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Reviews for The Tale of the Demon Lord

By : Arianawray
  • From jdbbrz27 on September 22, 2010
    That was truly exciting. I loved Sesshoumarus declarations of love and it's not even really out of character at all if someone was in that position watching the one they loved with all their being in such pain and agony and knowing that they almost lost them and still could well it would only be natural no matter how cold someone is that warmth and love would come out of their mouths through thier own soul. And his declaration came from his soul and heart and not his brain and logic that is how true love works. It's also why you love your family but not always like them it's just a part of the bond of love. God I sound so corny sorry about that. And Sesshoumaru's interaction with his mom that was so touching and right for this occassion I also understand her flippant remarks when she first showed up some of us tend to react that way to extreme stress and situations it's a defense mechanism. And it was great that his mom understood and figured out Inuyasha in such a short time now that is a demonness who has lived and learned through a very long life. And the ending with Naraku now that was priceless and I loved it. His anger and fear of killing off the one he wants instead of the one he intended great writing on that part so very accurate of an enemy. And the bit with Kikyo and Kaede I love the addition of those two another great twist you are doing a really awesome job with this story and I appreciate alot not every story gives you a great plot along with the great lemons and I love both very much. Lemons are awesome but actual good stories mixed with them are much more awesome. I'll be waiting to see what happens next with Kikyo and Kaede and Inuyasha and with what Naraku plans next for his ever elusive prey.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on September 22, 2010
    Excellent work here, loved it!
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  • From midnightsweet on September 22, 2010
    man i don't know what to say
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  • From jdbbrz27 on September 19, 2010
    That was awesome and so exciting and full of suspense. Poor sweet Inuyasha I almost cried as it is I got tears in my eyes almost throughout the chapter how do you do that any way make something so riviting. Well I think I may like Sesshoumaru's mom despite her really tacky sense of humer. And Naraku needs to be beaten with his balls cut off and then killed repeatedly the big creep how dare he try to take Sesshoumaru away from Inuyasha oooohhhh he makes me so mad. And it makes me curious to see what they intend to do about that nasty shard blunted or not it's still a major danger to Inuyasha so interesting this story is just great and I'll be waiting for the next update thank you so much for your wonderful imagination and for sharing it. I am very humbled to your amazing talents.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on September 19, 2010
    That was awesome and so exciting and full of suspense. Poor sweet Inuyasha I almost cried as it is I got tears in my eyes almost throughout the chapter how do you do that any way make something so riviting. Well I think I may like Sesshoumaru's mom despite her really tacky sense of humer. And Naraku needs to be beaten with his balls cut off and then killed repeatedly the big creep how dare he try to take Sesshoumaru away from Inuyasha oooohhhh he makes me so mad. And it makes me curious to see what they intend to do about that nasty shard blunted or not it's still a major danger to Inuyasha so interesting this story is just great and I'll be waiting for the next update thank you so much for your wonderful imagination and for sharing it. I am very humbled to your amazing talents.
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  • From midnightsweet on September 19, 2010
    that was not very nice
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  • From JtheChosen1 on September 16, 2010
    Man, Sesshy is gonna go on the war path! Excellent work!!!
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  • From FluffyGreenDryad on September 15, 2010
    I know Sesshoumaru is all excited, eager and protective and out of his care element, but you’d think he’d have realized he didn’t ask Inuyasha to be his mate. *palm to the forehead* perhaps subconsciously he feared rejection.

    I loved the slave bracelet, always liked that style J And the whole competitive nature coming forth in Sesshoumaru’s gift giving.

    All I can say for the last bit is… bleep bleep bleepity OUCH!even more when they need to dig those shards out. *cringes* poor Inuyasha!
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  • From Onyxlight on September 13, 2010
    OMG!! OH NO!! NO NO NO I knew the mirror breaking was a bad thing! Poor Inuyasha *sniffs*

    Great update (and pardon me for reviewing here instead of on FFnet) Couldn't resist reading it once I saw it ^_^
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  • From maegerakawaii on September 12, 2010
    I can't believe this is how this chapter ends. This is just too CRUEL! I hope Inuyasha will be okay. It may sound horrible but this will probably be the best test for whether Sesshoumaru really does love him or not.

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  • From midnightsweet on September 12, 2010
    please update soon. what will happen next??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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  • From Madamdragon on September 11, 2010
    Hopefully Sesshomaru sees the dedication inuyasha puts into their relationship. He took a glass shard for him. Now thats true love right there. Hope Inu's alright. Cant wait for another update.
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on September 11, 2010
    nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu damn you naraku to hell you sick sadistic bastard >< i hope inuyasha will make it and sesshomaru is going to annihilate the spider clan i kinda feel sorry for the kids...kinda...but yeah i hope he makes it D:
    can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From Angels9191 on September 11, 2010
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you!!! I love it and hate it all at the same ohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what happens sooooo bad you're so cruel!!!! Ahhhh damn cliffhangers!!!!!! I think I might die of antisipation!! lol please please please update soon!!!!!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on September 11, 2010
    Oh my god what have you done please say he's not seriously injured forever oh my god I'm thoroughly devastated poor little Inuyasha how could that vicous horrible mirror thing, it demon whatever do that to sweet wonderful perfect Inuyasha I can't stand it please you must have to update soon before I cry my eyes out oh my god that's like one of the absolute worse yet most intriguing fight scenes I have ever read. Next to Sacred Trees of course. And I thought it was so sweet the ring and cuff set although I could never wear anything like that with a chain connecting them like that but still it was sweet and the description of the other gifts talk about appropriate gifts I loved it usually when a writer writes about giving Inuyasha gifts from a suiter there always way to girly things with Inuyasha's personality he would never enjoy but you did a really great job. Thank you so much for an amazing story and your fantastic imagaination I will be waiting for the next update with amazing anticipation and a bit of worry for my sweet little Inuyasha.
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