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Reviews for Blood Stained

By : Maddiesan
  • From Nicky111 on April 25, 2010
    I really like this story, and now I am in high hopes that Kagome made it through the well. I am soooo glad that bracelet is off of her. I want her to make it through the well and then we see how much it pains Sesshoumaru to have her gone. I am really upset that Inuyasha died though! And what about Shippo, Kagome's son. That has been my biggest complaint for this story is that she has not had her son with her. But I really like this story and I can't wait to see where you take it. My only hopes are that it ends with Kagome and her child happy (hopefully with a grateful and loving Sesshoumaru). Keep up the good work.
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  • From LadySesshomaru on April 21, 2010
    omg this story is soooooooooooooooo good!!! pls update soon!! email me when you do PLS....valiente16@yahoo.com
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  • From TrueHeartOfALion on April 10, 2010
    Hi. I love your story and hope you don't leave me hanging. Oh yea I was wondering, in one of the chapters you said that english wasn't your first language. What was? Because I think you're english is better than mine. LOL

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  • From Vyncent on April 01, 2010
    I have been reading your story and in general it is extremely good. I do, however, have to agree with the reviewer that suggested a beta. There are quite few instances of missing words and misspelled or misused words, which regrettably breaks the otherwise great flow of the story.

    Example: Shacking....'Shack is a building'...in the context you used, it should have been 'Shaking'.

    "..., but he refused to have them snaffle her away from him..."...by definition (in every dictionary I could find to try to understand what you mean by this sentence, 'Snaffle' is a kind of bit on a bridle for a horse. I realize that you mean something to do with the Inutachi 'spiriting' Kagome away from Sesshoumaru, but this is not what is being said, and makes it confusing to the reader.

    This is a great story idea, and it seems well thoughtout...just difficult to follow sometimes, as the flow is broken by the grammar, missing words, misspelled words, and misused words.


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  • From smcandy on April 01, 2010
    Very moving an self sacrificing this chapter I liked it. It almost bright me to tears honestly.
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  • From smcandy on April 01, 2010
    Maddiesan,

    So far you are doing an outstaying job with keeping Sesshomaru well ‘in character’ as he was mean tot be. I want to something in regard to a means to contacts you privately if possible since you can see my email would be able to replay back to me somehow?.

    I have more to read of this awesome S/K but I really hope you’ll be able to replay back to me when you can.

    Keep up the good work ^^.
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  • From smcandy on March 30, 2010
    Well that de-flowering was quick but I like the fact unlike many S/K stories Kagome is despising Sesshomaru instead of loving him for taking her pureness.
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  • From smcandy on March 30, 2010
    Not to bad looking good no rushing it I hope it be taken to something of nice and slow. Good work I have to read more ^^.
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  • From Crystledwater on March 23, 2010
    I really do rather like this story, I find myself checking every day to see whether or not it has been updated and I do this several times a day. However, I do think that you should start putting some romance in somewhere, for example, Sesshoumaru's beast could realise that he is not going to get anywhere by repeatingly raping her and forcing pleasure on her and starts to just spend time with her, gaining her trust and such.
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  • From Nicky111 on March 21, 2010
    I am waiting for this story to go somewhere. I like your writing style, but this whole Sesshoumaru despises her and Kagome hates him and is depressed thing, is getting really old. When is something going to change. R u planning on ever actually having them fall in love or is she going to have a baby as little helpless Kagome with big bad mean Sesshoumaru? I am just curious. I like the idea of the story, but I don't want to read it if it is all going to be depressing and aweful. I am just not into physical and mental torture. So I was just curious as to where this story may be headed?
    Thanks.
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  • From Tricia1224 on March 18, 2010
    This is a pretty good story so far. You do have some grammar issues which made some of your sentences confusing. A decent beta could help with those issues. This
    last chapter seems to have very few grammar issues. Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2010

    He's here.

    Who's Here, I wanna know.......


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  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2010
    cant wait wait for the next one......it just gets better and better
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2010
    Aww i was hoping you would have updated.....

    Loving this story mate....she keeps giving him a headache.

    Anyway Great work and keep on writing
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  • From Vyper on March 10, 2010
    Good begining. It is interesting.
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