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Reviews for What Doesn't Kill You (alternate)

By : dragonfire2687
  • From GoblinQueen83 on December 19, 2019

    CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!! I LOVE IT AND WANT TO SEE HOW IT ENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From Inuyashalover on April 26, 2019

    Please please continue this.this is awesome so much emotion. It made me laugh and cry.it would be cool to see how everything turns out after the fight.so please please finish this awesome book.


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  • From GoblinQueen83 on April 17, 2018

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!!!

    i WANT TO SEE SANGO, MIROKU, KAGOME, INUYASHA, AND SHIPPO BACK TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!

    NO MESSING WITH THE SESS/KAG PLEASE!!!!!!!!


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  • From GoblinQueen83 on April 01, 2018

    PLEASE WE NEED THE REST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - jazmine on December 16, 2012
    I loved your story I'm glad that everyone Ok the in the inu group is Ok I loved this story so much I'm reading it for the third and sending and email for the second. but I still want 2 know how it ends did everyone that kagome usedthe jewel for really came back like sango brother and the demon slayer village what about miroku father and other ancesiro that died because of the wind tunnel and shippo dad if he comes back will he have to leave kagome and the others what about the other members from the band of seven that kagome made alive again and naraku killed again. And will sango and miroku remember that inuyasha killed them because of his demon side will they for give him if they do what about what he to kagome and will they except that he's mated to koga. I really can't wait until u update this story and I think I can speak for everyone when we to know what's going 2 happen next
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  • From mari_mari on June 08, 2012
    A well written story, hope you will update it soon, it doesn't seem like chapter 25 was the end.
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  • From Dumplin139 on June 06, 2012
    I love your story and I'm hoping you will consider finishing it up. For one that writes as well as you it would truely be a shame to waste talent. Also you are among a few you actually gives Inuyasha the happy ending I feel he deserves. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2011
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information.
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  • From jazzie on September 19, 2011
    Im glade your not giving up on this story because i loved it I am not trying to pressure you. but I cant wait to see what happends next like will sango and miroku remember that inuyasha killed them if they do will they forgive him or never want anything to do with him again. will kagome go back to being a regular human or be inhuman again. will sangos family and people from her village come back 2 life what about miroku family that died from the wind tunnel curse. i hope you add some more chapters or finish soon i been checking every other day to see if this story was finish I cant wait to see what you come up with next you are a good writer
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  • From lara5170 on August 14, 2011
    Just read the last(?)ch.25. This was a very good story but,it didn't say completed so,is there going to be more? Kagome said something,vague about either,being 'just' human or a powerless human? Please!Will you tell us,was that what she feared,or what she knew,might happen-When Kagome used her power: to fight Naraku,save Kanna & Kagura,protect her family & friends,she then,used every last bit of her Immortal powers to power the wish & save every life he took-causing her death but,then,those who,Deep In Their Hearts,felt the hurt of her loss cried & their tears brought her back to life but, when she came back to life,did she:lose her powers as an'Immortal'to live as a mere human or as the Immortal being,in charge of maintaining the balance? ....I'm glad to finally find out what she was & that Naraku died & all of her friends & anyone who Naraku had killed was alive .Wait! Doesn't that include Sango's brother Kohaku & the entire 'Slayers Village' that Sango was from ?
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  • From lara5170 on August 12, 2011
    I hate Naraku,wouldn't it be great if Naraku plans to torture & rape someone,to break them but,instead he ends up losing everything,completely powerless,helpless,held by a psycho,who decides the only punishment for him,is to torture,beat,rape,till he's broken. I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Midoriko going to talk to them again ???ifen
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  • From lara5170 on August 12, 2011
    I love this story.I just read ch.14.I'm happy Sessh & Kagome got Mated & it was Hot! I thought,when he bit her,he was marking her with his mating mark but,after they bathed,napped & he gave her the dinner tray in bed,it says-'[Sesshomaru couldn’t help but look at his mark that was not upon her neck.He felt his chest swell with happiness.]'.Is it a mistake? It says 'NOT' but,it feels wrong.(Can we ask the writer?)If it's wrong,will the bite mark stay or change to a Crescent Moon,like he has on his forehead? I know their aura's combined but,is she supposed to mark or bite him &/or take in some of his blood? I thought a blood exchange makes him immune to her Miko powers & her immune to his poison(& youkai?),also,when she carries his pups,if they have his poison ability she'd be safe,yes/no? Is it going to say what she is,what type of Immortal being ???...it's driving me crazy.
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  • From lara5170 on August 12, 2011
    This is my 3rd time trying to leave a review-I really like this story but I was curious if we are ever going to find out what Kagome really is? I mean it said already that she's an Immortal but it never tells us WHAT SHE IS,please tell us??? Where did Kirara go ,she hasn't been mentioned since they got Sessh's home?? I know Miroku & Sango are dead but are they going to leave their bodies in the place where Inu killed them when he raped Kagome afterward??? Are they going to come back???I'm on ch.12 or 13 now so I'll keep reviewing I think there is another 5-10 moe chaps to read & it doesn't say completed..I'm very excited,I hope this story is abandoned.
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  • From lara5170 on August 10, 2011
    That was really good,I just read ch.13. Those swords were cool & how they worked together,they sad they made their swords using one of their own fangs & some of their own soul,does that mean they were demon's (1 or 2 tigers & a dragon)? I'm also happy about Sessh & Kagome. What Kagome did to Jaken was hysterical,he really doesn't listen,even when he knows he'll pay a price for being an idiot...not the best nanny.
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  • From lara5170 on August 10, 2011
    I don't know if I should be reviewing after each chapter or not.It's my 1st time reading & I'm already at ch.10.I keep forgetting this is an 'AU' FF & I get to a part where I'm thinking to myself 'what is going on?'.I'm confused by Kagome's behavior a bit,if what happened with Inu was so traumatic,as to unlock her powers,even if she knows it wasn't him but,his demon blood,it was still him (his face & smell)& being able to give him a hug?,seeing him kill Sango & Miroku(didn't Shippo see it,also?)?Where is Kirara,the 2 tailed firecat?Are you going to tell us why 'Kagome's time' is the way it is(so,we know what or why,it's an 'AU' with a black market & the bizarre club) & where her Mom gramps were? I'm excited to read what'll happen next.
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