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By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From ANON - Snowfall on July 07, 2010
    Wonderful ceremony. I hope it helps. Oooh, Sesshoumaru mated him in public!? Totally awesome! I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru finally did it, and he did it in a way that shows Inuyasha that he isn't ashamed. Simply wonderful! I wonder if Yuusha will be angry. Loved the detail. I'm curious about the eight pointed star. Could you email me more about its meaning? I know that practitioners of Chaos magic use it as their symbol.

    Anywho, awesome job! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next! *warm fuzzies*
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on July 07, 2010
    this was well worth the wait. i checked out the sighte for the Ganesha Yantra
    and it was quite intriguing. but i guess in your story to make it work. it didn't
    completely purfiy what was wrong with inuyasha. only sesshomaru opening his heart
    to him can inuyasha be saved. i guess this ceremony will give inuyasha more time
    so he will be able to get pregnant. is that why sesshomaru did this ceremony?
    well, i can't wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on July 07, 2010
    Just finished reading the ceremony. I will admit, when I first read that you were going to do some kind of ceremony 'heal' Inuyasha, I was upset. I wanted Sess to realize that it was his love and his caring that was what was needed. Then as I read the piece itself, I realized that you were basically just giving Sess a little more time and Inuyasha a little more energy to make it through the rigors ahead. No more upset. Then I realized that I rather liked the ceremony. I liked that you pulled in the hindi elements (as so many of the things we originally interpret as Japanese had their roots in the Indian subcontinent). The thing I like the most though was the ending where Sess officially bound himself to Inuyasha as his mate. It seemed far more that he was announcing his own binding to Inuyasha than Inuyasha being bound to him. I hope that Inuyasha realizes that and what it really means to him.

    All in all a lovely couple of chapters. Thanks for writing for us!!
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  • From nm1716 on July 07, 2010
    I love the new update and can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - chanii on July 07, 2010
    so happy to read another chapter but you seem so tired...Sending you positive vibes.
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  • From Vyper on July 07, 2010
    It is so awsome that now Inuyasha is Sesshoumaru's mate. Thanks for the new chapter. I really love this story.
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  • From Vyper on June 23, 2010
    It is about time that Inuyasha got something good. I hope that he can be saved by Sesshoumaru. It seems that a mating is needed however even if Inuyasha did not concieve yet. I believe that being mated to Sesshoumaru would at least give Inuyasha some sense of peace and it would let him know that Sesshoumaru did love him.
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  • From Onyxlight on June 22, 2010
    SQUEE!! And update *dances* I love how you planned this all out and I can't wait to see/read the ceremony!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on June 21, 2010
    Oh my god oh my god oh my god. I loved it soooooooooooo much and I can't wait to see how this ritual works out to help Inuyasha. You are so right Inuyasha would never had agreed to be the center of attention like that or would not have accepted all the accolades from the other demons without a little sneakiness on the part of everyone else and lord knows they would all have agreed and willingly helped so this chapter was totally awesome. God I love your imagination and you have kept everyone right in character and I love that to. Thank you thank you I love this story where do you get these amazing ideas and your writing is so good to I am so jealous and quite thankful your willing to share it all. Well enough gushing I'm probably embarrassing you or something so let me just say I'll be waiting for your next update.
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  • From ANON - chanii on June 21, 2010
    Wow! That was fast. Thank you, thank you. Ah! I am jumping up and down in my seat waiting for Sess to finally get his ass into gear and get a clue about his brother! Ah, pulling at my hair, I tell ya. Mark him damnit! Opps, sorry got carried away.
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  • From Shaquana on June 21, 2010
    I'M LOVING IT, I'M LOVING IT, I'M LOVING IT! I wonder how this ceremony is suppose to work but I hope that it will and Sess and Inu can be together and more puppies XD!! Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on June 21, 2010
    Sesshoumaru is sneaky! You're right; Inuyasha would have probably run from the celebration had he known that it was mainly for him. It's a sweet thing that Sesshoumaru is doing and I hope it helps Inuyasha. I have to wonder if this is the night that Sesshoumaru mates Inuyasha. ^_^ Are you going to allow us to see the rituals? BTW, thanks for the review of my last chappie. ^_^
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  • From ANON - my_perversities on June 21, 2010
    OMG you updated soooo fast!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! HA HA Inu was in for quite the shock with that surprise party just for him eh/?? Poor Inu, hates the spotlight and has been forced into it. lol. Well, I hope you can crunch out the next chapter quickly too, I can't wait to see what happens in this ceremony..does he get changed to a full demon?? Sooo excited.
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  • From ANON - Anie on June 20, 2010
    Love this story! Just reviewing to help you with a minor grammar thing. I've noticed you often use "breathe" when it would actually be "breath." Below is an example from chapter 13. (the first paragraph is just there so that it's easier to figure out where the section is from)

    Any time you mangy wolf.” Inuyasha said as he spared Kouga a quick, feral grin, it felt good to verbally spar with the wolf, almost like old times. Then he looked back at Sesshoumaru and sobered. “Look Sesshoumaru, let's just focus on the securing the pup's future okay, the other stuff, it does not matter. I know you claimed my death, but I don't think the pups would be able to accept you if you actually killed me. So when the time comes, I'll make it a death you can be proud of okay?” Inuyasha said with his now familiar blank smile, he had 'seen' his death, planned it so many times in the last seven years, he had accepted it and the part of him that had given up on himself ,yearned for the peace it would bring.

    He wanted to live for his children, but for himself – he was utterly convinced that there was nothing to live for, he was tired, he was so damn tired. Still, until his last breathe, {{{there it is! should be breath}}} he would persevere, take what ever pain was dished out, keep standing and keep fighting. In his death, he would make them proud of him.

    Now I'll explain the difference. Breath is used in places like the above. Also, : "Your breath smells" or "I can see my breath in the cold air." Breathe is used in sentences like this: "I cannot breathe underwater" and "A dead person does not breathe."

    Makes sense? Try putting both words into Dictionary.com and listening to the pronunciation. That'll go a long ways to getting in straight in your head. Worked best for me, anyways! Good luck and keep updating!



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  • From midnightsweet on June 20, 2010
    HOPE WE GET SOMEWHERE SOON.
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