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From ANON - kenya bell on August 17, 2010
this is awesome!
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From ANON - T'Amara on August 12, 2010
You're a Goddess of Angst and I really approve how you've been handling this story. These are strong, difficult people and they would NOT have easy, trite solutions to the truly HARD problems you've handed them. Mated or not, Inu remains rightfully suspicious of his brother's actions, too emotionally and physically weary to easily believe that his life will become easier, kinder, more loving outside of his children. And your Sess is right on, really trying to do right by the brother he's so deeply wronged and whom he's obviously falling in love with but not able to verbalize his need of Inu, his need for his family. He just bloody well ARRANGES things, quite grandly, with poor Inu missing most of the clues (Inu love, your brother called in the other Dai-Youkai to not only fix you in an amazing ceremony but also witness your mating) and assumes/hope/decides that all will be well. He's very smug, your Sess, and it's wonderful watching Yuusha poke holes in him - and then be a jealous little kid. I'm STILL laughing over the puppy ear mating mark, hooray for Inu!
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From wyntermist70 on August 10, 2010
I love this story keep up the great work I hope kouga finds love too that would be nice so please keep the stories ah coming.
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From midnightsweet on August 09, 2010
when you end like that it feels like something bad is going to happen
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From Pumpkinpi on August 08, 2010
Mee-chan was right, Sessshoumaru's mating mark is sooooo cute! I had no idea what the mark could have been, I would have never gotten any sweet treats:-) Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!
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From ladykaa28 on August 07, 2010
I thought it was cute. Now Sesshoumaru will really have to watch to make sure that he keeps himself in check. Yuusha is not happy.
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From ANON - jdbbrz on August 07, 2010
That was totally awesome I loved the mark on Sesshoumaru so poignant. I loved how Inuyasha was no longer in as much pain although I can't wait till he has no pain it almost hurts me every time I read of how much pain he's in. Yuusha's remark about the mating was totally priceless. You can almost see the smirk that would have been on his face as he speaks a total truth. I can imagine the look on Sesshoumaru's face as he looked at his family about to eat all together my grandfather had that look you could tell how thrilled he was when most of his family was there for the holidays I use to watch him and think he was going to burst with happiness sometimes. I better explain a little though my father died before I was born so for me my grandfather was the closest thing I had to what a father was so I paid pretty close attention to him so I can imagine how Sesshoumaru was feeling. Thank you so much for this awesome story and I'll be waiting to see where you go from here.
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From ANON - Princess Sin on August 07, 2010
how cute. hanyou ears. poor yuusha was so jealous. i bet
sesshomaru wasn't expecting that when yuusha was making
such a fuss about it. and little meechan is just to cute
for words to describe. i just love this story. i can't
wait until the next chapter.
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From TheReapersMule on July 23, 2010
And once again, we are left with this thing called a "cliffy". WtF?! Have mercy on us poor souls would you?! Just make Yasha preggers already and get to the good stuff!!
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From Elvira on July 22, 2010
AAHAHHHHH!!!!

Why stop there!!!!!! I just wish for a long ass chapter to see what happens. This is to good!!!

Update soon!

Can't wait for the pup's reactions!
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From midcat on July 20, 2010
Wow! The mating was just superb! I couldn't have imagined anything so beautiful and powerful!

You truly have a gift, and not in a million years would I dare to tell you to speed up things or change anything at all!! This is YOUR STORY, you are the writer, and so far you have done such an excellent job that to even attempt to try and change any of the wonderful things you have done with this story would be a sacrilege!

Everything has been amazing! Every detail, every word, every scene, every emotion!! You are the architect and you deserve the glory for the story! No one else should complain of how you do your own creation! We are here merely to admire it and rejoice in the beauty of it all!! The way you have done everything is what makes people come back over and over! With so many stories out there, people have many choices, so it is a show of utter admiration for your work that keeps us coming back for more!

This story is addictive and so well crafted! Even the erotic parts are so well done that they incite fire among those that read them! It is contagious!

Once again, I am amazed at your talent and sincerely hope that you will update again soon!! (I know, I am greedy, but what can I say? This story is SO GOOD!)

So please! Let your muses free reign of your mind and update soon!

Thank you again for writing and sharing such an amazing tale!

Hugs:

MidCat
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From ANON - Midnight Cat on July 19, 2010
There has been very, very few times when a fanfic has made me turn around and say WOW! I was wrong!

So, I had to take the time to write this down, because certainly, this is one of those times!! You see, I am a HUGE Inuyasha fanfic whore! I have been devouring fanfics for 5+ years. Every day. I have read thousands of stories and after a while you think you have seen it all and nothing new comes out that can take your mind away, but WOW!!

First, because I have NEVER been a fan of Yaoi. I can read it and like it OK, but never follow a series, or think much of it.
Second, because I I made the HUGE mistake of overlooking this story the first time.
And Third, because I have to apologize (Not that I mind, it is well earned).

Your story has everything a great story needs, a VERY ORIGINAL PLOT, great characters, ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY! And to top it all it has brought forth so many emotions that I can honestly say that I was glued to the monitor, reading every letter, every word, every paragraph, and after each chapter thinking: WOW!! This is amazing!! This is so good!

I remember a couple of chapter when even tears came out!! And that is rare now a days for me!! But the story was so moving, so full of angst, of deep emotions and feelings that run so deeply it almost felt as if I was there and could see it with my own eyes!

Inuyasha's pain, resignation, humility, and extreme love for his children is something that is so deeply moving that I found myself moved to every fiber of my heart!

Sesshomaru is so on character is just impossible not to picture him doing and saying as you write it! It trully is a beautiful story!

And now that Sesshomaru has a chance at redemption it has been erotic and movingf to see how he treats Inuyasha and his insecurities, his fears, his vulnerabilities!

I love the way you portray Inu! He is sensitive, but not a wimp! He can be a strong warrior and a tender sweet loving father and you manage to combine both flawlessly!!

The childrens' personalities are very well done and I love each and every one!

I can honestly say that you have a new fan on me! I apologize for my HUGE oversight, and for the first time since I began reading fanfic, I can say that now I am a fan of Yaoi!!

You made every scene flow beautifully! It was sensually erotic, romantic, and very tender! I can honestly say that I am dying to find out what happens next!!

I will wait with anticipation for your next update, which I hope it will be soon!!
Is there a mailing list or a way to get notified when you update? Or perhaps if you post this story in another site that allows subscriptions I would be very happy to sing up!! Please let me know! Thank you in advance!

Thank you for writing such an amazing story, and for sharing it with us!

Many hugs and admiration:

MidCat

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From ANON - Princess Sin on July 19, 2010
hey you never said what sesshomaru's mating mark was. i was hoping
to find out because i wanted to know what everyone found so amusing
about it.
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From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2010
Wow this story is so awesome I can't wait to read more. BTW, is the mating mark puppy ears by any chance? The way it seems everyone laughed I just assumed that's what it is. Hope I'm righ! And believe you me, I love reading epic stories so I like that its a bit more drawn out. Less sometimes is not more. Keep up with the great work.
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From ladykaa28 on July 18, 2010
Whoa! Wow! Ok I did say that Sess has to work from the inside out, but I didn't think he would start from the bottom. I had a feeling that Inu would start to have feelings for him, buyt wouldn't that make it it harder for Sess to have to work past the love Inu has for him to get to the hurt and pain? I do have a request for maybe a one-shot, two-shot or a short fic about the relationship of Sess and his first born after this story. It would be nice to see how things are between them after he sees that Sess really does love his father and trying to make things better for all of them. You know like the later years.
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