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By : MadMaxxCoyote

From uniqueindividual on September 16, 2010
Wow, really bad time for Naraku to come.
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From myperversities on September 15, 2010
OMG, OMG, OMFG!!! Holy shit I've stayed up late just to read this cuz I love you soooo much and you leave me with a cliffy like that?? I think I'm going to cry. What an awesome job, well worth the wait. And sorry to hear about your troubles, seems you just can't catch a break huh? Well, I hope that the next chapter comes VERY soon because with an ending like that...I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!

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From ANON - Dimepieceleo on September 15, 2010
Ok so I have never reviewed this story before, I found it while u were on hiatus. I am in love with this story, finally someone has inu tell kagome about that DAMN NECKLACE!!!!! I hate that everyone makes like he wants it. I love YOUR SESSHY personality, he has gone through an awesome transformation. BUT I have to ask how come sesshey can't tell what is going on with inuyasha, like when they went for a walk after his fight with the girl? Keep up the story can't wait for the next chapter.
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From tatoosh1 on September 14, 2010
Hey now Maxx, I know how hard it is just to keep getting up and breathing when you lose those you love, and real life can be a grind. But really? Suck it hard? i've waited patiently for this story, loving to read it as it appears tears and all for the sorrow and despair of Inuyasha and his life. Appreciating your talent and the depth you've given the characters, not some shallow yaoi fangirl looking for sex. A modicrum of respect as your audience would be nice.
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From kitmistress on September 14, 2010
ok when Inuyasha was telling his friends (can we call them that? really?) anyways telling them about his death you made me cry and i dont cry a lot when it comes to stories hell i rarly cry in life...so this is an amazing story and I REALLY want you to continue! please please please do and update soon..its one of my faves thanks for the update...sorry to hear your family..I hope youll be ok and i send my condolance (sorry i cant spell)
thanks again for the update
Kit
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From Madamdragon on September 14, 2010
Poor Inu I hope things work out in the end.
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From ANON - kale on September 14, 2010
No good sir you, suck it.
And write me another chapter. With no dead Inuyashas.
I have spoken.

Just kidding. LOL.
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From uniqueindividual on September 01, 2010
Oh No!!! Inuyasha can't die!!! He needs to hear more embarrassing stories about Sesshomaru and learn about living in a safe house with family and completely make up with Sesshomaru and and stuff!!! Please don't let him die! Let it be like, his human half dies, but his demon half still lives! Or something! this story is so creative in the plot and background and character developments that it just can't end!
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From Shapooda on August 05, 2010
I'm too excited for this story D: I keep rereading your chapters and refreshing to see if you've updated D: I'm in love with you're writing, it's all fantastic; just to let you know you have a fan C:>
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From ANON - Lemony Goodness on August 02, 2010
Loved the story. Please update soon
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From ANON - Latex on August 01, 2010
Oh please oh please let Kagome die, go home, or just leave them the f*** alone when they met up again. I do think that the human side of the story has been left out a little, but that's better for Inuyasha, they (mostly Kagome) just aren't good for his health. Mentality and physicially.

Hmm...wonder if Koga is going to 'punish' Miroku for leaving outside of the palace. Thank God for imaginations ^__^
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From ANON - Kittylove on July 31, 2010
God, did it take me a long time to read this story and God do I wish that you didn't stop at what could be the most important update of the story. I can't wait to read what else will happen and continue the whole Miroku/Kyogua pairing. I love uke Miroku stories. ^__^

Can't wait for the next chapter.

BTW. Kagome's a fucking bitch. Wouldn't mind at all if she died. Not at all. Love Kitty
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From ANON - Edible Goodness on July 31, 2010
I am glad that their is one more person to add to the 'Kagome's a bitch' squad. I think at first I thought that her sitting him was amusing, but after awhile I started to think it was downright abusive and degrading. I'm glad at least one person out their agrees with me.

I really, really, really don't want Inuyasha to die. I don't really think he will in this story, well unless he's revived somehow, but I think the whole dying more than once thing might start to get to be to much for him. Poor little puppy. Then again, if it does hurt, big brother Sesshomaru could always make him feel better, that a nice possibility.

