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Reviews for The Tale of the Demon Lord

By : Arianawray
  • From Vyper on November 10, 2010
    I am glad that they defeated Naraku. He is such a pain in the ass.
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  • From FluffyGreenDryad on November 10, 2010
    A beautifully done battle sequence. I sniffled when the old tree was thought dead. I was happy to see Naraku go at last and you did the whole scene nicely. keeping in the spirit of the series. The shards and change from the trees and Kikyo was a very nice touch. I figured you'd get the sword and shiny new arm in there :) Yay for the brothers! Can they have their nap and bath now? I think Sesshoumaru could use both...and Inuyasha some councilling.
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  • From midnightsweet on November 10, 2010
    omg omg omg. everything was done to profection. let me know if you are going to do another one. the story was great
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  • From jdbbrz27 on November 05, 2010
    Very ominus to say the least man Naraku really has to be brought down that evil ass hole just thinking about what he wanted to do to Inuyasha makes me see red. Can't really blame Natsumi's little sweety though to save Inuyasha or really anyone they loved anyone would do the same thing. Grant you the guards and ministers should have kept a closer eye on him than they did knowing how close he was to the little lady demon. But things happen as they happen and great writers like you always know that. I can't wait till Inuyasha and Sesshomaru take nasty icky Naraku down forever cause he's just ewwwwwww. I also love how little Inuyasha has changed Sesshomaru so much something true love does it brings out the best in someone even if it's hidden deep like Sesshomaru's compassion and caring was even in the anime he changed for the better like that so it's not really that far out of character at all and you have basically kept Inuyasha in almost complete character and I love that I mean he is perfect anyway other than being a bit insecure at times and Sesshomaru is helping him on that score to. I love this story and can't wait for the next update thank you so much for keeping up with it with timely updates and not making us wait for ever for them.
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  • From Vyper on November 05, 2010
    Ok I read this whole story again. It took me all night, but it was so worth it. I hope that you keep updating. Right now I am having serious writer's block.....again........and I have resigned myself to reading the stories on here until I can get the urge to start writing again. It isn't for inspiration since my stories pale to what you bring out in yours. In fact I find some of the chapters in one of my tales to be long winded and irksome. I will most likely have to edit them again. Being your own beta and being an author at the same time is like having a full time job.
    Anyway, love your story and will be waiting for the next chapter to come out with bated breath. You are truly an artist.
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  • From midnightsweet on November 04, 2010
    getting soooo good. update soon.
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  • From myperversities on October 29, 2010
    PLEASE, PLEASE, LET SHESS GET HIS ARM BACK!!! HE COULD RE-GROW IT!! OR HIS MOMMY COULD CONJURE HIM UP ONE!!! OR HE COULD FIND A HEALER LIKE OREHIME FROM BLEACH WHO CAN BRING THE BODY BACK IN TIME TO FIX THE WOUND LIKE IT WAS NEVER THERE TO BEGIN WITH.....THERE ARE SO MANY OPTIONS AND I HATE SHESSH WITHOUT HIS ARM.....HE'S THE KILLING PERFECTION....YOU CAN'T BE PERFECTION IF YOU'RE MISSING A LIMB!!!!
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  • From itstartedwithapaopu on October 29, 2010
    OH SHIT

    Holy god, when Sesshoumaru died, I cried. Seriously. Thank you for this story. This is amazing. So looking forward to the next update!!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on October 29, 2010
    Aw man between this story and the story Strength you two writers are going to give me a heart attack the excitement and the amazing imaginations the two of you have jeez it's phenominal and fantastic and I thank you for sharing from the bottom of my excited heart. How dare Naraku be such a crazy son of a bitch the bastardly coward like he in any way has any right at all to even speak Inuyasha's name let alone be near him oh I hope they get that creepy jerk soon he is beyond all consumate evil you really did a great job there. Actually you've done a superb job as a whole in this update and the whole of the story. I can not wait to see what happens to the creep in Sessh's castle it was a shame though that poor Sessh had to lose his arm like he did and to that conceited asshole. Oh well I guess when it comes to making love to Inuyasha he'll just have to use his tongue more huh a little overtime with his tongue and his one arm and hand should more than make up for the lost other arm and hand besides it can make it even more enjoyable to Inuyasha and Sessh I mean that is a meal that I would certainly enjoy Inuyasha soup yum okay now I'm getting a little way to naughty so I will now go and send myself to bed oh I do hope I dream yum sorry didn't mean to gross you out been awhile since I've had a good night's sleep and I'm a little punchy so I apoligize for anything that may have been overboard anyway thank you so much for sharing can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From midnightsweet on October 26, 2010
    getting there
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  • From DarkAmorpheous on October 25, 2010
    Well what do you know, two little sex slaves for the price of one. Hopefully their intelligence will grow in the next few chapters. I am loving this so far though and your character development is wonderful. The plot also sucks you in so you can't wait for what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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  • From FluffyGreenDryad on October 22, 2010
    I thought the Mr. Tree was cute too. I'm kinda glad to see Kagome and Sango here. I've never hated Kagome, they make awesome friends, I just think Inuyasha deserved someone else. I'm releaved to see the shard out, but I can't help but worry what's being done to Sesshoumaru in the meantime. Go get him Inuyasha!
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  • From midnightsweet on October 22, 2010
    no word on sessy
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  • From JtheChosen1 on October 20, 2010
    Excellent work! Cannot wait for more!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on October 19, 2010
    Wow that was awesome I knew it had to be bokusen'o I just knew it and the way they had to take the shard out was totally awesome and unique kudos to you for your fantastic imagination I have not read anything like that in any other story and I was thrilled reading it. I just know this adventure to save Naraku will also be amazing and the fight as well I'm a little nervous how Sesshomaru is going to be but none the less I can't wait. I just hope Sesshomaru is not the one having any puppies that's just ewwwww I mean he is sooooo not the type to be able to carry a baby he's just not strong enough emotionally and he really does not have the sensitivity to carry it off. I could never no matter what see him doing it and pulling it off believably. Anyway I can not wait for the next update with your amazing imagination I just know it will be so worth the wait to read even though now I am just sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for it.
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