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Reviews for The Tale of the Demon Lord

By : Arianawray
  • From Angels9191 on July 21, 2010
    eeeeeeeee!!! It just keeps getting cuter and cuter!! I LOVED the pillow fight, that was absolutely priceless. And I actually like the lack of lemons. Don't get me wrong, I love sexy time, especially with these two, but the lack of lemon keeps me coming back for more and makes the tiny parts that are slightly erotic even more tantalizing. I can't wait for more!
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  • From Catarotta on July 20, 2010
    Another amazing chapter. In all honesty I don't mind the slow plot development. Your story is more believable. You're showing how Inuyasha is changing Sesshoumaru into a better person and in turn Inuyasha is learning how to grow up in a world he is new to. I adore this story and I look for updates like everyday. Keep up the awesome work. Because when you do get to the lemon it will be well worth the wait.
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on July 20, 2010
    LoL aww Sesshoumaru. He'll be invted, not right now but he will be XD optimism is key!!
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  • From maegerakawaii on July 20, 2010
    Inuyasha was so ADORABLE in this chapter. I want to keep him. Provided that Sesshoumaru comes with the package. Hang in there Sesshoumaru you'll get your invite soon enough. And it will make it that much sweeter because you will have earned it. I hope Naraku doesn't traumatize Natsumi again or try to hurt InuYasha.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 20, 2010
    That was adorable and I liked it alot the playfulness and fun with small hints of something more just like most relationships actually start. I noticed that most writers don't actually take the time to develop a relationship so this is really cool and I like it. Can't wait to see how nasty Naraku fits in this so I'll be waiting for the next update and really good job on this chapter and of course the whole story. Thank you.
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  • From quittie on July 20, 2010
    They had reached the top of the staircase leading up to their bedrooms. Sesshomaru paused, looked at Inuyasha, and said: "I don't believe I will ever merit unqualified praise from you, but I'm working on it."

    I can feel Seshoumarru there!

    Godspeed!
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  • From LordYouko on July 20, 2010
    Oh I can't believe I haven't read this story before!! Just came across it now and quite liked it....Inuyasha is very much in character but Sesshoumaru seemes a little bit OC....but it's a good story...will Naraku try to drive a wedge between the brothers?? can't wait for an update!
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  • From TheReapersMule on July 16, 2010
    Must...read...MORE!
    Update soon!
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  • From Nesha85 on July 16, 2010
    Great character development. We never see Inuyasha at his age in the anime. I also like the fact you have a plot, but I would not disagree with a little more sexual content. :)
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 14, 2010
    I loved the ending with the clapsed hands that is so sweet and adorable it just made me want to go awe. The rest was kind of you know just filler but I can't wait to see your next update and to meet Sessh's mommy tha ought to be interesting.
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  • From quittie on July 14, 2010
    I check everyday to see if you had posted another chapter... that is to tell you how I love this story. and I'm not insinuating that you should update more in one week! Just do it in your own time. more power to you and this beautiful story!
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  • From Madamdragon on July 14, 2010
    AWWWWW! Nuff said!
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  • From TerraDeeEarth on July 09, 2010
    One of the best chapters yet. I really liked the dept of emotion and thoughtfulness Inuyasha showed at the end.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 08, 2010
    That was lovely I loved how you had Sesshoumaru help the villagers especially the 50 year tax thing now that was an inspiration marvelous. And the bit with Bokensu'O was wonderful especially about the spiratual needle and half demon thread wow I almost cried and laughed at the same time. Although I believe the half demon thread has already been woven tightly into the hole of Sesshoumaru and that it isn't going to become unraveled for a long time if ever. God I love this story and then the bit about the age and how one minute he feels old and the next like a kid how extremely typical of a teenager or even a young adult hell sometimes of anyone at any age so insightful of you wow I'm impressed and I can not wait for your next installment. Could you let me know my email is the same as on FF it's brzachman@yahoo.com
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  • From Vyper on July 03, 2010
    I like this line in your story.
    "Inuyasha shivered from the sensations that the dream had left him with, but as he closed his eyes again, he could not say for certain if that physical response to his night vision was a shudder of fear, or a tremor of desire."
    It would be wonderful if Inuyasha was able to desire his brother than to fight the feelings he has. After all, it would not be so unusual since the two of them shared the same bed to begin with and Sesshoumaru is certainly not going to object if Inuyasha claimed his want for another sexual interlude. Or they could just have a nice make out session. That would be good too.

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