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By : Waterunleashed
  • From ANON - Forgotten Echos on October 12, 2009
    Well, another great chapter! I wanted it to last longer lol. I never want it to end. :) I am slightly impatient for Sesshomaru to stop bullshiting around and let Kagome know what's really going on, but I understand that it is his annoying and stubborn personality, so even though it makes me go grrrr, I gotta be patient. You are an amazing author. I was getting crazed in waiting for this chapter. I would go and check it everyday. I jumped up and down and told my hubby when I saw you had chapter 8 up. lol He said I was crazy, and then he left me alone to read it. Loved it! I eagerly await your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on October 12, 2009
    ...ah...now I'm getting as frustrated as kagome is. *wines* come on! Let us in on some more info about the past. Have kagome "remeber" something! Gr. Plz??!! anything?? *puppy eyes* and update sooner, as its driving me insane with being left in the dark.

    I think kagome should have muttered under her breath about "sit" ting him. hehe. just cause I'm sharing her frustration.
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  • From ANON - lb on October 12, 2009
    I am so entralled by this story, it is so unlike anything I have read before and I cannot wait to read more. You have a great skill for writing, Kag and Sess are very vivid and what ever is going on between them is killing me, I can't wait to learn what it is!
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  • From ANON - Forgotten Echos on October 02, 2009
    Sorry about not reviewing as soon as I usually do. College is hectic. My neice is having her baby girl on the 5th. Which is just in a few more days. This is her second kid as well. Her first was a boy. I am pregnant again as well, but I am not due until April 12th. I had a girl the first time, but I don't know what I am having this time yet. BTW if you want a friend or another beta use my email and contact me on yahoo msgr. I love reading your story. It is so well thought out, and well written. I get on here every day hoping it will show that you've updated. You have an amazing talent, and I can't wait until you get into the really mushy stuff. I can't wait until Sesshomaru brings out her hands of power. My question is, is it going to be like her dad, or really cool like mom and grandma? Personally I hope the latter. Well I am looking forward to the next chapter. I love that you make them long because I don't want it to end lol.
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  • From ANON - kera on September 25, 2009
    wow i really like this story i trully hope u finish it. i would be so thankful if ud update me when u post a chap. plz and thanx

    kera
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  • From beliefinkakashi on September 25, 2009
    I find this truly amazing! I love how you integrated Fae into the plot/story! Well done!
    I dont read your author notes so if you have mentioned this... its my bad. If your really interested in reading about Fae, the Sidhe or the Seelie courts -which is the same thing mind you...- Read from an author called 'Karen Marie Moning'! She has a whole highlander series dedicated to Fae and Druids. Definitely read her Fever series.

    Okay back to your story.
    My heart goes out to Kagome. Everything has changed. And knowing that she is the cause just makes it worse. At least she has Sesshomaru!!! I hope they hit it off! I wonder if there is a rule that prevents Kagome from being with Sesshomaru?... that'd be horrible.
    I can totally see Kagome being lost in Sesshomaru-goodness... *purrs* He should be one of those Death-by-sex-youkai! I could live by that... or die...

    good luck!
    You got me all excited for the next chap!
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  • From ANON - Neo-crystal on September 25, 2009
    Hmm. Well now. Isn't that interesting? Now we know some back story & what happened with Inuyasha. I like the fact that u update fairly quickly, especially since this is such a unique & intresting story!!
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on September 22, 2009
    well..........damn! I have never read a story like this before. damn. PLEASE update soon! I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to read this story to its end!!
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  • From ANON - Forgotten Echos on September 17, 2009
    Another great chapter! I loved it! I hate when I get to the end. I don't ever want to stop reading it. It is so well writen. You have a way with story telling that pulls you in and you can't help but be on edge and wonder what's going to happen next. I eagerly await your next chapter. Thanks for a great tale!
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  • From ANON - evilpinatag on September 08, 2009
    OH no! What did she do?1 Demons are alive? oo this is going to be good!
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  • From ANON - Forgotten Echos on September 08, 2009
    I loved your newest chapter. I felt such heartache when reading it. I think that you are a wonderful writer, and I can't wait until your next chapter. I will be patient though because I too am going to school and will be up to my ears in college papers. Eagerly awaiting your next update...but until then adiuex!
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  • From TANick123 on September 07, 2009
    Aww, I was a bit teary-eyed as Kagome said her goodbyes, especially to InuYasha. Although I don't like that pairing - they seem more like close brother and sister than lovers - I have nothing against InuYasha as a character. Now, I look forward to the changes that were wrought by Kagome's stay in the Feudal Era. As for constructive advice/criticism, I really haven't seen anything to complain about in this story. My pet peeves tend to be the poor use of grammar, spelling and punctuation, as well as plot lines that make absolutely no sense. I haven't spotted anything that merits pointing out, but if I do see something that needs correction I'll say so.
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  • From TANick123 on September 07, 2009
    Poor Sesshoumaru! It must be pretty embarassing for a demon like him to take such a thrashing! I'm very curious to know why the demons attacked him and stole his organ - and what the demons-only organ is. As for the butterfly, I'm assuming it's marking is a symbol of Kagome's hidden Sidhe heritage. Good job so far for weaving together an intriguing beginning to this story.
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  • From ANON - Forgotten Echos on September 07, 2009
    Sorry an error occured when I reviewed the first time. Here is the original review. Again sorry for the trouble.Ok so now I am completely and irrevocably enthralled with your story. So it is my guess that Kagome and her family are royalty in this new setting. So is Celeste going to find her and chew her out? I have a feeling that there is more to her and Sesshoumaru's relationship than mere guard. Am I correct in this assumption? I am very certain that you have become my favorite author. I am eagerly awaiting your next update. Until then Adieux!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2009
    Ok so now I am completely and irrevocably enthralled with your story. So it is my guess that Kagome and her family are royalty in this new setting. So is Celeste going to find her and chew her out? I have a feeling that there is more to her and Sesshoumaru's relationship than mere guard. Am I correct in this assumption? I am very certain that you have become my favorite author. I am eagerly awaiting your next update. Until then Adieux!
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