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Reviews for Where He Belongs

By : AikawaAkihiko
  • From Laiko on November 19, 2011
    I love this story, but I think if you ruined the cliffhanger. Had the section with Kouga and Inuyasha happened first, you would have lulled the reader into thinking you were focusing on just the pregnancy and their relationship. That section should have stopped before you revealed the cubs were kidnapped. The rising action would be much more dramatic.

    Imagine ending it with "Tsunekuni was lost in his panic. He never noticed the warning, pleading look from Nakamasa. He never saw the glance exchanged between Tametoki and Genji. He missed completely when Genji bent over to pick up good palm sized rock from the ground. He was still standing, arms wrapped around the struggling cub and ranting hysterically when Genji ripped the cub from his grasp at the same time he brought the rock down in a crushing blow to Tsunekuni’s head." Now that's powerful!

    I hope you take this critcism in the spirit it was given.
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  • From uniqueindividual on November 19, 2011
    OMG!!! Cliffhanger!!
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  • From Vyper on November 19, 2011
    I don't want the Omega to die. How sad. I hope Koga can get his people to stop leaving too. What a mess!
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  • From darkaura204 on November 19, 2011
    great chapter.
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  • From kitmistress on November 17, 2011
    please tell me the omega (sorry cant remember name) isn't dead! he was so sweet!cant he just be out cold or something! dont let him die!!!!!!! anyways amazing chapter per usual, nice, evil cliffy and nice little sex scene thrown in there, well done. Cant wait to see how Inu and Kouga react to there cubs being stolen.
    thanks for the update! and your spelling and whatnot were fine.

    Kit
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  • From Arieru on November 17, 2011
    Ahhhhhh an update. I love this story. I can't wait to read more. And hopefully soon ^^
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  • From ANON - lenore on November 16, 2011
    i hate the fact that you have not updated the story and i hope you do soon it's been three months since you have please do...
    thanks u...
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  • From ANON - Yep on October 15, 2011
    I never understood how having puppies would work for Inuyasha since he turned human once a month wouldn't that kill the baby?
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  • From ANON - yamiik on September 11, 2011
    oh im happy you updated this story i love it i love how kouga kickass for inu keep updating and ill be there to review and read

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  • From ANON - Wyren09 on September 07, 2011
    Amazing story! Gah, the short chapters are killing me...please update soon!
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  • From Rihou101 on September 07, 2011
    Omg... LOVED IT!!! Keep up the good work.
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  • From Vyper on September 05, 2011
    I love the last chapter. Inuyasha is so cute. He is going to be such a good Mommy to his pups and Sesshoumaru is going to be an Uncle. I wonder how he is going to feel about that. I doubt he ever would believe his little brother could have pups and it would make for some seriously good chapters to have Sesshoumaru possibly challenge Kouga for his mate since his brother can carry pups. Just a thought.
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  • From ANON - laiko on September 05, 2011
    That was freaking awesome! Love this story. More, please!!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda Windsor on August 27, 2011
    Hi, just wondering when is the next chapter coming out?? I really want 2 know what happens next!! T-T
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  • From Enigma180 on August 14, 2011
    I liked it. It was short, but it works for a transition chapter. As always, very well written, good job >^-^
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