties.

    I am looking forward to your next chapter, and whatever surprises it is that you have coming.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on September 06, 2009
    Jesus! This was one powerful chapter. It brought out a lot of emotion in me and I found it difficult to read because of it. I'm glad I did though. I can relate to what Shadara is going through, having been hurt myself. Thank you for this chapter. It was, in a way, a healing experience for me. *hugs*
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  • From Skunktail on August 31, 2009
    so here i am, 5:04am EST, just finishing your collected works titled "Desperation" and i smile, laughing to myself as i do what i promised myself not to do, staying up all night reading...
    i smile fore i know that i will remember what i have read here, and the collection of words you have gathered together, it fills me with warmth knowing that others will read this, and feel as i do.

    but i do weep, i weep because there is not enough, not enough to quench my thirst, i hunger for more of this story as i hunger for life, i indeed will be watching you, and i hope to hear word of more.

    in my final thoughts it strikes me, the lack of writing of this quality, this magnitude; on this aptly named adultfanfiction site pains me, a story not of debauchery, but of love... pain, of blood and steel. you give me hope, and i hope for more.

    [ps: not enough hugs in this world so i thank you][modified for typo's >.>]
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  • From Animedevildog on August 31, 2009
    Once again, I am a happy man, now that I have read some more of this wonderful story. I can go to bed now finally now that I have read this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on August 30, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter!

    I could feel the emotions as I read the chapters as though they were my own. You have a very talented gift, and I still can't wait to read your original story. I'm certain that it will be just as well written, thought provoking, and it will pull on the emotions as this story has been able to do.

    As I said, you have a wonderful gift. I am honored that you have shared this story with everyone here, and that I have had the pleasure of reading what you have posted so far.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on August 27, 2009
    Another excellent chapter. Thank you. I look forward to continued updates. To give you an idea of just what a good story means to me, this story is the first url I put into my fiv folder once I recovered my computer. (a place of honor ~.^)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2009
    interesting story... like it so far... nice that inuyasha and kagome are going to be mates with shippo as their son... then sesshoumaru being a good big brother... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on August 19, 2009
    HOT DAMN!

    I can't wait to read your own story if this is the pre-view! I can hardly wait ... but I will wait.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on August 18, 2009
    Thank you for the new chapter.
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  • From Animedevildog on August 14, 2009
    Excellent! Please keep them coming. At some point, I'll have to share my writings with you. Speaking of writings, I ned to get to work on my own fanfic again soon.
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  • From Animedevildog on August 14, 2009
    Chapter 25 was too short! I want more! I am wondering about how Fawn got certain information. What are your plans for the rest of the story? Please post again soon. I check EVERY day (usually several times a day actually) This is one of my favorite stories.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on August 11, 2009
    Damn! Still one hell of a great story! I agree that you don't always need a lemon to "make" a story, and yours is perfect the way it is!

    Question? The original characters of yours, are they from your book that you are writing? If you are posting chapters to your book anywhere, or have a book published, or the like, I would be VERY interested in reading it!

    Keep up the fantastic work!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on August 09, 2009
    Thank you for the two chapters that you posted. I found them very enjoyable.

    You mentioned that you are writing a novel. I would be most interested in reading it when you get published. I too am writing a novel, (just started it very reciently) and hopefully, I'll be able to have it published by one of the bigger publishers.
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