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Reviews for The Imperfect Love

By : LordYouko
  • From ANON - Silverwing on October 09, 2010
    This story seems like it has a lot of potential. I totally agree with your last author's note; a story about an imperfect, non-stereotypical Kagome would be a breath of fresh air and a welcome read. Please update soon and this seems like it could be a lot of fun to follow! Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Hana-chan on September 23, 2010
    This is such a interesting plot :) I've always thought how it would be if Kagome and Sesshoumaru formed a pair so I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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  • From falien on April 11, 2010
    please update soon i want to know what is going to happen
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  • From ANON - Tori on January 27, 2010
    hoi hoi-

    its really good so far, i read chapters one and two. i'm excited to read more. i read alot of sess/kag fan fics so i can tell u that u got aomething goin on here. i'm impressed. i was too absorbed in the story to be consious of grammatical errors, and that my friend is something. lol i'm a huge stickler for grammar. so it wasnt so bad. umm, longer chapters would be nice, but take ur time. creative and thoughtful writing doesnt come easy, i write too. u just keep pushing.


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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 07, 2010
    I think you have a good thing going so far with this story. Having Kagome as a more realistic character is so rare and I get bored of seeing her personality in the extremes...so WAY TO GO!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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  • From BlueDragon on December 31, 2009
    So far, so good. I like the way it's headed. I'm looking forward to Kagome meeting Seshoumaru!
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  • From InnocentLittleFlower on December 31, 2009
    To get italic print you need to put < i > Instert text < / i > but with out the spaceing withint the bracets I believe to get bold its the same but just change the I to B. This has great potential but im haveing a hard time figureing out what time periode it is weather its moder or based in feudal japan some words you use kinda make you think one or the other so you might want to just clarefy that a little more. This is all ment to help you not to hurt your feelings or anything this seems like it could be a great story just a few tweeks here and there. Cant wait for the next chap hope i helped a little.
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  • From Crysan on December 30, 2009
    i like it so far. can't wait for another update. so please please PLEASE update soon.
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