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Reviews for Want To Be Your Slave

By : LordYouko
  • From butterflies1974 on June 14, 2010
    Oh MY! I am sooooo loving this story and I can't wait for InuYasha introdution. Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kit on June 14, 2010
    ahhhhh who cares if Inuyashas ooc hes sooooo flippen cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait to see Inu papas reaction! i hope the bunnies bite soon! and your plate gets cleared...enjoy please update soon!
    Kitsune
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  • From Angels9191 on June 14, 2010
    I love it so much, I wasn't sure if I'd like this innocent and very humble Inuyasha, but I really do love him. It's definitely more of your own character invention with Inuyasha's name, but I love this character you've created. He's so cute! I can't wait for the next chapter, please keep writing! :D
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  • From uniqueindividual on June 14, 2010
    I wonder what kind of "pet" duties Sesshomaru expects of little Inuyahsa. I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From SnowAhriman on June 14, 2010
    I love this Inuyasha. I want him under Sesshomaru...and I can't stand this pairing most of the time. You did well, I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on June 14, 2010
    This is starting to sound very interesting and I'll stay in tune to see where it goes and I don't know about the ooc for Inuyasha if your brought up like that maybe it is how he's act but I do hope you bring a little of his adorable fire into it he is so cute that way and can't wait to see how you handle the first lemon.
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  • From ANON - Mystical Moonstar on June 14, 2010
    This is a really great fic! I love how you have the characters portrayed and hope that you update soon. Please keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - arissa on June 11, 2010
    story sounds promising continue on i would like to see how a slave inuyasha differs from inuyasha in other stories where he is the hero with a bad ass attitude. make sure theres plenty of drama and suspense an romance in here thou. as for angst that works to.
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  • From Shaquana on June 04, 2010
    Love your story!! Please continue
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  • From uniqueindividual on June 02, 2010
    this looks like it's gunna get real good. I understand why you wouldn't make them brothers. I would entice a lot of OOCness. I hope you continue this story! I don't know how long this story has been up so I don't know if it has been abandoned. Either way, please update, I will check back regularly for a while.
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  • From ANON - Tepi85 on May 30, 2010
    GONNA LOVE THIS STORY I AM AN AVID READER OF YOUR OTHER STORY AS WELL I DO LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS WITH SESSHO'S EVIL SIDE IN MIND I REALLY LOVE THAT THERE IS ANOTHER PERSON WHO LOVES SESS FOR THE SAME WONDERFUL REASON'S THAT I DO. THERE ARE ALL READY TOO MANY PEOPLE HERE WHO WRITE SESS SOFT AND MUSHY....I AGREE SOMETIMES WE NEED SOME RAW NOT EMOTIONAL SESS IN OUR LIVES!!!!!!
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  • From Angels9191 on May 26, 2010
    Yey! Hehehehe I think your depiction of Sess is perfect. And I like the spin on the characters. I can't wait for more hehe =D *does happy dance*
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on May 26, 2010
    pretty please update soon, i want to know what Sesshy does to little Inuyasha, so please update
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  • From Izzanami on May 24, 2010
    Interesting so far.

    I have to say though, that I disagree about not Sesshoumaru being kind and forgiving. In canon, he doesn't kill humans on many occasions even when they try to kill him, he takes in Rin, he goes to his brother's aid, he sees InuYasha in his human form and is not surprised by it, meaning he most likely knew of his human night, yet never killed him, he goes to Kagura to be with her when she died, he leaves InuYasha unconscious with his friends when he could have killed them all and this is after Inu took his arm, tells Kagome about the Tetsusaiga controlling InuYasha's demon blood, and those are just a few examples.

    I'd say, don't write them as brother's if you don't want, that is your choice, but I really don't get this opinion that a lot of people have that he is cruel, unforgiving, can't be kind at all, etc...

    I see him more as an immature brat, I mean he is supposed to be the equivalent of a 19 year old. And basically most of his behavior throughout the entire canon is: "Daddy didn't give me the good sword... baaawwwww". He's selfish, arrogant, and egotistical, but incapable of kindness and forgiveness? I don't think so.
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  • From nchsmi on May 20, 2010
    Whoa, what a way to begin a story! I'm super excited now! Please update soon, I would love to read what develops between 'master and slave'!


    B reading U!
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