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Reviews for Strength

By : djserani
  • From Starryice on May 20, 2019

    Great story so far; please update & finish soon!!


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  • From ANON - Rachel on April 18, 2015
    Beautiful story!! is this it or is there more to it?
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  • From seriana on May 12, 2014
    continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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  • From xtremereddragon on March 01, 2010
    beautiful!! more!!! please
    !!!
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  • From hidaritoki on October 14, 2009
    Thanks for the hard work. I enjoyed the story.
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  • From dragongirlcv on August 16, 2009
    update update UUUUUUPPPPPDATE!!!! XD PPPPRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP??? LOTS AND LOTS OF SUGAR! *Begs and Bribes pathetically*
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  • From BlackMaiden on August 06, 2009
    This is a very well written story. The build up and the explanation of the plot is very well written with the right amount of description for imaginative purposes. A few minor errors need to be worked on such as grammical and sentence stucture and, to be true to the 15th century japan, some of the details in the scenerio of the castle. Such things include: the bedding. There wasn't any four poster style beds in japan. The only bedding being that of a futon. High society would have raised futons but if you wanted in to be set to have the same bedding, then list the import, somewhere in the timeline, in which the Lord recieved this type. Also bells were not used to have the attention of servents. These matters were taken care of servants always close on nearby walls or just outside the room. I believe, in some instances, they used gong like items to gather attention of servants as well. Other than that, you should study the structure of japanese style palaces in fudel error of japan, if you would like to be more accurate. I think some homes were several stories but most likely a single story so to have full breese ways for the summers in japan, especially the warmer ones of edo. Being that this is a demon castle, it is very good that you make it different than most japanese homes. These are only suggestion if you want to be more accurate and only should be taken if you are trying concieve that. I do, however, like how you set up the castle, and if it your wish to keep it different, than it is as good as it can be for a demon home.

    You have done very well and I am looking forward to reading your other writings. Kudos and good luck. I hope this all helps you and also gives you encouragement to write more. Besides, i need some good stories to read!

    BlackMaiden
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  • From dragongirlcv on July 31, 2009
    VVVERY well done!! Is there going to be more?? It would be a shame for such a talented writer to leave the story at that. XD
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on July 25, 2009
    Yea I'm so happy :) I loved this chapter I can't wait for her to have the pup soon, please update as soon as you can
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  • From Vyper on July 25, 2009
    This is really a cute story. I am glad Sesshoumaru changed his mind about hanyous.
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