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From jdbbrz27 on October 08, 2010
Wow that was awesome. I loved the fight with the Generals like Inuyasha couldn't take out three Generals please especially since he has gotten older and stronger and more controlled. I'm betting even Sesshomaru would be hard pressed to even minimally defeat Inuyasha. I loved the announcement as well I was crying by the end of it and the protectiveness of moko moko that was so cute. I also loved the begginning how Sessh loves putting Inuyasha in his lap and how helpless he feels I know how it is to see someone you love deteriate and not be able to do anything for them but try and comfort it totally sucks. I understand how Inuyasha is afraid to rely on it and just accept the security and love offered with everything he has been through it's not so easy to just accept happiness in my experience if something good happens then 10 horrible things happen with it but then I'm just pessimistic. I love Sesshomaru doing everything in his power to make Inuyasha happy I mean it's about time after practically destroying the sweet thing physically and emotionally until now. I'm a little worried about their security though I mean the Generals must have been part brain dead to take up a challenge from Inuyasha goading or not you'd think they could figure out how strong he is from his reputation, his blood line and his past problems all of which he overcame although pity the ego of man I guess how totally typical. The God is interesting can't wait to see what happens with him talk about obsessed single mindedness though yeesh. A bit to much like Sesshomaru in that respect I think although when it comes to our favorite Hanyou I guess I can understand it. I'll be waiting for the next update with bells on to see where else you take us besides I would never forgive myself If I missed the birth of the next pups. Please let at least one of the boys if he has boys to have his ears god I love his ears. And in that sense he would look so much like Inuyasha that he would probably be automatically protected and probably smothered by everyone no doubt Yuusha the most just from reminding him of his beloved papa. Sesshomaru also would probably be generated more to him as well for the same reason. It would be so cool he would actually get the life that Inuyasha should have had one of a protected, coddled, smothered, spoiled demon although if he was like Inuyasha he would probably love and hate all of the above with a passion aw well just me thinking out loud however this goes I'm sure I will love it. Thank you so much for your amazing imagination and this wonderfully interesting story.
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From ANON - sexytiger on October 08, 2010
Yay new update and im loving it. Finally they are bridging the gap(next time just lock them in the dungeon) cant wait to read more and find out who the new threat is. Oh and love the pups they are adorable X3
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From midnightsweet on September 29, 2010
the kids are cute. maybe it don't need to be a big bad. it could be a way for the pups to start to learn how to work with sessy or the family together
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From Cinder1013 on September 28, 2010
Love this story. The complexity of their relationship is what keeps me coming back for more. Therefore I think you should only create a bad guy if it furthers the relationship. And I loved kishi-logic too. He's really cute.
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From rachaelrose on September 28, 2010
I like all of this chapter, especially the part with the kids. I say write as much as you want about them, they are awesome and add a lot to the story...in fact, I'd like to see more interactions of them w/both parents.

A bad guy? Meh. The idea of the Eclipse ceremony having further consequences than expected rather intrigues me...especially considering that it was only half-arsed researched by Sesshou and didn't actually heal Inuyasha. I wouldn't mind the added dynamic of a new "god" character, but does it have to devolve into a battle sequence? I've rather enjoyed the absense of fighting in this fic, so I guess I vote "no" for a bad guy. Feels to me like they have enough going on just in trying to figure out their relationship, Inuyasha dealing with pregnancy and the kids, and Sesshou becoming more of a father to them. Then again, they are impressively trained (and continue to train...might as well put it to good use) and a battle where the family fights together could awesome...and deal with some of the various ship issues at the same time.

Guess that's a wishy-washy vote, eh? An adamant "NO!" to a simplistic villain (like Naraku)...a more complex (and potentially *not* evil) character could be interesting.

Thanks for the update. Hope the writer's block stays far, far away! :)
Rae
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From ANON - Snowfall on September 28, 2010
Thanks for the new chapter. ^_^ I do enjoy the children very much and am glad that you had Yuusha defending Sesshoumaru, even if it was directed at defending Inuyasha. Stupid hawk youkai seems like a trouble maker. Shippou and the 'hanyou' issue was really cutely dealt with.

