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Reviews for The Bastard's Gift

By : Nightbloom

From wavedancer70 on October 19, 2011
Please finish this story...........I soooo love it?
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From ANON - sara on August 15, 2011
love it hope there will be more soon
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From ANON - kat on July 04, 2011
loving it. hope there will be more soon.
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From uniqueindividual on June 26, 2011
Glad you updated! It is kinda funny to imagine EVERYONE hitting on Inuyasha in such a brash way....cause no one has really hit on him before. Also, it is a mistake for Katsu to kill/absorb Jaken, but if it helps people realize he is getting "creepiness guidance" from Naraku, then I think Jaken's sacrifice would not be in vain. Poor Jaken, no one likes him(except Rin...who likes everyone).
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From jdbbrz27 on June 24, 2011
Wow your writing is getting better and better. I loved how Sessh referred to Inuyasha as a rose because he is beautiful to look at and sweet smelling innocence with thorns to keep all who would harm him at bay I loved it. The ball was fun and I loved how you touched on others but kept it mainly about Sessh and Inuyasha. I wonder though who use the tunnel before Katsu maybe well a certain little Sesshomaru at one time or another. Gotta adimit though scares me when little Katsu is with Naraku you can tell Naraku's evilness is rubbing off a little. I hope Katsu doesn't hurt Jaken I mean he can be annoying but I find the little toad kind of endearing and oh so loyal. I loved the line tailer from hell boy I laughed at that one my sister was visiting at the time and looked at me like I lost my mind. On Y if you have the time you should do a picture of Inuyasha in the blue Kimono the one in the painting and Sessh adimiring the painting especially since it has been brought up a few times and Inuyasha was probably breathtaking. Thank you so much for this story it's awesome and your doing great.
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From Vyper on June 23, 2011
Poor Inuyasha having to deal with all those snobby people. And Katsu is sure getting fiesty. I hope he will be ok since Naraku is such a bastard. As for Jaken he deserves whatever Katsu does to him.
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From jdbbrz27 on June 12, 2011
I finally got to read this boy it took awhile to find some quiet time alone and as always loved it. I always love how Inuyasha is always willing to fight for what and who he is no matter the odds against him and of course I love his rashness and brashness. I was reading some Dennis the Menace comics to my niece yesterday and Dennis reminded me that Inuyasha would be like that as a child if he had a good childhood you know in constant mischief but not really doing it on purpose and full of to much energy and curiousity for his own good. Anyway I loved the confrontation with Arashi that was beautifully done. And Arashi having a hard time with his wolf council nice real nicely done. The scenting as always I loved and I am pleased that Inuyasha told Katsu a bit about Naraku I've was really proud of how you had him tell him the truth as much of it as a child that age needed to know anyway. I was also thrilled that Katsu has decided to hate Naraku more than Sesshomaru. Although it makes me wonder what you have in store with Sessh and Katsu that relationship should be very interesting come the future and dare I say it the confrontations because obviously Katsu has Inuyasha's bravery mixed in with Naraku's treachery so which side will overcome and be more dominate in Katsu you have done well in making Katsu an enigma or a question mark in this story great job. The only thing we really know about Katsu is that Inuyasha is first and foremost the most important aspect in his young life rightly so and he will do anything to see that Inuyasha is safe and happy which is usually what all kids want for their parents but like all kids they tend to see things differently and screw up now and again so this story just keeps getting better and better. And as always I always love the pictures on y-gallery one of my fav. sites thanks for keeping up to date on this super story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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From uniqueindividual on June 12, 2011
Oh no!!! Everyone is targeting Katsutoshi! Well, except for Inuyasha...but the whole reason they are targeting Katsutoshi is to get into Inuyasha's pants. Poor kid is probably gunna get overwhelmed by all the schemes...while in his own scheme....there are a lot of schemes. I can't wait to see what is going to happen!
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From Vyper on June 11, 2011
That last chapter was hot. I loved how almost out of control Sesshoumaru was with the sex. I hope that Sesshoumaru sees that Inuyasha should be his forever as his mate.
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From jdbbrz27 on May 25, 2011
Well as always excellent work very inventive and intriguing I gotta say. I loved how Sessh put his scent on Inuyasha and Sessh's thoughts about it. I was so relieved when he didn't have to mount him a little to early and to traumatic for our sweet little Inu at this time. I am loving the witchy doctor at least she isn't gonna let Inuyasha ruin his health or do anything contrary to his pregnancy and she is sweet as nector to little Katsu so I love that also how she treated Sessh how appropriate of a really good healer. The party sounds like fun and I love Katsu's questions really typical of a kid. I'm just worried now cause of your little cliffy at the end I really hope Sessh saves Inuyasha and shows Katsu that he will protect Inuyasha at least then Katsu might give him a chance if they ever get to that part and I really hope that Kouga's little cub survives Inuyasha's ordeal. And yes I do see the old Inuyasha come out now and again like for instance climbing out of the window and leaving his guards how typical of the old Inuyasha who always proclaimed he could take care of himself no matter what without thinking of the repercussions he can face if he can't handle what ever by himself the little brat I so agree with the healer on the brat part. Yea I'm thrilled I found you on all 3 sites that means more readers for you and anyone who enjoys Inuyasha yaoi should read this great story. By the way if you do ever want to contact me you can always get me at my email site or at my ygallery site same with the same site name as this one. You should do a picture of Inuyasha and Sessh in those celebration outfits on ygallery that would be cool like when Sessh bites Inuyasha or better yet when Sessh tilts Inuyasha's head up and asks if he accepts totally cool. Man I really wish I had some talent for writing or drawing authers and artists like you make it look so easy and I know darn well it's not. Well I'll be waiting for the next brilliant chappie.
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From randrinawilson on May 25, 2011
Inuyasha babys his son so much that he has failed to warn him about how dangerous naraku is. in the begining I though thought that Katsu knew who naraku was when he met him but he just scented him as his blood sire. kouga was killed by this demon. the very same demon that kouga looked to as a father was killed by the demon that katsu is secretly meeting with. Inuyasha thinks that he is protecting his son but the only thing he is doing is leaving the door wide open for the devil to walk right tthrough.

