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By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From jdbbrz27 on February 20, 2010
    ooohhhh if Sesshoumaru doesn't respond like he should I swear I'm climbing into this story and strangeling him. Yeah like I could I love it especially the picture and how Sesshoumaru reacted to it. I'm really enjoying you story even though a few parts made me cry. I also loved the demonstration that would have been something to see can't wait to read what happens next. Your doing a very good job.
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  • From ANON - mcdgoddess on February 19, 2010
    Really love the long chapters! The "fight" scene was very impressive with the skill that the children were showing at such a young age. I'm very interested in learning about Inuyasha's plan and if Sesshoumaru will soon discover the sacrifice that Inuyasha made to guarantee his children's survival. CANT WAIT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - midnightsweet on February 15, 2010
    great. up date soon
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  • From Elvira on February 15, 2010
    YAY! Loved it! Please make Inu and Sess come to terms with each other!

    I would love to see them together!

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on February 15, 2010
    Those three little pups kick ass!!! Inuyasha did well in preparing them for the future:-) Another good occurance is that Keade got to see Inuyasha and his children:-) His other former pack members have a lot of work to do if they are ever going to get back into Inuyasha's good graces (if he allows that to happen of course). Love it, look forward to the next installment!!!
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  • From ANON - Rae on February 14, 2010
    Love, love, love this chapter. Great job with the fight demo (did the audience really think Inuyasha's son would try to kill him? Or that Inuyasha would let him? lol!) and with the dinner scene...just ignore the stupid humans. :) I especially like Inuyasha's treatment of Kaede (and Yuusha's recognizing her protected status) and his willingness to forgive Shippo if he behaves himself(and hopefully/maybe taking him back under Yasha's supervision in the future?).

    Thanks for a great story. I can't even tell you how much I'm dying to know what's going to happen next! I check every day for updates. Take all the time you need, just keep the great stuff coming! ^_^ Even the angst...I'm ready.

    It really made my day to read this chapter...twice...so far... Thanks again!
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  • From ladykaa28 on February 14, 2010
    Yuusha will be the biggest problem for Inuyasha then the little one. The one thing that Inuyasha should have done, but couldn't was to make sure that the children would adore Sesshoumaru when he came to see them. I understand why it was not possible. Mee-chan just has to help bridge the gap on both sides. I know that's alot for a little girl to handle, but with both of her parents there wanting the best for all involved it should be a little easier.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on February 14, 2010
    Great chapter! Awesome description of the mock battle. I loved it. Too bad that the purpose isn't so much entertainment as an attempt on Inuyasha's part to secure a place for the children with Sesshoumaru. Yuusha is definitely not going to like that. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't plan on abandoning them with Sesshoumaru, even if he does believe he's going to die, he should go with them. I just hope that Sesshoumaru falls in love with him and saves him. I'm so glad that Kaede got to see Inuyasha again, but I really dislike Kagome being there. Grrr. I'm glad that Inuyasha is giving Shippou a chance.

    I didn't notice very many errors in this chapter. There might have been a missing period or two. So, it's obvious that you worked really hard. ^_^ Great job!
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  • From yaoilovefan on February 14, 2010
    Will Inuyasha tell them that he's dying? What a reaction whould that bring! XD Anyway, I'll be waiting for more. The pups are great! Every single one of them. :) And Sesshoumaru took Kaede with him! That's something new! That's for the chapter! It was great!
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  • From gauchewolf on February 14, 2010
    Your plot is so very interesting.And the way u've built up the characters of the children is remarkable too.cant wait to read what happens next!!
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  • From maegerakawaii on February 14, 2010
    I absolutely LOVED this chapter. I'm pretty sure Sesshoumaru wasn't just swelling with pride for his children. "Something else" was probably getting a little swollen watching his beautiful brother in battle. He has his work cut out for him though. It's going to be a tough road to InuYasha's heart since he was such a bastard to the adorable hanyou.
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  • From myperversities on February 14, 2010
    OMG I REAAAALLLYYY LOVE this story!!! I wait anxiously for it everyday, hop�ng that a new chapter will be out. Please keep `em coming.
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  • From mrk33 on February 14, 2010
    Splendid chapter. Inuyasha snubbing The others was just a bonus. You kept Sesshomaru in character while, maintaining
    his impassive, aloof, personality. Well done!
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  • From Reymond on February 14, 2010
    You described a very beautifu show, it seemed for me that I WAS here with them, I saw all the wonderful skills of the four fighters !
    Thank you !

    A french reader,
    Bonjour de la France !
    Merely Truth
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  • From wyntermist70 on February 13, 2010
    ahhhhh why whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy come on update darn it mannnnn I feel for shesshy I really do but I need more chapters moooooore ................holding on with baited breath so please update.
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