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Reviews for Blinding the Consequences

By : Mort
  • From loveless on June 11, 2015
    Please update and send me a notice when u do
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo aka Shivonne on January 22, 2015
    Hey there I hope you are well,it has been forever since I have read this story. I ccan't believe it and a whole chapter I have never read to boot. I still love this story. Good to go back to read old classics. Do you have this did finish on another site, would love to continue on reading if possible. Sorry for a nagging I don't mean too.
    Ladytokyo aka Shivonne
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  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 08, 2014
    Please finish this great story.
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo on June 02, 2012
    I found you again!!!!!!!!!!!!! you don't know how exciting that is for me. Ok Ssssssoooooooo now that I'm back and have found you again hows about another chapter. I still really really like this story you have written, consitdering that I just hardcore re-read all 6 chapters so please update for me.... O_O
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  • From Femnaruto on February 21, 2012
    I love this story.
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  • From Nekoluver666 on March 12, 2011
    Any editing or grammar mistakes are easily ignored, because your story has substance. There is a clear plot that has been given some thought. I like that. It's different compared to the many fics that read like a child wrote them. I do recommend that you find a beta though. There have been many times when you've used the wrong word in a sentence that is a little confusing. Also, I agree with the person that reviewed before me. You mentioned a sexual encounter between InuYasha and Sesshoumaru, but you never wrote it? I don't know what happened. Perhaps you could go back and edit chapter 6 and add in that part? All in all, I like this fic a lot. I think you've done a great job and I can't wait for more updates.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on March 11, 2011
    I really like your story, but I think you left something out. In chapter 6 at the beginning it hints that Sesshomaru had sex with Inuyasha. But, in chapter 5 all Sesshomaru was doing was going to bed. A whole section is missing. How did they have sex when sex wasn't even on Sesshomaru's mind?
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  • From ladytokyo on March 11, 2011
    OH thank you so very much I enjoyed this a great deal and happy to read another chapter from you and this fic. Thank you for updating I can't wait for the next chapter whenever that is. Oh wait I have a questions. Will the sage be allow to attend this function to scent out auras? And what does Inuyasha want for himself? Hum I think that's it. Till next time I shall be waiting for another chapter.
    ladytokyo
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  • From WiccanQueen on February 11, 2011
    Please update soon it's awesome
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  • From ardentes on February 02, 2011
    I absolutely enjoyed this story. I really like the progression of it and it is all around an interesting and original piece of fan fiction. I truly hope you will write more of this story. I wish to know what happens next. I have a guess as to the bad guy, is it Onigumo? Anyway, I look forward to reading more of this fan fiction soon! Please update this story soon! I really really want to know what happens next!
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  • From ardentes on October 27, 2010
    Please update this story soon! I want to read more! I wish to read how the coming of age ceremony goes. I also want to know how/ if they catch the bastard that hurt Inuyasha (Was it Naraku?). I really want to read more! I really liked this story! I liked how you had Sesshomaru being soo attentive to Inuyasha and how Inuyasha wants Sesshomaru around all of the time! I wonder how they will handle all of the prospective mates... Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ladytokyo on July 24, 2010
    Please make me happy and update
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  • From ladytokyo on June 07, 2010
    OMG I'm so glad that you updated. I really do enjoy this fic so I hope it keeps going. Had the Sage seen the guide yet? maybe something could be pick up. poor sesshy has to deal with suitors four Inuyasha lol kinda funny if it wasn't so dangerous. till next chapter and thanks for updating.
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  • From Arianawray on June 06, 2010
    I was reluctant to read this at first, because the premise sounded so painful - I hated to think of poor Inuyasha being abducted as a child, and to learn that he was held captive underground for two hundred years was agonising. However, I'm glad I read on, because you have created a compelling story here, full of mystery and suspense and emotion, and even your OCs are fascinating. I got confused a couple of times by some spelling mistakes and missing or odd punctuation, but once I worked out what those parts meant, they did not detract from the general atmosphere and direction of the story at all. Keep up the good plotline. I would love to read more.
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  • From Vyper on June 06, 2010
    This is a great story. Hope you will have some new chapters soon. I am dealing with writer's block so I hope to write more on my stories soon here.
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