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Reviews for Want To Be Your Slave

By : LordYouko
  • From butterflies1974 on July 23, 2010
    OH! NO! Sess's Mom....I can't wait to read that chapter. But back to this one it was absolutely brilliant and I really enjoy your writing

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  • From Angels9191 on July 22, 2010
    Wonderful. Simply fantastic, I love this story so much. And I love seeing Inu finally gaining a little assurance in himself. I can't wait for Sesshy's mother to get there!! I can't wait to see what you come up with :D
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  • From ANON - arya on July 19, 2010
    wow, a perfect chapter! I really want sesshomaru to fuck the tiger. Just wow :) especially happy that sesshomaru came just before inuyasha got raped. Hopefully no
    one other than sesshomaru will be able to take advantage of inuyasha. However, I just LOVED sesshomaru's behavior. It's perfect, just the way i imagined him. At this rate the story is going great, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Andi-chan on July 13, 2010
    I really like it so far!~ I totally agree with you about Sesshomaru being unforgiving if Inuyasha had been born of his father's infidelity. Anyway, I like story's your set up, though I found some parts a bit too cheesey. Like the use of the word 'uke' instead of submissive... 'uke' just seems out of place in this fic. Though that could just be me. Gaeten's sexual humiliation was perfect! But I feel a little unsatisfied that he ended up enjoying it so much (that's my sadistic side). It will be interesting to see how your story progresses now that you've set up a love triangle. I wonder if Inuyasha will become jealous... and will Sesshomaru end up satisfying Gaeten's desires? Oh, the suspense! :]

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And hopefully some more SessInu love.
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  • From Angels9191 on July 12, 2010
    Bwahahahahahahaha this is so entertaining! I love the challenges you throw at Sess and I absolutely LOVE his father's reactions XD "Maybe I like you dirty," ahhhhahahahaha that line got me, so perfect XD your version of Inu is so cute! he's so innocent and adorable, though it would be fun to see him gain just a tiny hair of his old spunk back =] maybe once he realizes that he is worth Sess's time. What I'd really like to see though is Inu put in real danger other than the petty if cruel treatment the other's in the castle put him through. I wanna see Sess scared lol quite an absurd notion, I know, but that's what I would love to see =]

    Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From kougaslover on July 10, 2010
    That is somehow so perfectly Sesshomaru, excellent job! I love the use of pleasure as a pain so to speak and that was a perfect example of it! Plus the state of undress, naked to fully clothed, was very hot. And the fact that he had to beg to Inu of all people made it simply amazing. Again, excellent work, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Alice on July 10, 2010
    I like the innocent inuyasha you've chosen for this story. It is achingly sweet seeing him this way. I hope there will be more detail about the tiger demon's history with the prince, perhaps one with the tiger resisting his propositions of intimacy. Or a jealous inuyasha that notices this relationship between the two demons. Oh, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Alice on July 10, 2010
    I like the innocent inuyasha you've chosen for this story. It is achingly sweet seeing him this way. I hope there will be more detail about the tiger demon's history with the prince, perhaps one with the tiger resisting his propositions of intimacy. Or a jealous inuyasha that notices this relationship between the two demons. Oh, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Rihou101 on July 08, 2010
    Absolutely love your story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 08, 2010
    I liked your OC although I'm sure Sesshomaru's revenge will not be pretty. Look foward to the next chapter ;-)
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  • From Femaletengu on July 07, 2010
    I noticed a few spelling and punctuation mistakes here and there, but nothing to make the story unreadable. Maybe once you have finished the whole story go back and correct the mistakes?

    I don't usually go for OOC story's (or Yaoi for that matter) as I find some authors can take too much liberty with it. However, you have done yours in such a manner I can't help but enjoy it... and find it cute in a odd way. >.>

    Please keep up the good work.

    ~FemaleTengu~
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  • From maegerakawaii on July 07, 2010
    Man, that was indeed a great way to start the day. Poor Inu no Taisho having to face the fact that his son is definitely not innocent behind closed chamber doors. LOL. Loved that part. The way InuYasha and Sesshoumaru are written on this chapter I seem to find a bit different from the previous one. Not that I don't find the domineering Sesshoumaru totally attractive, but I sort of got the vibe that he would be a bit more gentle with Inuyasha, especially on the first time, as compared to all previous lovers. The fact that he was touched by the hanyou just seemed to suggest that to me. Though, the scene was still very hot, regardless. And I just thought Inuyasha would be a bit more clueless about sex than even in this chapter. For some odd reason I pictured him not knowing anything at all. Not even rape. I do hope he has the opportunity in the future to learn things he was deprived of when he was a slave, like maybe reading or writing (just speculating that he didn't learn those--'stupid slaves are happy slaves'--NOT!!)Nonetheless, I am loving this story and I absolutely can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru punishes Gaeten for his insolence. YAY!!!
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  • From ANON - blueesky200 on July 06, 2010
    This is wonderful. I would like it better if Inuyasha was older in the story, but oh well, in my mind he is! Good concept and well-written. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 06, 2010
    I love this story and I can't wait to see what Sess does to that 'bad Kitty'...
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  • From ANON - natasha on July 06, 2010
    wow really great chappie i sooo can't wait to see what happens next time.
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