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Reviews for It's my Life

By : MadMaxxCoyote

From ANON - Kloud on March 14, 2010
�I know that!� Daigon snapped.

I thought Daigon didn't refer to himself in the first person?
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From ANON - MEMORIETRAIL on March 12, 2010
Oh it was so very good and I hope you do write more
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From lilkkjo082004 on March 09, 2010
Are you ever going to have inuyasha be the uke or bottom? It just seems weird for the wayyyy older brother to be the uke to me is all.
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From aleabeth on March 08, 2010
Authors are they own worst critics are they not?
You did a fine job, don't change a thing. :)
Feel sorry for Inupapa... to feel the cause of your father's death.
Betcha it made him 'grow-up' faster ne?
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From ANON - Clare on March 07, 2010
This story is quite possibly one of the best fanfics I have read online to date. I've laughed, I've cried, I've severely freaked out my housemates as I storm around the house berating a character, there's been parts I can barely bring myself to read, and yet every spare moment since I found it has been devoted to catching up with the storyline. So this is less a review and more a congratulations, as well as a thank-you. Your story has brightened up my days, and I can only hope you keep going strong!
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From ANON - Skye on March 07, 2010
Ahhh! You have gotten me so addicted to this story.
I've been up for two days, unable to put this down. It's amazing how anyone could write this much...You must be well over 1000 pages in this story by now.
Gah I love this story so much! By far, my FAVORITE SesshomaruxInuyasha fanfiction EVER.
I eagerly await your next chapter :3
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From yaoilovefan on March 05, 2010
I was afraid that you won't continue. I'm happy you're still writing! I waited for more. XD although the story about Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's family was hard to get through. But it was also very nice. Congratulation on imagining all that! XD Are you planning on writing what their guards think about Inuyasha's condition? That would be nice. ;) Whatever you're planning next i'll be here to read it!
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From Izzanami on March 04, 2010
I'm reviewing her instead of MM, because I found it here first (although I read most on MM).

I hope your dad is doing better. Don't worry about the quality, I think the quality was awesome! It was a great chapter and I was soooooo happy you updated.

I have been missing this story for so long (though I understood why you hadn't updated lately) and I SWEAR, I had just thought of it yesterday and was hoping you hadn't abandoned it. ( I was thinking of writing you to see if you were still going to write more and how you were).

Anyway, I am SO worried about InuYasha in the fic. I still have my theories about what is happening, which I told you already in reviews on the other site. Poor Inu. Anyway, I loved hearing about their family, it's a part many people leave out from many fics.

I hope InuYasha is not dying (oh, I think I already told you that... sorry (I hate when people tell me things like that when I get reviews, but I'm sorry I just hope he's ok)) but it seemed in this chapter the story of his family kept his mind off the pain, so that's good.

I can't wait to see how things go in the next chapter with the war cry (I love the Inu-like things they do, especially like the bark that Sessh could do but Inu sounded like a puppy). And again, I am itching to see how they are once they get back to the palace. And I am waiting (once again I hate saying things like this to authors) for Sesshoumauru and InuYasha's relationship to hopefully deepen more.

Of course I feel so sorry for Sesshoumaru, for seeing InuYasha in such pain on what normally is his human night. Although, it's good if he gets a better understanding of his brother in the end.

Really though, I loved the family history, I can see so much of both InuYasha and Sesshoumaru in their various relatives. I loved the part about their grandmother, Arne... although you once again made be cry when she died (your fic always makes me cry, but that means I love it, and I do). I can see much of her in both of them.

Well, I hope you and your family are doing well. I also hope to see your updates again because your fic is one of my very favorites, actually I think it's my favorite, but always worth the wait. Anyway, I will wait patiently for the next update the get all giddy when the next appears.

I screwed up my first review bit (in case you get e-mails about it... so apologies for that) and erased it and put up this one (just a few fixes... eugh the writer in me makes me try to be perfect event hough I never am, lol)
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From ANON - sweetestlibby on March 03, 2010
Yay! an update!!!

I hope that your dad will be okay.

This was an amazing chapter. I loved it even though you hated writing it. There was so much family history and it gave insight to your characters.

I can't wait for the next update! I can't wait to see how learning their family history will affected Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's relationship.
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From trystkinkou on March 03, 2010
SQUEALLLLL!!!!!! *huggles the Diagon plushy with removable head she made tightly* YAY an update! I've been waiting and rereading the story in anticipation. I love how Diagon is through here and the past of their great Father shows that everyone make mistakes. hehehehehehehe maybe now it'll be easier for Inuyasha and Sessie to get over some hurtles. but i hate the part about poor poor diagon. *sniff* but still very well done. I'm sorry to hear about your father. *huggles*
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From myperversities on March 03, 2010
Question, who is going to ultimately be the seme?? Do you know yet?? Can I make the suggestion that it be Sessh since he is Alpha...and stronger...and older....less rash...etc. OMG could you maybe make this a MPreg with our little fiesty Inu as the lovely bearer?? He just makes such a good uke. I mean you know all he really wants is love and affection and he would totally calm down (well to an extent) and he would be perfect...mmmmmm, so smexy. ;)
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From myperversities on March 03, 2010
OMG!! So good to hear from you!! And I don't know what you're talking about this chapter rocks...so much info and background to the whole inu clan. But you keep stearing the story away from what is happening to Inuyasha!!!! I mean come on....turns back hanayou on the moonless night??? WTF!! Funny thing is I was just looking to see if you have updated recently the last couple days and today I was like NO WAY!!!! YEAH!!!! Sorry to hear your dad's still not doing well....is there any improvement??? Well, I hope he gets better, I wouldn't wish what you're going through on anyone. I had quite a scare not long ago where my dad had a brain bleed....nothing big but it usually is a forsign of a stroke so he was in hospital on morphine and we all thought that was the end....so while my experience didn't last as long and turned out ok (as he got better) I can sort of understand where your head's at and I wish you all the best and I'm sure I speek for everyone when I say we all appreciate the time and effort you put into getting this chapter out and we are all waiting patiently for more. ;)
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From ANON - jgood27 on February 26, 2010
Love this story please, please, please update
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From ANON - Fabi-chan on February 23, 2010
First, let me breath, second I'm sorry if you don't uderstand very well what I'am writting that's because english is not my first language, I'm brazilian.

Well, let's start: I truly, truly loved the way you described Inuyasha and Seshomaru, until today I never saw a story like that, have all; figth, romance, angst, sex... I only miss MPREG, I need to see Seshomaru with puppies, I need it! I saw seshomaru really accepting Inuyasha... Wow... I loved yours OCs too, all of them! And please give us a truly lemon, I want Inuyasha take Seshomaru... AGAIN! Seme Inuyasha! Hahahahaha... ^^

First I found seshomaru a little ooc, but you changed it during the story. And you're a guy?? Wow I'm glad you enjoy yaoi and write also well. Probably the story will not have MPREG... is so sad...

I'm looking forward to an update and thanks for writing an excellent story ... bye!
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From ANON - Ali on February 07, 2010
I absolutely LOVE this story, every few months I find it again (AFF.net hides it from me, I swear to god) and then I loose it again before I can review! I usually have trouble with stories that have as many OC's as 'It's my Life', but your characters are so vivid and memorable that I've just fallen in love with them! Not to mention your portrayal of the Brothers! I love it! Please update soon! And thank you so much for posting this!!!
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