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Reviews for Want To Be Your Slave

By : LordYouko
  • From ANON - arya on September 28, 2010
    loved the chapters. not to mention i think that sesshomaru's actions and feelings in the chapter was very realistic and believable. keep up the good work!
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  • From butterflies1974 on September 26, 2010
    Awesome! Okay you are so brilliant and I really like this chapter because it is always nice to see Sess....have to rethink his ways.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on September 25, 2010
    Huh. My review from earlier was cut off after "YAYYY!" Suffice to say, that pretty much expresses my joy at the latest chapter. And I come back because I re-read the chapter and am wondering if we'll get to see a scene between the puppy Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's demon dog form?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2010
    Well, Sessho is on the path to redeeming himself for rejecting Inu. Will Kouga have a thing or two to say to Sessho when he finds out what went down that night? It would definitely be interesting to see a demon Inu. Chances are Inu would still be subservient to Sessho since he is so powerful.

    Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
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  • From Angels9191 on September 25, 2010
    Fantastic! Much much much easier to read thank you for taking my review seriously :D I still love this story so much, Inu is adorable. And I like seeing Sess guilty and maybe feeling slightly miserable for what he's done to his pet. Hehe ohhhh I can't wait!!!!! I love where it's going too! Cute, adorable Inuyasha a demon? It's funny to think about and I have no idea how you'd be able to manage it, but I love the idea :D Eagerly awaiting your next update!
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on September 25, 2010
    YAYYYYY!!!!
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  • From ANON - ThatOnePlace on September 24, 2010
    Wahhhh my poor baby!! Sesshomaru you had better apologize or I will castrate you with a rusty screwdriver!!!
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  • From ANON - Hana on September 21, 2010
    Thank you! Thank you so very very much for writing this. I'm a huge fan of yaoi, shota and especially Inuyasha. Taking all those things and then add your amazing skills as a writer I simply can't ask for more. this story has me glued to screen with red cheeks and a bleeding nose. Please update the next chapter soon! I'm dying for the continuation.
    ~your new loyal fan
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  • From ANON - kat on September 19, 2010
    Love it. Hope to read more.
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  • From Angels9191 on September 16, 2010
    Why would we kill you for the ending? Because its a cliffhanger? That's ok, frustrating yes, cuz I REALLY wanna know what happens, but good because it seems that Sesshomaru really does care for Yasha even when he's human :D yey! I still love this story it's so cute, hehe it brings me endless enjoyment to read about Sesshy spoiling his cute little pet.

    The one thing I've noticed both about this chapter and the last was that the grammar is falling short of my expectations. It's simple things, but very distracting. Things like missing words, or putting "A" instead of "He" or something like that. Maybe read the chapter out loud first so you are more apt to notice these little buggers, or get someone else to proofread it for you =]

    Other than that I still adore this story and can't wait to see how Sesshy deals with his poor little hanyou pet. Hang in there Inuyasha!
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  • From nchsmi on September 16, 2010
    I was in tears by the time I was finished reading this. Sesshomaru should feel ashamed for thinking that Inu would have been different just because his appearance changed. He's still the same fragile pup, he's probably worse now. Since he's filled with doubts. Great chapter, till next time...

    B reading U!
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  • From Inusessgirl on September 16, 2010
    Aww poor Inu, sessy i luv u but u a punk, u didn't go and try 2 c if Inu was any diff in this form, so much 4 caring 4 ur puppy. Great chp i cant wait 4 more. thanks 4 the update.
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  • From butterflies1974 on September 16, 2010
    Why??????? You are so evil for that clifhanger....can't wait....really can't for the next chapter
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  • From Rihou101 on September 15, 2010
    LOVE the story. Keep with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki D. on September 15, 2010
    The suspensssssseeeeeee!!! Ohhh, it hurts so good! 8D I actually really like the angst here. It's very well timed and fitting for some reason to me, and I'm the romantics of all romantics, queen of fluff, or so I'd like to think. Huh. *Shrugs* Either way, characterizations were spot on and I'm anxious to see what happens when Sess-sama realizes Hanyou Inuyasha and Human Inuyasha are one in the same?? >8D I'm very very excited for the next chappie! PS: Go Raia! *Fist pump*
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