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By : MadMaxxCoyote

From Nescafevh on November 09, 2009
This is my second review, sorry about the last. I just wanted to add I love your story because to me it's more realistic. I mean I've read other InuyashaSesshomaru stories where it's been I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, I HATE YOU! next chapter, oooHHH we are so in love! I mean come on, two chapters and they suddenly love each other? Two chapters is NOT going to solve at least two hundred years of mental and physical abuse!

In YOUR story you can actually see them working at it, well SESSHOMARU working at it. Building a friendship or love is an constant working process, it's give and take on both sides, now that Inuyasha's more willing it can really begin to start.

I know the quick and easy way is romantic to a lot of people, but a true love or relationship needs work, and here I can actually SEE that work.

Keep up the good work!
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From Nescafevh on November 09, 2009
When's the next chapter? I'm addicted to this story and need my fix. If you need ideas I have one, if you don't want the opinion of a fan, ignore the next bit.

What if Inuyasha continued to change from to the other and back again? After the second or third time, frightened and concerned for his brother and the obvious pain he's going through Sesshomaru takes him back inside and straight to Daigon who can't find how to stop it or what's causing it, however he logically theorizes that since it was caused by Inuyashas' human period, it SHOULD stop at dawn.

Meanwhile all he can do is sedate the hanyou deeply and wait.

He leaves Sesshomaru in the room where he sits by his brothers side the entire night, talking soothingly to him, telling him stories about himself, their father and so on, stroking his mark on Inuyasha if the pain gets too much for even the sedative to handle.

Then, at dawn, he's relieved to witness his brother change to hanyou one more time then stay that way, dropping into an exhausted sleep. When Daigon returns to examine him, he announces he's clear, at least until tomorrow night.

Sesshomaru decides after a lot of thinking that they should leave as soon as Inuyasha wakes up, but Daigon protests they should stay at least two more nights, just in case it happens again. However Sesshomaru knows his brother, he knows the hanyou will be more than pissed if they treat him as an invalid because of what happened and he will want to get moving, even if he goes without them. However the wind elemental has permission to set something up, just in case.

When Inuyasha awakes he is quiet, reserved and not talkative, looking at Sesshomaru strangely and at first it concerns Sesshomaru, thinking he's done something wrong again, but then when he sees the way his brother watches him when he thinks he doesn't see it is thoughtful and peaceful, as if he is looking at his brother in a different light.

And indeed he is.

The conversation they had about Inuyasha being more open with Sesshomaru and 'meeting him halfway' plus the clouded but soothing memories of his brothers actions the night before has Inuyasha seriously considering his brother as different, in a GOOD way. After all, nothing like being cared for when you an weak and vulnerable to make you more open the the possibility and willing to try.

If Sesshomaru is extremely careful of his actions and attitude on the way back, is open and honest, gentle and soothing (but not so much Inuyasha feels babied or like he's being pitied) then chances are by the time they return to the castle Inuyasha will be more open to the possibility of being with his brother longer so they can work on their relationship.

Or there is another way to do it, Inuyasha DOESN'T regain consciousness the next day and Sesshomaru gets them moving back to castle the next day as fast as possible.

Why? Because he wants his brother in an safe and trusted environment while he seeks out the source of two possible ways to save his brother and BOTH lead to a certain someone.After all, wasn't it their father who told him he needed someone to protect? Besides, his inner little Sesshy told him until the two of them were one he would never be more powerful then he was then. How much more in sync can you be then saving and healing your little brother and mate?

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From kisskiss on October 29, 2009
more i need more, i must know what is happening to our little yasha. Very good story I must say I enjoy it and its not totally ooc like some shess-inu stories its belivable that this could happen.
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From ANON - natasha on October 24, 2009
ohhh my god! that was a great story, i really can't wait for more to come.
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From ANON - bunnicle on October 15, 2009
WHY DID YOU STOP THERE?! You absolutely must update soon. Like tomorrow soon. Even better, like today soon! You cannot possibly leave us there! UGH! Cliff Hangers! I'm going to die from the suspense! You are positively evil. I hope you are aware of this fact. I'm going to go sulk in my corner now.
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From ANON - correasthlm on October 07, 2009
What a cliffhanger!!!
I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter,
and just wanted you to knowe that I really love your story, language and characters.
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From mokomokosama on October 07, 2009
whaaah, i want to read the next chapter!!!!XO
luuuuuuuv the story!!!
keep going, i can't wait to know wat happened!!!
(kyaa! and inu is sooo cute, and i love the little kitsune,and,and...i want to read the rest..;)
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From Aalto on October 04, 2009
This is a very very good story. There are a few grammars and such here and there but nothing that can't be fixed.

I'm guessing what's happening to Inuyasha is that his demon side is trying to get rid of the human side, the human blood, that is tainting and slowing it down. Causing numeral problems. I'm guessing this will give Daigon a new clue, a new angle to the mystery that is Inuyasha.

Please please please update soon! This is so very interesting and I can hardly wait to read more.

Also, I'm guessing, that Sesshomaru went to the marketpalce again to find the jewel that Yasha wanted... I wonder if he found it...
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From ANON - kinky shakes on October 03, 2009
pfft,
naked,drunk, Sesshomaru
you have no idea how enjoyable it was to read that ^-^

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From Misforalot on September 30, 2009
I REALLY like this story. I think that the details are well thought out, and the grammer is good. I like Inuyasha and Sesshomaru for two very different reasons. I think that you got what I believe Inuyasha's responses to to every situation exactly right, as well as Sesshomaru's. I really like slow romances and how you are re-aquainting the characters. I also like the lengh of the chapters and the fact that in your profile you mentioned that you would have an ending- even a bad one. I really like your story so much, I put it in my favorites so I can access it quickly. I for one whould like for you to continue your work.
Mykel
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From bloodravyn on September 29, 2009
oh wiow!
what's happeneing to him?!
is his human side disappearing or something?!
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From LadyLaran on September 28, 2009
The pranks were HILARIOUS! I loved it. I can't wait for more. There's one thing I'm confused about. If males mate together, what happens to the continuation of the line? I didn't quite catch that part. And I REALLY hope that what Inuyasha is going through can be fixed. I love the stroy. Is there a way you can contact me when you update? Thanks!
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From ANON - sweetestlibby on September 27, 2009
So i just spent the weekend reading your story and I love it!!! it's so good! and heart breaking! and gut wrenching! Inuyasha has been through so much. I love the Sesshomaru- Inuyasha's memories flashback! I cried while reading it! I understand why Inuyasha hates Rin and it's sooo fitting.

I hate Kagome and that tramp need to die! loved Inuyasha's Youkai laying down the law with her!

Loved the drunken Sesshomaru! Diagon is prefect! He understood that neither was truly listening to each other! I'm hoping that they can get past this. That Inuyasha's health will improve...it's he growing into his youkai and his demonic form? Oh that would be prefect! I love the dynamic between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru and how they have soo much to learn about each other!

Keep up the good work and update soon!!!
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From ANON - fluffiebunny on September 26, 2009
it took me a good long while to read your story, but man was it worth it!!!!

keep up the good work, hope you update soon!!!
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From trystkinkou on September 25, 2009
I must say, coming in so late in the story, this is wonderfully done. I like how you've got poor Inuyasha and Sesshomaru bouncing around as well as the guards. hehehe. But I REALLY love your character of Daigon. Puuurrrrrrr. That's an elemental I'd gladly choose as mate... or even just a physical, lol. Keep up the good work. ^__^
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