Sesshomaru is so caught up in the fact that Katsu is naruko son that he is missing the fact that this is a powerful young man that is full of potential that can be molded. He just wants him out of the way. Out of sight. If sesshomaru had his way, so it seems, kouga's cub would be out of the picture as well because he is continously telling inuyasha that he doesnt know if he wnats to offer to have kouga's cub be his ward or not. and we all know that Arashi would just kill both children. inuyasha is just viewed as a weakling here. The healer chie was hilarious when even she stated she didnt know how he managed to birth a fine son like katsu. She thinks he is too dainty and not built for birthing. every one treats him as though he cant make any decisions or is less than a person. i hope inuyasha can come through the birth of this wolf cub and get some of his fire back. this whole situation has shaken his spirit. making him put up with his brother for the sake of his children being safe and the safety of the wolfes that were cast out.

but i questiion the pairing. why in the world would inuyasha every fall in love with sesshomaru. the only thing he has ever been was hateful to him. all hi life he has tried to kil him. seven years ago he told him to kill Katsu when he was pregnant with him as a condition of brigning back his friends and that was a trick. he couldn t bring them back. he had already done that once. he basicly told inuyasha then that you can only come with me if you get rid of that hing inside you. now that he is there asking for sanctuary now, inyuasha knows that he hates katsu and doesnt want kougas' cub there but he is giving them sanctuary untill the cub is born and inuyasha can return to the wolf pack with kouga's heir. i am looking for the reciepe for the romace because right now i just want to strangle sesshomaru, whoop Katsu bottom and choke out arashi and the elders!!!!!11 But I am 100%% lovin it!!!!!! it is addictive. I just wish you could update faster.
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From Vyper on May 23, 2011
I hope Sesshoumaru deals with Arashi. That bastard needs an ass whooping badly. Poor Inuyasha, not only does he have to deal with his brother being an asshole.....wait......I guess that is kind of normal for Inuyasha. Anyway I feel for my favorite hanyou. Please let someone save Inuyasha from that bastard wolf demon and maybe even Sesshoumaru if he keeps being an ass. Talk about vain, mirrors all over his bedroom? I say closet pervert. Although I do love the demon Lord.....he is yummy.
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From uniqueindividual on May 22, 2011
Poor Inuyasha, everyone treats him like a girl. The being pregnant thing doesn't really help him with fighting, either. Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter! Even though the creep has confronted Inuyasha.
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From ANON - Rawthorne on May 21, 2011
Wonderful!
This is one of my absolute favorite stories and I hope you will keep updating it quickly. Everyone is so well written and the chapter lengths are fantastic. Please keep up the work!
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From randrinawilson on May 09, 2011
This story is so good. I dont know whether I find Katsu to be a creepy beautiful disaster or the hidden hero of the story. He actually holds naruko's heart in his chest now. katsu could actually kill him. He is actually the only one that could kill him at this point but you dont know which way the kid rolls. He doesnt trust Naruku but he still met up with him and actually absorbed something from him into his body and listens to his voice in his head. He wont acknowledge him as a parent because he says only kouga and inuyasha have that honor but while he may feal that he is in control of the situation he is only going to end up causing his father heartache with this path that he is taking now and will be his fault because he is playing games with naraku for power banking on the fact that he will be the one to maintain control. he is seven! Inuyasha hasnt even had a chance to mourn Kouga yet and he is in a power struggle poor thing and he doesnt know whats going on behind the scenes with his son and sesshomaru realy has some nerve. He gave Inuyasha an ultimatum/order 7 years ago and expected him to follow it blindly without any regards to how inuyasha felt. When inuyasha didnt do what he wanted sesshomaru had the nerve to feel betrayed. Here is someone else that doesnt want inu's son around. Maybe with good reason, we dont know at this point, but he stil wants him gone. Inuyasha is just suffering all around here. All around. The wolf pack just wants him to submit to Arashi and when they find out about the cubs they want to take them too. I really hope that inuyasha actually turns this around. I was wondering, is your inuyasha character suppoused to be this weak of spirit and body? not talking about while he is pregnant because he seemed like he took on a weak submissive persona to kouga's personality in this story versus the canon. not conplaining, totally agreeing with writer liscence to do at will with there story, just trying to make sure that I understood the context of the story to continue my reading pleasure. looking forward to the net chapter.
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