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Reviews for The Alpha and the Daiyoukai

By : Neptunesdemon
  • From LordYouko on November 24, 2012
    I love your characterization of Kouga - submissive but with that wolfish animalism that's so him. It's a rare pairing, unfortunately and even rarer that the author manages to keep them in character, like you have. I love the fact that you kept Kouga as an alpha instead of making him a submissive; he's just not a natural submissive. Of course, Sesshoumaru can turn anyone into an uke but that's the good part. Kouga's battle with himself, as an alpha that finds himself wanting to submit, is very well written.

    I read in one of your author's notes that you were considering making it an mpreg. It's a good idea, though I hope you don't plan on making Sesshoumaru endure his crankiness and insubordination just because he's pregnant. So many authors do that but I just can't see Sesshoumaru letting an uke go without punishment even if they're pregnant.

    I hope you turn this into a long story and update soon.
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  • From Pumpkinpi on March 24, 2012
    Sooooo Kinky, looks like most of the gang had fun with that toy! Wonder what Kagome will do with it after she finds out what they all did with it! Love it!!!
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  • From Vyper on January 04, 2012
    It would be fun to have all four sexy males enjoying each other. Especially if Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru get it on together. Sorry, I am a sucker for Inu/Sess incest. It would be fricking hilarious for Sesshoumaru to be Inuyasha's uke, but whatever works right?
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  • From ANON - me not you on November 27, 2010
    do not make this a multi chapter fic. you have not finished unexpected circumstances.
    and p.s you have plenty of reviews for unexpected circumstances, but clearly that has not "inspired you to work faster"
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  • From ANON - Vixen12089 on November 25, 2010
    This is good so far, but PLEASE no mpreg. It gets tiring after while. Too many people do it and I feel that it's better without it. Thanks for another great story.
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  • From ANON - yoko0525 on October 05, 2010
    this is awesome!!! w/ it would be funy the mpreg, hey sesshou-sama you remember those many times in the cave well now there a gift... ajajaja hilarious XD

    Hey there this idea in my mind... you should make the toy's bateries to die!!! so they'd had to go to kagome and Sesshoumar being who he is make her go for more, can you imagine... awkward situation between kagome (because of what it is), Inuyasha and Miroku (they started the whole problem and oh so merry memories) and Kouga (the smells like him). I don't know if it interesting for you (and I don't if I'm explaining myself wel enough :S) but, if anything there's my email.

    bye till next time.
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  • From kougaslover on October 04, 2010
    Wow, that was phenomenal! Excellently done, and so very hot! I'd love you to continue on with this fic, and possibly incorporate a chapter with both Kouga and Inu under Sesshomaru's devilishly good ministrations. Seriously though, that was beautifully written and so damn hot, excellent work!
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  • From ANON - clarissa on August 15, 2010
    great story i'm hooked only after the first chapter. Definitly keep going hopefully making it into a full fledge mpreg story great ideas for that brewing
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  • From Pumpkinpi on June 06, 2010
    I really loved the way you connected this story with your first one. Inuyasha's brothers isn't as much of a prune as the younger sibling thinks he is. In fact the daiyoukai is a kinky freak in the "bedroom" department! And Kouga learned this first hand! I hope you continue!!!
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  • From ANON - TheNeptuneFan on June 04, 2010
    this was a very interesting story! i like :). why have you not updated unexpected circumstances yet?!!!!
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