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Reviews for The Tale of the Demon Lord

By : Arianawray
  • From nchsmi on October 14, 2010
    OMG...My heart is breaking for InuYasha! To have the one you love ripped from you like that, has got to be the most devastating! But, it's also the deepest declaration of love and devotion, that anyone can make for a loved one. I'm on my way to read the next chapter, but I had to stop and tell you this was AWESOME!!!

    B reading U!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on October 14, 2010
    Okay you have successfully made me cry again it was beautifully written but so heartbreaking poor little Inuyasha how he must always suffer so. And little Kanna what a mixed up kid she was but with Naraku as her creater it's no wonder they're not all screwed up although at least Kagura was able to break free and maybe she can help Inuyasha get Sesshomaru back hell Inuyasha has alot of friends who could probably help and I can not wait for that stupid nasty shard to get out of gorgeous Inuyasha's body nasty thing kind of wondering how you'll do that one and I can't wait to find out. Thank you for such a touching and emotional update cleaned out my eyes anyway and I can't wait for the next update to find out what happens next.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on October 14, 2010
    Oh goodness I was crying at the end! So excellent!
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  • From quittie on October 14, 2010
    I didn't want to read the next chapter when Sesshomaru was taken away by Naraku. I just can't put myself in that kind of torture, but here I am finished reading the latest chapter and was tearing up from all the drama! (T.T) Kikyo is now dead and Sesshomaru is gone... that damn shard is still inside Inuyasha and Naraku! why can't he just die!

    I love your story so much that I check everyday if you have updated!
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  • From Caitriona on October 08, 2010
    Chapter 40 is AWESOME. You did a great job with Naraku and his evilness, with Inuyasha and his brashness and with Sesshomaru and his nobility. Huzzah! I can't wait until the next chapter. I want to see what Inuyasha is going to do and I wonder what tree is going to be able to help Inuyasha and the shard. I'm on the edge of my seat. Great job!
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  • From Madamdragon on October 08, 2010
    Poor Sesshomaru the things you do for love. I hope things get better in the end. Update soon please
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  • From jdbbrz27 on October 08, 2010
    Oh god that was horrible just ewwwwww. I really hope that bastard doesn't impregnate Sesshomaru or even arrange that I can never see Sesshomaru pregnant it's just to ewwwww. He's just not the type at all and I was so loving this story to and now well now this my heart is breaking. I do wonder how they are going to get out of this catastrophe though what in the world is poor little Inuyasha going to do now I guess I'll have to stay tuned at least for now to see where you take this. It's nothing against your writing or anything so don't pay any attention to me I never tell a writer what or how to write that just takes away from the story and imagination of the writer it's just my own preferences so when I can't deal with something that to me is just totally unbelievable to me then I just don't read it or stop reading it. It's just usually I don't enjoy the story to this point before that happens but I will stay tuned to see what happens next. I do appreciate your hard work though and you are a very good writer thank you.
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  • From trystkinkou on October 08, 2010
    MROOOWWW!!!! BAD KITTY! Mean Kitty. :P Haven't they suffered enough for a little while?! hehheee... nevermind me, just letting out my frustrations a bit. I really loved this i just didn't like the how you managed to get me so wired up and excited only to have it end like that. ^^; Now I DEFINITELY can't wait til the next update.
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  • From FluffyGreenDryad on October 04, 2010
    Sesshoumaru, did it ever occur to you that it as a trap to lure you from Inuyasha? Darn pride of his.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on October 04, 2010
    Well that was interesting I wonder if the other tree is bankotsu and if he is on the way now that would be very cool for the two trees to act together to help save Inuyasha. And Sesshomaru going off on his own to confront Naraku how stupid can a demon get for heavens sake although I realize being a male that his ego and pride are more in effect than anything else the brat. God Inuyasha is going to be furious when he finds out and he's going to know what Sesshomaru has done it's not like he's stupid so boy I hope he doesn't go following him to try and help especially with that damn shard still inside him. Kikyo being sick well that's only typical with her age and little Kagome coming into her powers now that is really cool to especially since she can help Inuyasha to the two sisters will probably need her strength and help which is also really cool. Thank you so much I love this story more and more and can't wait to see what happens next so I'll be waiting.
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  • From Madamdragon on October 04, 2010
    That is suicide. I hope he will be okay update soon please
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  • From jdbbrz27 on September 28, 2010
    Well If I were that wolf demon I would be laughing my butt off once the two were out of sight from Sesshoumaru's jealousy. I loved Sessh's mom hitting on Inuyasha I mean I would to and I'd stroke and pinch that oh so delicious bottom of his I mean who wouldn't unless your dead and even if I were dead I'd still want to do it. It's so cute how jealous Sessh is getting and he should be if your going to have a sweet, loving sexy hot young babe like Inuyasha well you kind of have to get use to him being hit on and also realize that he has nothing to worry about mainly because of who Inuyasha is and how devoted and loyal he is. Inuyasha's personality is such that he would never have any eyes or feelings for anyone other than the one he has given his heart to he's just to pure for that and always will be. I liked the chapter for those reasons especially Sessh's momma she is so beyond funny and I love her teasing ways it is so much like my own family always teasing each other especially if someone is to serious about something you did a good job. Thanks for sharing and I'll be waiting for the next update.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on September 28, 2010
    Very nice work here! Loved the chapter!
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  • From Madamdragon on September 28, 2010
    Wow possessive Sesshomaru I like that. I hope more sutors show up I love it when inu gets so much attention. LOL I still think Inu shouldve been the fairest in the land but opinions can change. Great update I eagerly await more.
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  • From ardentes on September 27, 2010
    Dude! You can't just stop this story here!!! I love this story! I couldn't stop reading! Then you left it there and it made me sad. Please write more! I want to know what happens next!
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