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Reviews for The painful scars underneath

By : Eternalbloodlust
  • From ANON - DemonQueen17 (not logged in) on May 05, 2011
    The only thing I didn't like about this chapter is that IT WAS TOO SHORT!!! I'm already looking forward to see what kind of 'work' Inuyasha will be doing in his new life of slavery. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Vyper on February 27, 2011
    I am a bit confused. Are you starting this from the past to the present? It is just kind of an odd thing right in the middle of the story. Perhaps you could write flashback or something so it makes more sense.
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  • From Vyper on February 16, 2011
    I can't belive that Inuyasha was castrated. I really feel for him in this story since I know Inuyasha truly loves Kagome and although raping her was wrong it seems that Sesshoumaru is the one to blame for part of this since he initiated rape when it came to his little brother. Perhaps Inuyasha doesn't know any better than this since he was never shown compassion by anyone not that it excuses what he did. I seriously think Sesshoumaru is being a bastard to both Kagome and Inuyasha in this story. He really doesn't deserve Kagome, in fact neither brother deserves her. I am surprised that Kagome hasn't considered suicide and same with Inuyasha.
    I wonder if Sesshoumaru will use his sword to heal his brother's wounds and then inflict them again and again. Sesshoumaru is pretty sadistic in this story so it wouldn't suprise me if he did.
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on February 14, 2011
    OMG Another great chapter! Thank you so much for this one. It was so sad, but I feel like were are finally seeing all the pieces fall into place. Keep them coming!
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  • From Vyper on February 11, 2011
    It seems to me that Inuyasha has pretty much lost his mind. He really doesn't know who he is anymore and it seems Sesshoumaru is enjoying taking advantage of this whole situation. I don't think that Sesshoumaru really loves Kagome since he is doing dispicable things and had been before he agreed to be with Kagome. I think he is using both Kagome and Inuyasha in his own rather sick plans.
    Even as much as I hate what my Father did to me, I wouldn't wish such terrible things upon him as he did to me and he had abused me every day from when I was 2 to when I was 13. All that is, is sinking to their level. Fact is Sesshoumaru might as well have raped Inuyasha when he allowed others to do so and he has a lot of things to attone for and what he is doing to Inuyasha is just as sick and wrong as what Inuyasha was doing to Kagome if not worse.
    This story makes me mad and sad at the same time.
    I honestly do not think Inuyasha really knows what he is doing to Kagome especially since he really deep down doesn't want to hurt her. He is living in a fantasy and has no touch of reality. If he did he wouldn't be doing the things he does.
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  • From Vyper on February 04, 2011
    I am not one for saying that rapists shouldn't be punished, but this is bordering on rediculous. I hope that Inuyasha dies soon. It would be best he dies than lives like this. This story is just so sad. If nothing else since the jewel gave him life as a human the least that could happen is that the contract with the jewel could become void and Inuyasha could go back to being a hanyou. I just don't think Inuyasha should suffer anymore.
    Also Sesshoumaru is so very sadistic in this story. I almost hate him even if he is my favorite character. Sesshoumaru is sick and twisted in this story I hope he suffers somehow for all that he has done to Inuaysha, his Mother, and what he is doing to Kagome is almost as bad as what Inuyasha did. It makes me want Sesshoumaru to die alone in misery for all the people he has hurt.
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on December 28, 2010
    Yey! A chapter just for me? Thank you! I really liked the twist that came with this chapter. It's nice to know that somewhere deep down Kagome doesn't completely hate Inuyasha. You hinted on that a little on the last chapter, but I thought it might have been just some kind of confusion in Kagome's mind. Not sure at what point in time the second half is in, and if it's really a dream or not, but I'm sure you'll explain it in the next chapter. Dang you, wonderful cliffies. :) Can't wait for more.
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on December 24, 2010
    It's nice to get some answers of how everything went down. It's slowly being pieced together. Thanks, teasers are good!
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on December 22, 2010
    I am so torn. I don't know what I should feel for Inuyasha. Sad cause it's gone to far, or Happy cause is went all stalker like. Can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From Eternalbloodlust on December 10, 2010
    The disclaimer is corrected and now I hope its ok.

    Thank you to all of you guys who reviewed this story & approved of it! I really appreciate your reviews...and thanks again!
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on November 27, 2010
    I love and hate Inuyasha in this story. I think that's what you were going for, so great job. I feel so bad for the way inu ended up, but he is seriously twisted in the head. Keep writing!
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on September 21, 2010
    I like this story. It is very interesting and I will read more. All the different flashback and dreams do make it kinda hard to read and it takes a minute to figure out what going on. Other then that it is a different twist then what we are used to.
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  • From Angelchan on August 09, 2010
    Awe....
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  • From kittyscookiesrus on June 06, 2010
    where is the rest!?????
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  • From Vyper on May 24, 2010
    This is an iteresting story, I hope to read more soon.
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