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Reviews for Alpha-Beta

By : SplendentGoddess
  • From BlaqueBohemian on March 18, 2018

    That was i thoroughly entertaining first chapter! I appreciated how you set the atmosphere in the begging. I also found Kagome's spacetime paradox concerns hilarious.


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  • From isisriku90 on October 24, 2014
    Very cool story. I almost didn't read this one. I really love your stories, and the reviews you leave others. I tend to read what you post on "The Return". You tend to give me more incites into the story :)
    I love the pack dynamics and how you reconciled their alpha problem. It was very sweet how Inuyasha discovered his human ways of loving Kagome. Very sweet, great job
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  • From ANON - Pink Fuzzy Elephant on April 27, 2013
    Very well written a lovely story
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  • From ANON - wolfmoonsshadow on July 15, 2012
    Very nice! I love the whole hierarchy, psychology. The whole relationship aspect of the characters is the best part!
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  • From WetDogNose on August 26, 2011
    Another one of my favorites here. You always put em in the best scenarios whilst simultaneously keeping them in character. Makes for sexy hotspring goodness. And the dominance/submission angle was a good bit of intro plot before the real fun started. And she gets no sympathy from me for calculus until she spends 3 hours with integrals solving work on a charged particle, but I digress...steamy sexspring=happy reading.
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on December 30, 2010
    That was so well written and very realistic. I loved the whole story, it was very 'in character' and the alpha/beta idea is very believable. I am so glad it worked out well for them. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From Vyper on December 30, 2010
    This is another wonderfully written story about Inuyasha and Kagome. Thank you.
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on December 29, 2010
    I like it I like it!!! XD
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