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By : TheKaytla
  • From drcomalfy on October 01, 2011
    Haven't reviewed on here D8!

    Goddamn. That was so hot. I love how you had it so you couldn't really tell who it was until the end! It makes it so much sexier, and Sesshoumaru flittering through the emotions and sensations, took the reader on that ride as well. Like all of your other one-shots this could easily become a chapter fic- though I can see it as a chapter fic of how they GOT to this specific point, and I would enjoy it SOOO much :3 Maybe when you're done with your other fics (and stop making new fics - yeah right xD-) you can do it if the idea appeals to you xDD

    Gahh. *slobbers all over you cause I CAN*

    -DM
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on September 13, 2011
    Ha! That was fantastic. Right up till the end, where he said that bit about being expected to be perfect, I thought it was Inuyasha on the bottom! I have to admit that I so enjoy the way you write. I think I have read them all. And if you haven't done so already and I just haven't found it yet, could I suggest a Miroku/Inuyasha fic?! Pretty please with smut on top?!
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  • From vampiressmarie on November 20, 2010
    I like this one alot. it truely kept me guessing >.< I love how detailed your fanfic's are. I prefer Sesshomaru as the dominant one but its always nice to see things mixed up. ^-^
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  • From dyami on November 11, 2010
    Interesting.
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on October 28, 2010
    OMG That was good. I totally thought that was Inuyasha's POV right up until the end. Great Job!
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  • From KitenKaiba on October 24, 2010
    Don’t listen to them! Heh, love the one shot and have been working on one myself along similar lines. I have to disagree with everyone that says Sesshoumaru doesn’t make a good uke, I honestly find his calmer demeanour easier to see in an uke position. Inuyasha on the other hand is so very loud and brash seeing him as submissive the way a lot of people write him is really OOC. Then again I am a fan of the more calmer nicer take on Sesshoumaru, after all the way he acts with rin dose scream off a much softer side >.> but that’s just me.

    Keep up the good work and I am reading and loving your other fic too just haven’t reviewed yet. (Because you have reviews set to you have to be logged in and I am lazy : P)

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  • From midnightsweet on October 24, 2010
    nice
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  • From ardentes on October 24, 2010
    I liked this story! Usually I hate when Sesshomaru is uke because the writer never tells you why someone soo strong would ever give over control to another. However, you explained it beautifully and it made this story more enjoyable and truly a great story! Yes, I understand that it's a oneshot but it is a very well-down oneshot and I cannot resist falling head over heels for such a good story!
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  • From NelaniDC on October 23, 2010
    One word "HOT !"
    I prefer Sesshoumaru to be the seme and the dominant one in the relationship. Somehow I'm unable to appreciate Sess as the uke. But your story is really good though my perference is to the roles to be reserved. I really like your writing style and language too. I wish your other story "Penetration" will have Sesshoumaru as the seme and dominant. No pressure here ! I only wish ! (*sigh*)
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  • From Sessholord on October 23, 2010
    This was a great chapter!! I agree that there aren't that many Sesshoumaru uke stories where he would actually be somewhat in character, and most have him in the seme position. Great chapter! Please update soon if you planning on continuing this!
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