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Reviews for Absolution's Pursuit

By : QueenCeaona
  • From ANON - on July 06, 2016

    Beautiful!!

    It was great how you wove everything to fit the original Inuyasha story and just fluffed out the beginning and ending of the Inuyasha story with Sessh's POV. Yasha's past is so sad...from the summary I thought Sessh just killed him off once his dad died (I did hesitate whether to read this) but found their relationship was a bit more complicated than that. Though I hated Yasha dying and yes Sessh did end up killing him but in the end it really wasn't intentional as the poor Inu was quite conflicted himself. Yasha's death though a difficult one to write I'm sure, but I thought you handled it very well.

    Was a bit of a shocker to find that Sessh's dad was a dog, I thought the mythology was pointing to the original ancestors of youkais not actually Taisho. So sad and explained quite a bit about Taisho's actions during his reign.

    BTW Dai does mean big/great. There are a few ways to read Japanese Kanji (Chinese characters) and you're correct! :) It's the same character used in Daiyoukai (not Taiyoukai as many use as Tai is a different character altogether and actually a type of fish).

    There was a maturity in your story that was refreshing and very appropriate. Loved how Kagome knew and accepted circumstances of Yasha's death without the drama. Your story is certainly intense and drama filled but without too much angst - it was just perfect.

    The characters were also very IC and well depicted - Sessh's character developed beautifully. It was great how you nailed Rin's character too. She's a nice cute girl in the anime but in many FFs I find her to be more annoying as she seems spoilt/whiny or caps-lock screaming all the time.  You do a wonderful job of altering the characters to your different stories - your Sesshomaru and Kagome portrayals area slightly different in each piece and wonderfully done.  I've been going through like three of your works the past day - can you tell? I first found another lovely work of yours (Forever Entwined), and been moving through your other works (Scarlet Ties). Although both were incomplete and actually still very short (I rarely read incomplete or short stories as I prefer very long finished ones), they were a delightful read. While I enjoyed this work which was deeper and dealt with darker issues, the other two works show hints of fluff and romance (*yay*) which I'm looking forward to seeing how they'll develop.

    It was a great idea starting and ending with the mythology. You had me in tears several times at the end!

    Thanks so much and I'll be going through your other works (I was ecstatic to find you have quite a lot, and a few longer ones too!) so you'll probably see me popping up again as I plan to go through all of them if possible. Besides, I'll be checking out to see if you have any updates to your ongoing series. Stay well!


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  • From brandypandyxxx on July 12, 2012
    I love love love love love this story, I don't read many and review even less, but this has to be one of my top favs ty so much for writing it
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  • From Pumpkinpi on July 02, 2012
    LOVE IT!!!!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on July 02, 2012
    I think you should give yourself credit! The action, romance, angst and drama! I loved it and the fact that Kagome is so understanding it fits her character. I thought she might have expected something since he was the last to see Inuyasha and the Inu father and Totosai talked to her.She is pretty smart. She managed to get to know him and saw some good quailties worth saving despite the fact that she had and idea that he may have taken her first love away from her. She knew it was an accident (although Inuyasha is still gone) since the brothers had plenty of opportunities to finish each other off and never did. I wonder if she thinks about how Inuyasha would take their relationship? Great stuff look forward to more!!!
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  • From ANON - harpergunbunny on July 01, 2012
    :( i am sad you ended it like that... it felt cut off from the rest of the story, and somewhat out of place.
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  • From ANON - That was on June 30, 2012
    ...Beautiful. This has been the most intimate, loving, and beautiful love making scene I have ever read for any fanfiction (and I have read many). Even the best fanfiction do not hold against your simple heart-warming scene with this two lovers. It was gentle and yet full of passion.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2012
    As much as writers are their own worst critic, I have to say that this reader really likes this chapter. I was certainly surprised by Kagome's revelation about Inuyasha. I think you handled it quite well. As always, I can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From botticelliangel on June 30, 2012
    Great job! Your writing style is good, and you have an interesting story. I honestly didn't think they were going to have sex that fast, but it was passionate. Looking forward to reading more!
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  • From Syrra on June 22, 2012
    I have to say that this is one of the best Sess/Kag stories I have read in a long time. Most stories have a hard time capturing my interest and thus I abandon them a chapter or two in but this story...it hooked me from the very first line and kept me going. I read everything that is currently posted in one sitting cause I couldn't bear to stop until I had to. It is wonderfully written and I love how you can make sess and kagome stay in character. I really hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Miss.Undo on June 19, 2012
    I cant wait for an update!! I feel in love with this story a while back~ (:
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  • From insomniac_amy on June 04, 2012
    I love this story! I started reading it and couldn't stop.
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  • From botticelliangel on May 29, 2012
    Wow. Pretty amazed by all the twists and turns to the story. Good job!
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  • From bloodshound on October 03, 2011
    yup. ty for the update. anyway, baka Kags. Still, it's not all her fault. Who would have thought Seshy would know about mouth to mouth. I wonder how long it will take him to figure out that he's attracted to her.
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  • From lara5170 on August 13, 2011
    I've seen this a few times & today was the day I decided to read it. I have had it written down to check out for awhile.I get nervous when I start to read a story on this site because it seems more often then not when I do start to read a story here,I'd say 8 out of 10 times the writer seems to just abandon the story completely or if they do update them,it's few & far between. There is nothing wrong with writers taking their time,as you can't rush creativity.The problem is that this site doesn't have a means for readers to be notified of updates.Now,I fell in love with your story & I'm going to have to keep checking to see if it's updated . I wanted to ask if this story is going to involve Sessh & Kagome,either,falling in love or at least, getting together in a romantic way? I really don't know what will happen but,I'm getting a bit melancholy. I don't like the idea that Kagome dies in the past & never gets to see her family again,so I'm hoping that Kagome becomes Immortal .I'm also a Sessh & Kagome fan.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2011
    excellent story hope to read more
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