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Reviews for The Demon Child Amaya

By : EvilAnge1
  • From ANON - SP777 on October 15, 2010
    about #31...

    Well, I think you can hold off on reviving the future
    Inu brothers and wait until Amaya defeats Kenchi..with
    back-handed help from her past parents of course. You
    know they won't be able to stand back and let their
    daughter fight alone. :-)
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  • From midnightsweet on July 03, 2010
    not sure. but want to se the fight, but don't know how iun and sess will fit in.
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  • From wyntermist70 on June 20, 2010
    I think you should let them stay dead for little bit more cause there would be so many more people to worry about their future and their pass self. I agree they should meet but not yet if there is a problem that only the futures (inu and shesshy) can fix then yeah but right now amaya is worrying about her own unborn life and her past parents give the child a break, Or just send the past's back home as soon as you can or mix it and bring one of the pasts and the futures self back to where everyone in the past is waiting. I'm just saying you have alot to work with........I don't know if I helped or confused but I'll be waiting for your new update though.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 26, 2010
    about #30...

    Now, that's a BIG iffy question...But in this case it would
    be beneficial, because the past Inuyasha & Sesshomaru can't
    really interfere in anything or they'll disrupt the timeline.
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  • From Darksadow on April 23, 2010
    A very good story so far:).
    I think it cud be intresting so se the old Sesshomaru and Inuyash interact whit there younger counterparts. Befor they have the big batle.
    Cep up the good work;)
    Darksadow
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  • From maegerakawaii on March 29, 2010
    If she revives them, then she will have more allies. The only problem with reviving them right away is that they might just die all over again right in front of her. Is it even possible to have both sets of parents alive at the same time?
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  • From maegerakawaii on March 29, 2010
    Hopefully mommy and daddy will be able to help out their little princess.
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  • From princessbeautaya on March 17, 2010
    i want more please finish and send me a notice.
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  • From wyntermist70 on March 06, 2010
    More more more damn you more lol keep up the great work lol.....can't wait till you update.
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  • From nchsmi on February 23, 2010
    So srry about your broken engagement. But, the chapter was awesome!
    B reading U!
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  • From nchsmi on January 15, 2010
    Thank you! Nice chapter, it was well worth the wait! So, Kouga and Kagura, huh? That's different! Especially, since she's the one that killed most of his warriors. That he is able to look past that, and see her as a possible 'mate', is a BIG step for him! He's just as immature as InuYasha when you think of it.

    And, now we come to the moment of truth. Sesshomaru and Amaya have a duel! I wonder if Sesshomaru will win? If he does, will this be when they will all get to go into the well, and see the future that is instore for them? Or will Amaya be the victor? I hope Sesshomaru wins, and they get to go. It would be sick to have the Inu brother met their future selves! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    B reading U!
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  • From wyntermist70 on January 14, 2010
    NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNoooooo more more I just got a nibble of this great story please more chappies please........................................wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I need more. Oh by the by I love the hint of kouga and kagura love itttttt......but more chappies please.
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  • From Demonskid on January 10, 2010
    I love this story alot, a few.. amusing spelling mistakes though can confuse people though.. I did have a good laugh at this one.

    "Yeah, and she told me that she is in love with him. He saved her life at birth, she was born with under developed lunch and she was extremely tiny for a pup but apparently he has the power to heal and healed her."

    Where instead of lungs its lunch xD it made me hungry too :x

    I say Amaya should stay in the past and kill the witch now. that is just my opinion.

    Though you should go through and re-read your fic to fix those.. funny typos please hurry and update soon I cannot wait to see what you chose for her to do. ^-^

    Thanks for writing an awesome Fanfic
    Demonskid DK
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  • From wyntermist70 on December 10, 2009
    Finish the damn story please I'm like when when when are we going to meet the other kids and what will happen to kagura and kanna maybe she could end up with kouga and have kids too maybe shippo and rin will get together lol sigh........ please with peanut butter on top finish this story
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  • From nchsmi on November 29, 2009
    What has happened to you? Do you have writer's block, or have you fallen and can't get up? LOL...

    But, seriously, where is chapter 28? I'm dying to read it! B reading U (soon)!


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