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By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From jdbbrz27 on September 04, 2010
    That was wonderful I was in tears by the end of it and then a chuckle at the end I loved it. Now seriously how could you have writers block with such an amazing imagination and insight I can't even fathom it from a writer with your talent. As far as the characters being OOC I don't think so not really. If you put people or beings in that type of situation how else would they act it was an emotional time and considering that Sesshoumaru was doing everything he could think of to save Inuyasha and then to see for the first time the kind of pain sweet little Inuyasha whom he obviously has grown to love and even start to love more than himself well how else would he act he isn't without emotion he does show it just not in abudance and he's very timid about showing it just as Inuyasha is about showing pain so if one sees the other than the other will react it's only nature and you did it beautifully. I love the new routine as well it will help Yusha learn to accept Sesshoumaru a little more at least it should especially if they allow him to see Sesshoumaru act a little more loving around Inuyasha. If they see a beloved parent loved by his or her partner then they learn to accept and welcome it just to know that their parent is loved and cared for and by extension in their own unconscience mind feel it extends to them as well especially if that parent shows the same caring through actions and or words that they care. I went through that myself so that one I personnally know about. I love this chapter and the story thank you so much for sharing and I hope your writers block takes a walk off an extremely short pier.
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  • From midnightsweet on September 04, 2010
    you do they have to end. update soon. i realy love this story. so looking forward to seeing how this will be a great family.
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  • From wyntermist70 on September 02, 2010
    Love it a great story I want everyone to be happy I hope inuyasha has a large litter again and please find someone for poor kouga he needs a mate too me bad too. Please keep up this great job love it if you keep a writing I'll keep ah reading lol.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on August 29, 2010
    Okay I have to review again. I reread the story again especially about the part of Sesshoumaru mating Inuyasha and then I read your story in chapter 30 I think I get it now. I hadn't realized it but Sesshoumaru did screw up he did mark Inuyasha without asking Inuyasha at all whether he wanted to be mated to him or not so I can see where Inuyasha had absolutely no choice in the matter at all poor little thing. Not exactly going to convince Inuyasha that Sesshoumaru loves him I know it wouldn't convince me so I can't wait to see what he does next and where you take it. That's what I get for trying to second guess the writer especially a really good writer so I'm sorry about that but I really do love this story and I'll be waiting for the next update. Thank you so much for sharing and clarifying for me.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on August 24, 2010
    Okay thank you for the story and the explanation although still not sure just how Sesshoumaru did it wrong it seems to me with your explanation that whether he asked Inuyasha publicly or privately either way there was no way Inuyasha would be able to turn him down. Unless maybe if Sesshoumaru asked him in a letter without actually having Inuyasha face him. Unless maybe if Sesshoumaru gave his permission specifically that Inuyasha had the choice to turn him down but how would Sesshoumaru or even Inuyasha know that without first reading the parchments. And unless they did know that particular inclusion than Sesshoumaru would have just assumed that Inuyasha could turn him down with out giving permission and without knowing that Inuyasha couldn't turn him down. Anyway it really doesn't matter it's an awesome story and Sesshoumaru would have felt guilty either way. Can't wait to see where else you take this so thank you for sharing and I'll be staying tune for the next update.
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  • From maegerakawaii on August 23, 2010
    The moment when the beta finally died really made me want to cry. It was just so tragically perfect.
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  • From midnightsweet on August 22, 2010
    sweet story
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on August 21, 2010
    This was both a beautifully sensual and seductive chapter, but also a beautifully angsty chapter. If Sess is kicking himself over the mating I can't wait to see what Sess does when he discovers Inu's morning torments. Thank you so so so much for writing this for us. This is one of my favorites to read.
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  • From Cinder1013 on August 21, 2010
    I love this. And please don't let anyone push you-I think the story pace is perfect.
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  • From maegerakawaii on August 21, 2010
    I really hope Sesshoumaru doesn't take out his anger on Inuyasha. If anything he should be apologizing and explaining to his brother. I'm glad the puppies were finally conceived. It's finally time for this couple to heal together.
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  • From ANON - natasha on August 21, 2010
    really great chappie soooo can't wait till they tell the pups and hopeful sesshou didn't mess up again.
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  • From rachaelrose on August 21, 2010
    Hallelujah! Does this mean that Sessy might actually be on his way to *talk* to Inuyasha? Maybe work on figuring some things out *verbally*? I love that he found that passage, because their misunderstandings of each other's motivations is driving me crazy! Never seen such a dialogue-challenged couple!! Sessy thinking he's being so noble and accommodating and Inuyasha thinking he's not worth consulting about decisions and that he has no right to even question Sessy's actions or whereabouts! Arrggghhh!( Though, I love them to death and think this fic is beyond awesome.) :)

    I think it would be great if they could hash out some of the more long-term issues (seriously, the ultimate submission was chapter one & Sessy is just now figuring out how badly he's been screwing up? Arrghhh!!) but I do enjoy the story pacing...waiting for updates can be a killer (even if it's only 24 hrs), but that's beside the point. I like the angst, but feel like maybe Inuyasha could be thrown a bone? A little one? Maybe have his partner next to him in the morning? Even once? Or maybe a raging Sesshoumaru will storm back from the library to catch Inuyasha in one of his fits? Please, please, please? Just a little bone...then the pregnancy horrors can commence. (sigh)

    My 2c. Sorry for missing chapters. Try to limit how often I check updates b/c it's really sad for me when there's no new chapters. Love the ears mating mark, btw. Didn't guess that...my mind was significantly lower in the gutter w/the "get lots of enjoyment comment." ^_~

    Keep up the great and interesting story. I rarely see a story with such fleshed out characters who are so flawed but lovable. The pups are particular favorites.

    Cheers,
    Rae
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  • From midnightsweet on August 20, 2010
    when you put it like that
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  • From jdbbrz27 on August 20, 2010
    I think I may be a little slow tonight but I don't get the ending at all. What did Sesshoumaru do wrong and how for heavens sake. I loved the lemon that was fantastic and very hot. I almost did a little dance when Inuyasha found out he was carrying man I have been waiting for that wow your imagination is really something else I just loooooooovvvvveeee ittttttt. Thank you so much for sharing can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on August 18, 2010
    I love it Sesshu should have Inu's ears as his mark. I love this story and hope to see more of it
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