As for a threat...poor Inuyasha has it so rough already that I really wish that the new god actually wants to help Inuyasha with his issues. I'll email you with the rest that I cut out of this post. Also, my email has changed.

Anywho, it was nice to see the goddess again and to listen to her give Sesshoumaru a hard time. ^_^

Thanks for updating! It was a sweet chapter. ^_^
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From jdbbrz27 on September 27, 2010
I loved it the humer and seriousness all at once how do you do that it's so amazing. I so love Sesshomaru's protectiveness it is so amazing and sweet and so completely like someone with that kind of personality in a situation like he's in. As far as a bad guy well the breaking down of sweet little Inuyasha is most assuradly enough of a bad guy in this story. Personnally I would rather it was someone who was out to help instead of out to destroy sweet wonderful Inuyasha but I guess it really kind of depends on where you want to go with this story and how long you actually want to make it I have every confidence that you will make it more than worth reading and enjoying. All I want is for the ambiguous God to be a male they are so much more fun than females. But again that depends on where you want to take the arc in this story. And to just make a point I love the bit with the kids I love the whole thing but when Yuusha put the adult Youkai to task for gossipping boy you could really tell that he was Sesshomaru's son. And Kishi's explaination to Shippo was perfect it's just the way the youngest would look at things don't see specifics and logic instead look to your heart and instincts Kishi is so much like Inuyasha it is so marvelous and Mee Chan is more like the perfect balance between the two of them You really managed to get the birth order right now how did you do that to god you are so great at this thank you so much for sharing your talent with those of us who are talentless. I'll be waiting for your next update.
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From ANON - angelsword on September 27, 2010
Don't do a bad guy just for the sake of having a bad guy. Have danger, yes, and fighting but it would be better to have some intelligence there rather than senseless fighting. Love Hanyou Shippo. and the strength of Inuyasha is perfect.
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From AvidYasha on September 23, 2010
this is a wounderful story i cant wait to see how it ends. will yuusha ever get along with is father that kidd is a riot. thanks for the great read.
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From rachaelrose on September 08, 2010
Love, love, love this chapter! Seriously, I'm so in love with it, I don't even know what to say! What do they say? Three bowls of rice! ^_~ Thanks so much for an amazingly emotional exchange. This is many of my most hopeful imaginings rolled into one...Sesshou *not* taking his anger out on Inuyasha, seeing the morning fit, comforting to the best of his ability and actually (gasp!) explaining some of his thought processes. Sure, Sesshou is beating himself up a lot, but finally realizing some vital information. And, maybe just maybe, convincing Yasha of his own worth. Ah, thank you, thank you, tyvm! Hope the writer's block stays far away and you continue to be inspired. Also, totally agree about school...glad I never have to go back! :)
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From ANON - J. Love on September 06, 2010
Love the story so far, hope further chapters come soon. Want to see how Inuyasha lets Sesh. off the hook and how Inuyasha survives.
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From hellangelhellina on September 05, 2010
Lol Sesshoumaru's pouting, howw cute. I love how this story is going it is such a joy to read. I glad that Sesshoumaru finally got the help he neaded to get his brain in order.
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From myperversities on September 05, 2010
OMG!! You've done it again!!!! I freaken love you!!! I just about die of excitement every time I see that you`ve added a new chapter! Thanxso much for the update and keep up the awesome work cuz I`ll be waiting with baited breath!!
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From Cinder1013 on September 04, 2010
Love this. Want more.
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From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2010
It's nice to see that some of the air has finally been cleared between the two of them. Though they will still have obsticles to overcome, they will hopefully know that they can rely on each other through it all.

I like that Inuyasha is starting to have a bit of sense of humor now. I firmly believe that laughter is good for the soul. Maybe this will be good for all involved.
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