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Reviews for A Heat to Overcome

By : Sparrowhawk

From MarCapuNava on August 20, 2017
I probably should say this but I'm gonna anyway!!! I read your story @Lyran in about 4-5 days... Went to bed late and was super tired for work the next day, but the next day I would do it again... Went like that until I got to chap 26 today and I was like "Wait... what? is done?" I love long chapters, long chaptered stories... so it made me very happy, and to top it off like a cherry on a Sunday...it was really well-written and enjoyed it immensely...
Constructive criticism: I did struggle a bit with some sections... more than anything it was a fluidity issue more than grammar or sentence structure... I stilled enjoyed it immensely and I hope not just for the sake of the story (or stories if you have more than one going-haven't checked, but will after I'm done typing:)) that your health improves... I hope my review finds you well... It must be hard to have the muse and the want to other things, but not be able to do so due to your health... I hope you stay strong and that modern medicine is able to find you relieve, if not a cure or a solution of sorts for you to live a normal-ish life!!!
Best wishes,
MarCapuNava AKA Maritza

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From arianauchiha23451 on August 09, 2017
OMG.... this story gets better the more i read it.... please update so that i can see what happens next

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From jewl on August 08, 2016
I believe Hoshina means stars hoshi means star the Na means more than one I'm not positive tho

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From morningstorm70 on January 28, 2016
Lookingfoward to the nxt chap,
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From morningstorm70 on January 27, 2016
Email 4 updates and new stories
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From ANON - Jenn on October 10, 2015
Please continue this story please I am dying for an update ,third time I read the story love it
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From Calixandria_420 on January 23, 2015
I really love this story! Please update soon.
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From nchsmi on December 22, 2014
This one made me cry even more. It brought back memories of the most awful time of my life! And, how my husband, like Sesshomaru did for InuYasha, helped me through. The loving care that was displayed by Sesshomaru, in the way he spoke, washed, soothed, protected, and provided for InuYasha was a reminder of how my husband stuck by me through my illness. Sesshomaru was the very essence of what a good mate/husband should be and is!

Awesome chapter! I need to buy more Kleenex. Until the next chapter...

B reading U!
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From nchsmi on December 22, 2014
Oh. My. Good. Sweet. LORD!!!
Emotionally charged doesn't even begin to describe what this chapter is. Lance through the heart was just so fitting a title for this! I'm in tears! For InuYasha to have survived such brutality, and still come out of it... pure! It's just so mind blowing.
Sesshomaru has his work cut out for him, but listening to InuYasha's confessions and getting a grasp of the terror in his heart is a start!
I'm glad Sesshomaru ordered Kagome to be checked. There is something seriously wrong with that girl. I'm just hoping that she won't be able to fool them.
This was awesome, I can't believe I've missed this and the next chapter of this story. It's just been so long since I was last on this site. On to the next chapter!

B reading U!
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From ANON - wolfluv on November 03, 2014
FIRST OF ALL....... DAMN!!! THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!! I'll have you know that I spent two and half days awake to get to this last chapter. I would do the whole OH I'll just read to the end of this chapter and I'll put in my fav's and read it tomorrow you know.... BUT NOOOOO....I'd get to the end of one and think HOLY CRAP WHAT HAPPEND??? I must say hearing or at least reading how many slavers had their way with him and how they did was kinda like a car wreck you just couldn't stop looking reading I told myself you gone this far SUCK IT UP AND READ ON! I must also say I do not enjoy what happened but it was very cleansing in a way for both Inu Sessh and you and us for that matter and I truly enjoyed that! I love Suzu by the way! I cannot wait till he starts training the Inu and I wonder WHO will he truly be dominated in a good way by!!! OH YEAH AND BY THE WAY THAT WAS AWESOME TOO! The whole he dies to prove a point and Sessh revives him only to heal all he has lost YEAH I TRULY LOVED THAT TOO BY THE WAY!!!! I HOPE WHEN YOU GET A CHANCE YOU TELL US WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! OH and the whole Kagome thing yeah I can honestly respect how you've written her Most go over board defending her or bash her to hell and then some... YOU on the other hand have the right balance and I like that. I'm one of those who thinks she should have taken that damn thing off by now too... Anywho I can't wait till the next exciting chapter! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AWESOME STORY!
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From ANON - Naomi on October 15, 2014
The last chapter was really good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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From AidaLily on October 04, 2014
Yay! You posted this because you missed me. lol. Suzu and I are doing just fine. When I am not secretly drugging his drinks to make him forget he has somewhere to be, I am pretending to be a mad scientist making vampire bat demon who loves the moonlight. Then this demon is going to come and sweep Suzu's sexy ass right off his feet. *nods sagely* That demon will be me... with male parts and then I won't have to give him back ever! *evil laughs before calming and looking like an innocent angel* Or maybe I will stay a girl... hmm... can't really tell what he likes with some of those forgetful drugs I give him from time to time. *smiles*

Sorry to hear that you have a cold. I've had a stubborn cold for the last few days and so I know how you feel. I agree that uke Sesshomaru should be done right. Some characters I just love to see uke like Sesshomaru and other characters like Kouga, I can't see as bottoms.

Now for the chapter, I think that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationship has progressed quite nicely over the span of the story thus far. I love the amount of growth Inuyasha continues to show from knowing when to appeal to Sesshomaru's instincts and when to accept his guidance. Basically, I am loving that Inuyasha seems to be learning the delicate art of picking and choosing his battles. I do like that he is allowing Sesshomaru closer to him and that Sesshomaru is understanding and patient because of what had happened. One of the points I loved about this chapter would be how Inuyasha breached the issue of Kagome and how he hadn't wanted to distress the other with her words and comments. I love that when Sesshomaru mentioned his suspicions and what was wrong, Inuyasha took the time to fully think about the situation instead of flying off the handle. It definitely shows a bit of that mature hanyou we saw when he had ripped out Lady Botanmaru's tongue and handled the potentially dangerous situation with as clear a head as possible.

The heat scene was sweet, but admittedly I was kind of amused when Sesshomaru talked about how long it was taking and how sore he was. I have no idea why. I guess I just imagine Sesshomaru sitting there thinking 'Again Inuyasha? At this rate my dick is going to fall off.' or something to that effect. I like how the heat wasn't just going to be Inuyasha submitting but also a healing point for him since he had finally been able to think of Sesshomaru and not of those awful slavers. The morning after I think was definitely good for them as well.

Sesshomaru is definitely adapting more to helping Inuyasha and noticing Inuyasha's moods or thoughts without the hanyou having to voice something too embarrassing. In the same way as I mentioned above, Inuyasha is coming to terms with Sesshomaru and Sesshomaru's nature.

I am truly interested in reading the update, but you will most likely get another long review of me *coughs* borrowing Suzu *coughs*. A 'Suzu fangirl' shirt would be awesome! :) I should totally figure out how to make one. I would agree that you don't need permission and have no room to talk. Lol. We spend at least a paragraph going back and forth about stealing, borrowing, etc. a fictional character in your head. I think it qualifies us both as insane to normal people. :P Oh well. *grins*
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From ANON - guest on October 01, 2014
i can't wait until the next chapter i swore if i didn't have to got o school the next day i would have just stayed up all night to finish reading it!!~ =D
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From Kit-kit on September 30, 2014
Awesome chapter. Glad the heat went well. Love to see what happens next
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From ANON - solitare1 on September 30, 2014
What can I say, another perfect chapter. I love how inuyasha won't let the black dog ruin his chance for happiness. Sees is gonna have to do something about old kags and soon I think.

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