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Reviews for The Tale of the Demon Lord

By : Arianawray
  • From Madamdragon on June 10, 2010
    As much as i would love a yaoi update i am willing to wait for it because your story is too good to pass up. update soon please
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 09, 2010
    Oh this has gotten even better, IF that was possible!!! Great job!
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  • From Vyper on June 09, 2010
    I would love to see another lemon, but I am patient. I like the idea of the demon tree and Totosai being the Godfathers of both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. I will look forward to another chapter.
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  • From Angels9191 on June 09, 2010
    I love it! Like all of your stories, everything is so thorough and written with such care and attention to detail. I also like the spin on what happened in the series. I thought for a second Inu would actually cut off Sesshy's arm just like the series, but I like how he held back. It really shows his character.

    As for the lemons, I think your writing is so fantastic and intriguing that you don't really need that in every chapter. The story is what's interesting. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the sexy scenes, but I agree with you; the fabric of the story doesn't allow for that to happen right now. You could do a time skip type thing, if you wanted to get to that sooner, but like I said, I love your writing just the way it is :D

    Keep writing, and I'll keep reading =]
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  • From jdbbrz27 on June 09, 2010
    Very nicely done I loved the training session and all of it really as far as the lemons as much as I enjoy lemons and I really do especially between these two I also love a good story which means other things besides lemons things that lead up to lemons and make them more hot than just screwing around for the heck of it so I'll stick with you for there aren't a whole bunch of stories that I enjoy and I am enjoying yours. So stick with your guns or swords as this case may be and allow the story to progress on your time or it's time I should say and thank you for sharing it.
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  • From maegerakawaii on June 09, 2010
    Hopefully that 'little' accident will bring the brothers closer. I would love to see Totosai scolding Sesshoumaru. What a funny sight!
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  • From maegerakawaii on June 09, 2010
    Oh man! Even I'm starting to feel the underlying frustration. But this angst is so good. I feel like such a masochist for liking this slow torture. Please update soon. I must see how these two obstinate people will move on from here.
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  • From Angels9191 on June 03, 2010
    that was so fantastic. I just read the entire thing in about 5 hours. You're writing is so captivating and well thought out, it makes me want to go and re-write every one of my stories now =] There is so much thought and care put into every word, I'm jealous of your focus and creativity. Please don't stop writing
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on June 03, 2010
    *Drools* This fic is so good...bravo. Bravo and furthermore, encore! I love that you updated so soon, please continue to entrall- Prismakakkerra
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  • From jdbbrz27 on June 03, 2010
    God I loved it so sweet and moving and very in character for both actually I can't wait to see what happens next and I love the godfather tree totally cool to add him into this story especially with Inuyasha's connection to trees and nature. Thanks for sharing and I'll be waiting for the next update.
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  • From midnightsweet on May 28, 2010
    that was a sweet one
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  • From Vyper on May 28, 2010
    So now Sesshoumaru is treating Inuyasha like a brother which is a nice change, I think he is also wooing Inuyasha rather than just expecting Inuyasha to bend over backwards for him.
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  • From Vyper on May 24, 2010
    I am surprised Sesshoumaru apologized for anything although he is bluntly honest with Inuyasha normally.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on May 22, 2010
    I loved the ranting part, very good work there! Excellent chapter, keep up the great job!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on May 22, 2010
    I really enjoyed it and it will be great to see somewhat of the old Inuyasha back cause I think that boy is adorable also to see the great Sesshoumaru handle him. Although because of it I know that there probably won't be to much of any lemons at least for a little while as Sesshoumaru tries to win Inuyasha's heart. One thing would be for Sesshoumaru to do something nice for Inuyasha's friends and their village that would I think help Inuyasha to see his sincerity. Also small touches on non threatening places on Inuyasha's body alot would probably help Inuyasha not only feel better about himself and his brother but help Inuyasha get use to his brother touching him and maybe a hug or two at spontaneous appropriate moments. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them maybe some romps together a little play wrestling and defidently sparring things that would bring out the puppy in both of them. You know things they should have done when they were little now that would be to cute. Well thank you for an awesome story and I'll be waiting for the next update.
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