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By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From ANON - Rem-chan on January 12, 2010
    Another well done chapter! Your style has begun to intrigue me more and more, you know, this is the first story I've ever reviewed and I've been reading on this site for 2-3 years now :) They way you write has a somewhat not-entirely-developed feel to it, but what is amazing is that you pull that off remarkably well x.x Even if it has that under-developed feel to it your style doesn't ruin the story at, all but allows you to tell of the character's doings without using too many details and yet still giving us the impression you're looking for.

    Can't wait for another update, dear! -huggles- Poor Inuyasha :( And I did wonder why he was so strongly set to protect his abdomen when Sessh cornered him! The end of the chapter was so unexpected, at the beginning I was like "Aw, she won't turn it into an Mperg", but in the end I was ecstatic! XD Still am :P What a stress reliever when coming home! ;)

    -Rem
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  • From yaoilovefan on January 12, 2010
    The descripton of what Seshoumaru did to Inuyasha was good enough. I don't need to know anything more. Now I'm curious how long will it take for Seshoumaru to meet Inuyasha again. Our Hanyou ran away... will the humans go after him and try to find him? I'm curious if Inuyasha would try once again speak with Sesshoumaru and what will the Lord of the West do when he finds out he will be a father. XD I can't wait for that part. XD But I will be patiently waiting for it to happen. XD Hmmm... how many pups? Inuyasha said "them" so it's more than one. Three? :) Two? :/
    Good job with this chapter and I'm waiting for more!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on January 12, 2010
    Interesting story full of drama, angst and a hint on humor (most stories with Jaken involved are humorous anyway:-) Look foward to future chapters!!!


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  • From ladykaa28 on January 11, 2010
    Again you let her off easy. I know that is not his way, but I would have done something to her to get her to see what it cost (some of it) to save Sesshoumaru, but i know that is not part of the story now. From what I got out of the scene between Inu and Sess he was talking more about himself than to Inu. I feel that he is trying to come to grips with the fact that his brother saved him instead of letting him die. That he knew Inu paid a price he never could to save his only family member. To me he saw his father Inu more than ever and he is more angry with himself than his brother. Sesshoumaru does not lose control and doesn't need to be saved or protected. Inuyasha has seen him at his worse and took everything without lifting a finger to fight back. Showed him what it means to care about family whether you like them or not. Showed him,Sesshoumaru the lord of the west what it meant to be a demon from Inuyasha a hanyou. It left a bad taste in his mouth. If I'm going too deep let me know.
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  • From ANON - emiria_rose on January 11, 2010
    glad you continued. are you going to have the humans find out or are they completely cut from the picture? also has inuyasha lost all familial attachments to shippo as well. can't wait til next time. hope it gets better. ciao!
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  • From maegerakawaii on January 11, 2010
    Please update soon because I absolutely love it! I love how it is InuYasha against pretty much everyone else. That sounds really bad...but I like how that sets this apart from other more common plot lines. Thank you for posting this fic.
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  • From ANON - jdbbrz on January 11, 2010
    Wow that was intense and so majorly just wow. God I have to know what he intends to do about his pregnancy and the pups jeez that poor sweet thing. So many questions where will he go what will he do will Sesshamaru find out and if so then what will the humans find out and then what. Can poor Inuyasha deal with his memories and the pain from them who can he get to help him especially now. Wow I love this story it is totally awesome. And how you wrote the submission was fine it gave everyone an idea of what went on personally I do like a little more detail and feelings but what you wrote was just fine besides you are right they were brutal rapes and even if someone does find pleasure if it is done against their will then it is still rape besides unless the mind and body agree then any physical reaction good or bad is just that a physical reaction and doesn't necessarily mean said person enjoyed it just that their body was forced to react to it but anyway I am enjoying your story very much and I hope to see an update soon thank you for sharing with us.
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  • From ANON - debbie on January 11, 2010
    OMG, where's the next chapter?
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  • From mrk33 on January 11, 2010
    To submit over and over was very hard, for Inuyashas' character. You did not need to detail the rape, since,
    I am sure more will be revealed down the road, and seems unimportant within the story. True to form the way
    he is reacting towards the others who betrayed knowingly (knew about his life, yet, demanded something while
    being ignorant of demon culture), betrayed him. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kinhoshi76 on January 11, 2010
    damnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i don't blame inuyasha i would leave to he did all the hard work and everybody is complain including bitchass kagome
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  • From Dumplin139 on January 11, 2010
    I love it. You have caught my attention and i am on pins and needles waiting for the next Chapter. Please don't wait to long.
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  • From yaoilovefan on January 11, 2010
    This is a very good start. You got me really curious what will happen next and what Inuyasha had to do to make Sesshoumaru sane again. :) Knowing Sesshoumaru (sane or not) he made it really hard for our hanyou, right? ;)
    I'll be waiting for more! So please don't stop here!
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  • From ANON - Dante on January 11, 2010
    Yeah keep going. I'd like to see where this goes plus what exactly this whole "submission" meant.
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  • From ANON - Pam on January 10, 2010
    i liked the story so far i hope you continue it, i would to know what happened and whats going to happen i think you should continue it , i would definitly read it.
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  • From ANON - Rem-chan on January 10, 2010
    It's a very good start and the plot would likely turn out very good with your style of writing... Simply said: Keep going! :)
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