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Reviews for The Departed

By : ryotgurl19
  • From ANON - Krimson Kitsune on December 15, 2016

    Yes it's good.  Where's the rest?  Please update.


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  • From Fourshotchild on August 24, 2009
    I liked the second chapter. It filled in allot of gaps!
    I'm so happy Kagome wasn't raped. I was sitting on the
    edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does.
    How long was she locked up and how did the panthers get her?
    I'm super curious! I mean a human can only live for two more
    weeks without food and water. Huh. Well, I look forward to your
    next chapter! Good luck!
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  • From Starlight2004 on August 22, 2009
    WOW I love your story. I'm hoping she is going to be alright. Hoping for move please keep up the great work.
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  • From lukymiko on August 22, 2009
    Interesting. I'd like to see where you plan to go with this.
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  • From Sesshoumarulover21 on August 22, 2009
    Wow those two chapters were incrediable! Very great idea I can't wait for more so please update as soon as possible!
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  • From Starlight2004 on August 14, 2009
    I like it. I would love to see where it is going. You have done a great job at getting your readers in to the story. When I got the end I was like "no there has to be more" Please keep up the great work.
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  • From Fourshotchild on August 14, 2009
    Intersting beginning. I think you have a few holes to
    clear up. I just don't quite understand what's happening
    to Kagome. She just vanishes without a trace and is in
    hell (or something like it)? The group seems to be aging
    so she must be missing for sometime. I'm just little
    puzzled.... I hope you continue forward for some answers!
    (And, I love long chapters! Hint, hint.) Good luck!
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