The only thing I'm not into is the whole Sesshoumaru being the uke thing. I like the idea of them switching that position and I like seeing Inuyasha as the uke, it's cute to me. Any hint on if he's going to be the permenant seme or what?

Please continue this story and know that you have one more person waiting for your next fantastic update
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From ANON - Baron on July 31, 2010
Decided to do an official review for 'Its my life' instead of just leaving a small one at your Miroku/Inuyasha fic. Like I said before I love the detail and effort you put into your work. When I start reading I can immediately see the hardwork you put into every chapter and it's a refreshing change for me, especially when you get into the later chapters.

I love that everything seems to happen for a reason in this story. Their are no unexplainable sickness just because you wanted them to be or no sterotypical bad guy. No, the rat lord hates the inus because their father slaughtered his family in front of his eyes. Inuyasha ass hurts because his tails growing in, or at least that's what I hope he would look so cute with a tail!

I love the peculiar way of talking that Sesshomaru and Daigon have. I had only watch the series and not read the manga so I don't know if that's how they talk in the manga or if you made it up, either way I find it charming. I like how you have no flat, one-dimensional character, they all have a story or a history behind them and I like a lot.

I think it's the extra bit of time you put in making your story feel more...fuller with stories of their dad and stories of little Sesshomaru that makes this story something I'll never forget, because these characters, their past, their dialogue, and relationship makes it seem more real to me than the average fanfiction(or sometimes even the average novel. Even published authors sometimes get it wrong)

I'd love for you to continue your work. I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm really sad that Inuyasha may die before he ever really live which would really suck. I'm kind of hoping his demon blood might revive him after he dies and somehow transforms into this new and improved Inuyasha. Complete with sun and demons marks on his skin and a big fluffy tail. Honestly, who doesn't want him to get a tail? If Sesshomaru can get one than why can't his puppy eared brother get one too?

And I love the way you portray Sesshoumaru, you gave him life, feelings, and emotions that are easy to relate to. It's hard not to feel for him you know?

All and all I just want to say thanks for the great job and I can't wait until the next update. Which is hopefully soon. *Cross fingers, eyes, and prays on it*

P.S. I really want Atrius to get a boyfriend. He just seems so cute and I think he'd make a lovely sight getting fucked with his tails bouncing all over the place.

Curse you Imagination. >__
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From ANON - Kyuuka on July 30, 2010
Wow...Poor Inuyasha I'm not surprised he's going off to die but that Sesshomaru's not stopping him when he knows just how bad he can get. I can only imagine what Daigon's gonna do when he said he wanted to examine him.
I kinda hate both of their Youki both of those annoying things are just irritating and just make things worse the ENTIRE time.
I liked the look back on Inutaishou's past and the unknown grandfather which made me cry when he died of a broken heart. Poor old inu just couldn't take it anymore.
I'm trying to figure out why Inuyasha is just, just deteriorating it's like old wounds are just opening up all over. So 250 I think years has caught up finally and hanyou's aren't supposed to live that long or something? So maturity brought on a total break down of his body or is it something that you mentioned earlier when Sesshomaru was talking about how his father said that over 20 years without family and an inu just 'Melts'
Well all I can say is keep the drama and angst and romance coming cause I'm just plain curious of how all this is gonna end. Inuyasha dead and Sesshomaru following soon after in mourning or a miracle cure is found in Sesshomaru's blood and/or youki. Maybe even it is maturity and there's just too much damage from Kagome or something...hmm oh and by the way I wanted to destroy Kagome for what she was doing gods what an annoying girl. Not a Kagome hater but I HATE this one with every fiber of my being. Then there's Kouga and Miroku...odd and I don't think it's gonna happen...Too forward and Miroku seems a bit devoted to Sango or he has a crush somewhere else but Kouga's too arrogant for Miroku and he'd prolly lose his temper and such him into the Wind Tunnel.
Well can't wait for the next installment your a great writer and keep it up!

Ja Ne
KyuukatheTenchiofDarkness
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